Star Iron************

Hmm... How should I put it? In terms of combat power settings, the plot hasn't started much yet, so try not to brag too much about Bengtie Zhongli's combat power (of course, I'm not overly belittling Bengtie Zhongli's combat power, but I still feel doubtful about dominating one side). Unless the individual strength is raised to a very high level, unless it reaches the stars, star systems, etc., I feel that dominating one side is barely acceptable. If Zhongli was born purely based on his acting template and the Iron-Banging cosmology, it would not be difficult for him to get up to the level of power with the help of the Star Explosion System. But it's basically around this strength. (If it's too high, I feel it's outrageous. After all, it's still acting) By the way, don't think that individual star-exploding strength is low. The gold content is also very high. The Bengtie Universe world view can explode stars and reach the level of exploding galaxies because the technology is also very high. The imaginary number pulse cannon has just been developed for 24 planets, as well as the galaxy-destroying bomb of the Legion of Destruction. The power of technology is particularly powerful. Individuals who can reach the explosive star level are already very rare. In many cases, they are not able to explode on a regular basis. Zhu Mingxianzhou, the second piece of information that has been released, currently shows that Wen has the power of a star (the Emperor Sui is used as a power source, and there is no problem in self-destructing a star [laughter]) When you come out, you must be snobbish! When you encounter a family, you have to hide away. Be careful to summon the Infinite Captain for you, and directly fight the Star God on your behalf. In terms of plot, regardless of combat power, the author's description of Zhongli is somewhat lacking. To me, it feels like he is wearing Zhongli's skin and doing what he wants, without Zhongli's maturity and special control over the overall situation. What? You said that the template is Morax, not Zhongli, but even Morax is not what the author wrote. Even the author's description of Morax is too lacking. It just looks a bit different, I hope the author can write the charm of Morax/Zhongli. At the very least, it's a pretense, and it's necessary to create this look, using a plug-in that acts as a template, but it doesn't look like the original owner. Judging from the plot, it doesn't even look like acting. Many people just wanted to see Zhongli's charm, but it didn't look like it and they called it acting. From the perspective of combat power, this role-playing is not about waiting for time to increase in combat power. The more the role-playing looks like, the stronger the power. This is the most basic part of the role-playing module. The key is to be like the person you play.

It's okay, but it feels like the title of the book is not appropriate to use a role play, it feels more like a template of Morax. After all, the protagonist has breached the contract more than once. Thinking about Morax breaching the contract is simply OOC. Apart from this, everything else feels fine so far.

The plot is well written, but I have to correct that the displayed destiny in the game and the plot destiny are two different things. Without mentioning other things, let's just say that in the Hook game, she shows the destiny of destruction, but the plot is very clear that she is a child under 12 years old. The destiny in the game is used to distinguish the role of the character. For example, the abundance of the hunting single target is the health-recovering nanny.

How can I put it? I haven't seen much of it, and I feel like his character Zhongli is like a loser.

The plot is not bad, but at present, apart from the shield, I don't feel that it has anything to do with Morax or Zhongli. Just treat it as the original star god.

It's very interesting. You like it for me. Please give me more updates, author! [Please update]

To avoid a surprise for everyone, what he wrote here actually means, well, it's still a stone.

It's not enough. It's such a good novel that I read it in one sitting in the middle of the night. I was still awake after reading it. The writing is good. Although the title of the book is Zhongli, it has nothing to do with Zhongli. However, this is not a detraction, but a plus, giving people a bright feeling.

Very interesting, the plot is novel

Author! Get up and update [angry][angry][smile]

Could the author please stop being so short?

@Navihat come and see it, it's super cool

It's so good that it will explode if you look at it one more time [Cherish carefully]

Very nice, I like it very much

The plot can also be encouraging

I want to ask, is it a single heroine or a harem?

It's okay. Some of them are different from those in the introduction, and there are many typos. I hope the author can correct them. [Cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

Okay, okay, it's pretty good, good luck to the author!

Very good, very interesting. The emotional aspect is not handled very well, and it feels fragmented. I'd better write less. [Laugh]

Like it very much. Why do you have to make up five words?

It's beautiful. It's great to see my Zhong and Ying Shuangchu.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I'll give you a call, Mr. Zhong

Very good. Hope to continue.

It looks good, I love it, I like it [laughs evilly]

Very good, keep up the good work.

Miracle Walker is still in the jungle

I need to correct some typos, but the book is still good.

You, the author, I only give you one word, 6

Why did I keep it for a while when the book was gone?