Ben 10: I Don't Want to Be a Hero

There are still so many episodes to come when the juvenile server is launched, such as the seasons when Tian Xiaoban and Luke are paired up, and the seasons after Xiaowen grows up, and other parallel universes can be written. The author continues to update. You can't just ignore your copy of Harry Potter. This Young Hacker is so good, it would be a pity to stop updating it.

When I think of heroes, I think of Yu-Gi-Oh! The designs have very good effects, are clearly written, and are quite handsome. I feel that the author is writing very fast, and it feels like it is about to be finished. The pace is too fast and the content is too short. This is a common problem in fan fiction. If you write too fast, you won't be able to write later. Bai Zichuang can't keep up with the pace. Try to write it longer and highlight the details. The pace is too fast. After the meeting There will be big problems in the interview. I won't be able to add anything when I want to write about it. I need to review and watch the Young Hacker animation. Don't write too fast. You can write about the changes in the character's form and personality. Well, I feel that there is basically no change or breakthrough in the mentality of the protagonist. Well, how to describe it? I don't know if the author has read it. Well, the second part of Yu-Gi-Oh!'S Ten Generations of Yujo Castle uses a hero deck to change the mentality and grow. Okay, I've said it before, this sentence doesn't count. In short, the protagonist has a mentality and psychological growth and change. If he is always invincible or there are some things that cannot highlight the main character characteristics, the most perfect one is also the most imperfect one. In summary, the author writes too fast, and the core article is very short. Fan fiction is easy to write, but it is not easy to write. It is easy to write because there are animations, comics, and various plots. The author can directly follow it. However, if you want to add the protagonist to the plot, you cannot be like a passerby, or be invincible and meaningless. Although it is perfect, it is not perfect. The greatest perfection is the most imperfect. People's mental journey and growth are different and must be highlighted, otherwise the character will easily become dull. What you like and dislike, the characteristics of the character, know the characteristics, encounter some things, and undergo changes in mentality. Only in this way can the character's image be completely established, instead of being a passer-by and an invincible, too bland image in any plot. If it can meet these requirements, this fan novel can reach a score of 9:8. Of course, this is a huge problem. I am just a reader, not an author. I can only make these evaluations. If you ask me to write, I will definitely not be able to write it. I just read a lot of books similar to fan fiction and discovered the common problems of fan fiction. Some of them are just like the author's writing, which is not too ugly, but it does not meet the high requirements. Some fan novels are written directly as group portraits, almost separated from the protagonist. Some directly became harem novels, and some directly became romantic dramas. Fan fiction is easy to write but not easy to write, that's the problem.

没有意义不明抢原版 小班 小纹 细分的原创人物 而且还有终极异形篇章 小纹也成功拿下 遇到过的是我女生 都对主角有好感 就是到了终极异形篇章的时候 其他女性戏份基本没多少 也没有什么日常 建议多加点 主角和小纹 的日常之类的 整体非常好的一本书 就是前期可能有点枯燥 比那些意义不明乱加原创什么人物 世界融合 小班性转 一些猎奇 抢原版人物戏份 的东西 好的 不能再好

哥哥若是不想更新，直说便是了，何必这样敷衍弟弟[眼含热泪]倒显得弟弟自作多情，也是了，哥哥身子骨弱，多多休息就是了[眼含热泪]弟弟如此催哥哥，倒是弟弟的不对，伤了哥哥的身子

It's very interesting, but the update is too slow, the chapters are too few, and the number of words is too small. The author should write 24 hours a day, and eating and drinking is a must. Except for having diarrhea, you can just sit on the chair. Author, you only need to eat and drink. Come on! Don't stop writing. It's not enough to read. It's not enough to read at all!!! [Petrochemical]

The most comfortable book I have read on Tomato so far is Young Hackers. More points.

1、对于这本书，从我个人认为还是挺好的。作者大大大体按原著主线走，主角目前为止还未遇到什么敌手，一路无敌到底，让我看得很爽。 2、没有特别地压制小班的戏份。主要是男主为主，小班为辅。 3、作者大大文笔还好，虽然有时描写有点奇怪，用“（欣喜）”这样子有点像对话小说的描写方式描写 4、作者大大较积极地与读者交流，从而在文中穿插相应剧情。 5、总体来说，虽然文笔方面有点奇怪，但可以接受，且剧情上主角无敌，一路爽到底。值得在无聊的时候，或Ben10同人文书荒时看

It is very well written, and can be said to be the best among hacker fanfics over the years. The heroine includes Xiaowen, her childhood sweetheart, the cursed witch Hope, and the sex transfer Abedo who has a love watch, but it is a pity that the original plot of the love watch is It is Abedo's love that generates his will. He breaks away from Abedo and becomes a sex shifter and directly kills Abedo. The plot here is that Abedo fell in love with the protagonist when he was still a little female frog. I hope to write more TieTian Shura field plots. It's good to watch.

It's okay, but the constant presence of parentheses in the text affects the reading. The author actually doesn't need to explain so much, which makes people feel separated when reading. Others are just some small bugs and nothing serious. Overall it's okay, keep up the good work

Overall, it's really good. I've been following this book for a long time, and it's really well written. This fanfic is very well written, but I stopped updating it for a while, but I still came back to read it once it was updated. I just didn't expect it to end too quickly. After all, I haven't written about comprehensive evolution yet. Those, but anyway, among the young hacker fanfics I have read, he ranks first. This novel that I have been chasing for a long time has finally been completed, but it is still a bit regretful. After all, it has to be completed for some reasons, so let's finish it and look forward to the author's new book [Thoughts]