I Won't Be a Push-Over Just Because I Turned into a Girl

It's okay. The author said that the world view is very large. There are three volumes, which are probably the human world, the spiritual world and the immortal world. At the beginning, he became a martial artist, and later he cultivated immortality. It is almost such a world view. As for the heroine and the hero, I feel fine. As for changing marriages, don't worry about it so much. After all, there are still so many same-sex couples in real life. In the past, men could release themselves. How to deal with it physiologically after becoming a girl? The author has done a good job of writing about the daily life with the male protagonist, as well as the impact on the body, and the timing of the change in the female protagonist's thoughts is just right. Since the author has only written a little bit and the outline has not been finished yet, I can't summarize anything. You readers can read it for yourself. But I really hope that the author can keep writing. At least it won't be unfinished. It is about cultivating immortals, traveling through time, and getting married. I'm afraid the author can't grasp it.

Change of Marriage, the writing style is excellent, and it is a bit of a literary novel. There is almost no description of women's clothing and female body, but the description of female degradation is adequate. The heroine seems very brainless at the beginning. As an adult who travels through time, she should respond quickly, especially when she travels to the ancient times of high martial arts. In many places, especially in the first few dozen chapters, the scene changes are rather abrupt, and the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are not smooth enough. The rest is okay, and the interactions are well written, but unfortunately the sense of fragmentation is really strong. The heroine's psychological description at the beginning was not well thought out, such as the goal of coming to a different world, and how to plan to become stronger after having the system. Since the task requires the male protagonist to interact with each other, let nature take its course. The female protagonist's fall was not smooth enough, and her awkward mentality was not handled well, which is a pity. The description of the battle scenes is okay, the writing style in other aspects is quite good, and many side descriptions are good. Also, after the female protagonist has a relationship with the male protagonist, the male protagonist is obviously taken away from her and wants to kill the female protagonist. At that time, the female protagonist's emotions are already in place. She shouldn't not describe any distress or discomfort. This way, there will be no sense of empathy and it will feel very fake. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the new book. The writing style is still good. There are too many things that need to be changed if this book is to be continued, so I might as well start a new book. Come on!

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work!

Not bad, not bad. I am willing to give you good reviews 😠

There is still a lot of room for improvement.

Give me a five-star review!

It's okay so far, looking forward to the follow-up [top post]