Collapse of Iron**********

How can I put it? The book is still good to read. If there were less so-called storytelling and exploration in MC, you could actually focus more on these important things, such as what the Black Tower can obtain in MC and what MC can bring to the characters in Bengtie. The same goes for storytelling. If it is useful, write more about it. If it is useless, just mention it in a few sentences. At present, both of these things are based on the surroundings. When writing around Bengtie, you can't reduce Bengtie's plot significantly just because you have to write the MC and the storyteller. And now that the protagonist is invincible, what is your motivation for writing the book? Is it to save regrets and protect the beauty without interfering with the growth of the protagonists, or to enjoy the moment while saving the protagonist group and take in a few girls, or some other interesting thing. You have to find a direction before you can write. Come on [like]

Can you update two chapters a day? This is really too few and not enough to read.

In this book, you can not only read the Broken Iron Strategy, but also other novels

I especially like the live broadcast part. There are too many second-generation live broadcast rooms now, and I am tired of watching them. The live storytelling like the one written by the author feels very novel and I like it very much. Whether it is live playing games, live storytelling, or live broadcasting for people to play MC, it is very good. Unfortunately, I don't know why the live broadcast was watered down later. Maybe others don't like to watch it and the author watered it down. Anyway, I quite like it, but it's a pity that it has been watered down and I can't see it anymore.

I can draw a galaxy It's too good, it's a bullshit, we can't be saved

Is there any Him? I want to see Him[Explore]

It's good to watch. You can write less or not write about stories like this. After all, it has nothing to do with the characters. I think it's good to live stream characters playing games. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

Not bad. It's well written. It's not the kind of mindless writing.

One thing to say, it's really good. It looks quite novel and interesting. The author may have added some other games or something. Then I complained about the fact that reading novels in novels is really contrary to Tiangang [smile]

Cheers for a very special author!

Can the author make the protagonist perfect the story? Please

Okay, give it a try, it's a treasure, [laughs crookedly]

Although I can only see more than 20 chapters so far. But the quality is exceptionally good.

Come on come on come on come on

I think it looks pretty Back to topic

Come on, good writing

Very nice, to my liking

It's so beautiful, but these few pictures are not enough

Come on, come on, come on!

Looks good, five stars

Not bad, still very beautiful

Good looking, love watching, recommended

Needless to say, full marks

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good

I also want to see a mod with epic battles and miraculous weapons [crying][crying][crying]

It's nice to look at, but it's not that there are a few people. I think it's good [what], come on, author!

The content is very good, but it's a bit lacking.

Not bad, at least I think it's well written.

Five-star praise. Great support for the author!