I Pretend to Be a Cultivator, and the Curtain of the Sky Deceives the Ancients

I've just read Chapter 36, looking forward to the follow-up. The plot in a modern city is so cliche, I thought it was back in the 2000s, with gangsters provoking the appearance of beautiful girls in the class or something. . .

It's very interesting. As long as the author insists on no heroine or no virgin, I will keep following it. But can you write less about the appearance of the Dragon Girl and the Bone Lady, as well as the shock of the ancients? There is always a feeling that the protagonist is in yy

I feel like it would be better to describe more ancient content. The modern content gave me a feeling of déjà vu.

The content is very innovative and much better than other Tianmu articles with the same content. The author updates it every day.

Come on! Author. Don't support you like your last Chaofan. [Cool] I can only say it is too watery.

Modern people do not lie to ancient people [cover their faces]. I hope that I can create a cultivator for each time and space. After all, I have made it up. If it doesn't come true, I will be slapped in the face. Let's apply the concept of parallel time and space. After all, the history of each time and space changes, and the protagonist's time and space will definitely not change. I feel like the history of this 👆🏻dragon's vest can be reviewed a little further. As expected, the author is too timid and lacks imagination. The existence of the dragon's vest in the Xia Dynasty can be pushed forward, to the newly dug up Yu Dynasty eight thousand years ago. If the author is imaginative enough, he can try to imagine the ancient Tang Dynasty before the Yu Dynasty in advance [Star] and try to collect 10,000.

The author writes well, but I hope the article says that Li Bai and others can become immortals, otherwise it will be too embarrassing. Anyway, the theory of parallel time and space, and how the demons danced in ancient times, will not affect the modern protagonist's self-centeredness. Keep up the good work (ง •̀_•́)ง

The modern plot can be covered in one or two chapters, and the main focus is on ancient times. If that doesn't work, you can write some plots that travel through parallel ancient times.

The idea is still novel. It will be more fun if people like Li Bai are allowed to practice fake things later. Sorry, in reality I am extremely disgusted with those selfish people. In the novel, I can't stand the protagonist who is extremely selfish and destroys human nature and family affection [Chigua]

Chapter 7: Poisonous Zhu Yuanzhang talks about our family. Is Zhu Yuanzhang a eunuch?

It's good to read as a casual article

This is a cool article, the main fun part is making videos to fool the ancients, there is a kind of innocent coolness [making faces] It seems to be much more enjoyable than the modern live-streamed articles about cultivating immortals, because modern people will definitely have doubts about cultivating immortals. Once such a plot appears, many authors do not grasp it well, which leads to the early stage not looking exciting enough, the data is bad, and in the end they can only cut the book. Two updates a day is too little. It is recommended to update ten times a day.

In fact, longevity is not a ridiculous nonsense. On the contrary, longevity is normal. You must know that in the universe, the only ones with short life spans are living creatures. On the contrary, most materials in the universe are long-lived. I think this may depend on the material structure. The vitality of carbon-based organisms is low, but the material will not be destroyed, but will only change its form. Even if a person dies eventually, it just changes the form of the material. It is still not destroyed, but it has no soul. The so-called soul should be an organization and arrangement of matter. So simply put, if one could analyze each person's material arrangement and then fuse it with a non-silicon-based body, immortality should be possible. Or it should be possible to change one's own physical structure through external force, such as turning into a stone person, a vegetable person, etc.

It's so cool, it's just a really cool article. It's so cool. But I have to admit that there are a lot of flaws, and they mainly focus on the protagonist. I really think the author could write another similar book, taking the essence of this book and discarding the dross. The current problem is that the protagonist is too self-pleasant. The modern protagonist is almost always self-pleasure, while the ancient protagonist's own voice is also self-pleasure most of the time. Self-pleasure is a taboo! The author had clearly written a successful book before this book, but for some reason, he was still able to write a protagonist whose existence was a poisonous point. It's really a shame to open another book. The author is simply gifted with great writing skills. As long as the next book is written well, he will really become a god.

