Mecha Proof God

The writing style is actually quite good, but I am too lazy. There is only one update a day, and it often breaks... Although this is the name of a mecha, it feels like the combination of flesh and blood and machinery like EVA, which is quite novel. The disadvantage is that the author rarely names the supporting characters, and sometimes I don't know who they are after reading too fast. Come on, I hope this book will get better and better [Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute] I originally wanted to give it five stars, but... Your update... Forget it is four stars... Still very beautiful

It looks good now, the writing is good, I hope I can stick with it

The author writes very well [like] but no one reads it. [Cover face]

You successfully made me see my reflection in this book, so I give you a 5⭐️. (Will there really be dawn after dark night?)

The writing style is very good and the writing is very fluent. The male protagonist's character is perfectly in line with the mentality of a teenager in the second stage of middle school. In many cases, the stream of consciousness is larger than the normal description. The important point is that the writing is very detailed, and the details, rhythm and image are always connected. The climax will be written very carefully, using a lot of pen and ink. The more details there are, the slower the pace will be, giving people time to feel the emotions the author wants to express. Maybe for the audience of Tomato, this way of writing will not be popular, but believe me, you must read it patiently, it will subvert your understanding of Internet articles. Finished spreading flowers! Looking forward to the next book!

@Mot Author, did you borrow "Red Dragon"?

It's so beautiful, but I don't know why no one watches it.

The writing is good, the ideas are clear, and the readers have a strong sense of involvement. The main reason is that there are no rough illustrations, and some places cannot be imagined. Pure sweetness without any knife [you taste it carefully]

Ok ok ok

I am the only one who reads Xiaotian articles. I came in after seeing that the introduction contained pure sweetness without swords. It turned out to be pure swords without sweetness, right [smile]