Lost You Forever: Xiang Liu and Xiao Yao

Yaoliu's CP article, a different version of "Sauve Acacia", with an ending that fills the meaning of the original work! The highlight moment of the whole article is "Xiang Liu's nine swords merged into one to repel the Xi Yan army", a scene in which a small number defeats a large number. It is considered a minor scene in this article! Worth seeing! It can be seen that the young author has written with great care, but the writing style is a bit immature, not quite like the fantasy style of fairy tales. It feels a bit like a knight-errant, but the age and calculation are confusing~ There are certain scenes in the early stage that are too "stinky", which affects the aesthetics of the article. Ah Nian's beating was too severe! (A little bloody) King Haoling's strength, bravery and wisdom were not reflected, but he felt a little lacking in IQ 😂 Xiang Liu's character has changed too much, talks too much, and is a bit possessed by "Jing"! "Killing himself" for Xiaoliu [what] The biggest pleasure in reading this article is "catching bugs". The details are inconsistent. I wonder if I forgot to write them down. It's ridiculous 🤭 Both life and death turn into butterflies, a bit like "Butterfly Lovers"! Later, they were picked up and brought back to life by someone who had treated Xiaoliu before. They both lost their memory and had an intelligence of 3 years old. It's a bit funny 🤭 Xiao Liu gets married to Lao Mu. This is a different plot in dozens of articles I've read so far~ It's okay to read as a bedtime story to pass the time! This may be a bit hard for experienced original writers to accept! However, I still thank the author for his hard work in coding. Although the ending is hasty, it is still a bit satisfying that the crazy cousin did not unify the wilderness! I wish you can write better and better in the future, come on! The above is just my personal opinion. If you have different opinions, you are right! I wish you all a happy reading😊

It's great to watch, but I personally feel that Yaoliu's emotional scenes are a bit lacking.

The writing is very concise and not procrastinating, which is quite good.

Well written! Looking forward to the continuation!

I don't know how to put it: it's just very beautiful! In short, it's not a loss if you fall into the trap [I learned it] [I learned it]