They are all very good. The only thing is that the protagonist moves a little bit. The author writes about each dynasty. After reading it, I really can't stand it [crazy] Too much nonsense

How should I put it... I can only say, author, are you good at magic [laughing], even I was almost fooled by you [laughing], I am a Taoist! Hahahahaha... Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you, you will definitely become the Immortal Emperor [laughing evilly]

All the wonderful thoughts are wonderful, the music is wonderful, and I don't miss Shu. It is active and interesting. The plot is exciting. It feels great to control from behind

You can skip reading this book, or you can read it again every few days and a half. You may not have seen the chapter you want to read yet [laughing and crying]

What chapter are you guys on? Li Bai hasn't entered into spiritual practice yet? [Cover face][cover face] Okay, okay, how long do you need water? Now that I'm convinced, do I still need to drink two more Li Bais to become an immortal? Or eight?

Looking back, Wang Ye used the Moonlight Treasure Box to go to the Yongle period. He said to Zhu Di who looked like Teacher Wang, "King Wudang, please pay homage to the Heavenly Master of Longhu Mountain." After that, Longhu Mountain under the sky was shocked [sneer laugh][smirk]

It's okay, the steps are too big, it's not good to go back to Duyuan. The more I look at it, the more outrageous it becomes [laughing awkwardly]

This is the only book that I have been able to read in the past six months. It has novel ideas and poor writing, but it is still readable. The combat aspect is slightly lacking, but the content about fooling the ancients is still good. I let myself go a little bit more than 100 chapters ago, but luckily it didn't crash.

Come on, author, I have read your book before and I think you have unique potential. You are not limited to appearance, but only care about joy and romance. It is quite good. I will continue to read it. However, if you want people in the novel to think that there is a heroine, it is best to play the role yourself, otherwise it will feel like you can't grasp it. This was the case with the last book. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

Wow, it's been over three months. Author, why don't you update it? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Are you just leaving this book aside to grow grass? It's really wonderfully written! Sigh, how about I try to write a similar celestial story about cultivating immortals and cheating [rolls eyes]

It's funny to say that I am also a half-experienced online writer. Of course I also like to read novels. I particularly envy and admire this kind of writing that makes people read it immersively and passionately without feeling boring. Okay, no more complaining, long story short, the author will update soon! Also, is there a foreshadowing that was missed? Shouldn't there be a follow-up to the little boy Li Bai saved?

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In fact, I think the best perspective for this kind of book is to write it from the perspective of Tiandao, because if you bring in the protagonist, you will think that the protagonist is a selfish person halfway through reading, and Tiandao is not so repulsive to read. Of course, if it's a cool article, just pretend I didn't say it.

Okay, okay, it's easy to read and has a good sense of rhythm. Before I knew it, I had finished eating three squirrels. This kind of book is interesting, more interesting than time travel. It would be great if time travel really happens later. After all, pretending to be sexy in a video is not as comfortable as pretending to be sexy in real life.

It suits my taste very well and is very similar to the novels I imagined before. It's just that the number of updates each time is too few, and some plots are a bit watery and can be omitted. The author must not give up, be more oily [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

I would like to give the author some comments and suggestions. The author Confucius and Laozi can add some follow-up to this paragraph. After Confucius and Laozi finished fighting, Lin Li had very little left and was about to be exhausted. He decided not to fight the ascension. Then Confucius flew first. Laozi paused for a while, waved his hands, and rubbed hundreds of skills and swordsmanship. Most of them were scattered to Dozens of Kung Fu and Sword Techniques have been left in various parts of China for those who are destined to do so, including the Golden Bell Shield, Thunder Techniques and the like, with magic spells cast on them. Only Taoists and people who believe in Taoist ideas have the opportunity to find and learn it [note]. The Confucian people who saw this part of the sky were completely dumbfounded and collapsed [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] I have an idea that makes Wu Zetian sweat. Didn't Wu Zetian steal Li Tang's kingdom? You can add a paragraph later. Wu Zetian stole Li Tang's kingdom. After becoming bad handsome, I wanted to take action, but after thinking about Li Chunfeng's last words in the forest, I held back. I tried my best not to interfere in the affairs of the human dynasty, but in secret Protecting the Li Tang royal family who was under house arrest by Wu Zetian, if Wu Zetian did not return the throne to Li Tang, he would take action or the Wu family. If he wanted to take action against the Li Tang royal family, he would personally kill Wu Zetian and the Wu family of the Wu family and Wu Tang. When I saw this paragraph in the title, I instantly sweated and panicked. Isn't it interesting? Of course, what is described here is that the commander's strength at that time was that one person could defeat a thousand people or hundreds of people, and he could fly over walls and walls. "The above is purely a suggestion to the author."