One Person************

@G Author, I think we can go straight to 'one' beyond the inner scene. I believe that one exists in everything, so every individual is actually within one. If you can see yourself intuitively through the inner scene, you can directly change reality by always interfering with other "ones". Isn't this the way of immortality?

Good! There is no problem with the plot, I think it is okay. In the description of spiritual practice, Queshi uses a lot of Taoist knowledge. It seems that the author has done research and is not the kind of fan who writes just to gain popularity of the subject. I give you a thumbs up.

Quite wow, as expected of an old writer, the characters and plot are well understood. I just hope that Mr. Wang will have a good ending. There are many words and paragraphs, and it also has a bit of a gay meaning. The most important thing is water. After half a month of training, I thought that after beating Zhang Zhiwei, I thought I would become the number one among the younger generation. The two supporting characters can only compete for one chapter, but it is no longer the same as the original one.

The rhythm is tight, you can write something of your own, don't write the combat power too high, you can rely on Gaowu (Wind and Cloud, Shattered Void), the reason is (Immortal) is also a legend in the original work.

A very good fan novel. I have rarely written reviews for novels, but this novel is very good. In my opinion, he is not inferior to the previous one. The navy can deal with Whitebeard. He really dares to kill.

Yes, cheating is not a problem

Not bad, quite interesting

Still very good!

Nice and abstract

Not bad, not bad, really good

It's ok, the style and so on, it's a pretty good fanfic

A good novel, but not enough to read

It's so good that I read it all night and finished it straight away

Not bad, good work, author!

It's nothing, you can see it if you're stuck.

Very nice, come on

It's beautiful, and the details are well described.

Good for me

What happened? I was banned immediately.

It feels pretty good, why is it blocked [face covering]

💅🏻Hey, it's very beautiful, why is it gone?

No, I kept raising it, why did it disappear again?

It's so beautiful. I found another one-person fanfic.