HP*****

So far it looks pretty good, but the emotional line is relatively slow, the male protagonist and Si Jiao have just met, which is a bit of a love at first sight series. Draco had a lot of fun getting along with them, he really looked like a pampered young master. It's not that unruly and domineering kind of thing, it feels a bit too rude. Overall it looks good The emotional line has come out, it's good-looking, I love watching it, the CH content doesn't account for a lot, more of it appears in the extras, it's pretty good-looking, but it's easy to get reviewed hahahaha. Biscuit has written twice about the extras and all of them have been reviewed. I seriously doubt that Biscuit has some good stuff that he hasn't taken out yet! Extra, the author's omnipotent ordering link.

A novel with two male protagonists by Jue Juezi. I really love this magic and Harry Potter. Who knows this linkage? I love it to death. The two male protagonists are locked together and will be sweet for a lifetime! ! [Adoration][Adoration]

This book deserves five stars. The author has great control over the rhythm of the plot and can arouse the readers' emotions to a great extent, making the characters in the book come to life. Judging from the writing style, the author should also have a great understanding of Western literary styles. It is very good. I hope you can continue to work hard!

The author uses delicate writing to describe a magical world full of fantasy for us. The protagonists meet, get to know, and fall in love with each other in this mysterious world. Every emotional turn is handled just right, making people feel like they are in it and feel their joys, sorrows, and joys. The integration of magical elements adds countless wonderful colors to this love. From gorgeous magic showdowns to heartwarming magic healing, magic is not only a symbol of power, but also a catalyst for their emotional warming.

It's particularly beautiful, especially the author's description of the details. It's so sweet, the pull between Snape and his students in Harry Potter! Turn accidents into habits, possessiveness, love at first sight, so beautiful, highly recommended!

It has a very novel subject matter and a unique setting. It is the first time I have read this type of novel. The description of the male protagonist Elvia, the tone of the elf Ina, and the conversation with the black magician are all accompanied by a mysterious atmosphere. It makes me want to keep following it. The author will work hard to make more updates [currently in development] [currently in development] [currently in development]

I have to say that the author's writing skills are very good, allowing readers to quickly understand the background of this world even if they have not read Harry Potter. The character portrayal of the male protagonist is also very good. The story of this book is twists and turns, innovative, and the protagonist is well described and very personal. I recommend everyone to read it!

"Even if you are trapped in a high tower because of love, you will still be greedy for the prosperity of the world." I really like this sentence. The dual male protagonists of this book are unique, love at first sight, and infinite preference, which is a joy to read.

I really like it! So good🉑, I fell in love at first sight, and love at first sight lasts forever. Sometimes love comes quickly, I am persistent for love, sweetness develops naturally, the writing is solid and skillful, and this unique novel is a treasure! A particularly good romance novel about two men!

It's been a long time since I've seen a story like this. It's about two male protagonists. The plot is exciting, the pace is moderate, and it's very comfortable to read. The protagonists have very good personalities. The young master is arrogant and cute. I also like the description of magic. It's a very interesting article.

It's very comfortable to watch, my eyes are happy, I can't put it down, the magical magic, the beautiful and sweet love makes my heart warm after reading it, the writing is very special! It is a rare good article in Tomato, the storyline is particularly attractive, and every chapter is very good

Western, I really loved watching the two-male protagonist, and it also has magical elements, which is really cool. The long-lasting love is really enviable, and I really like the character Harry in it.

I stumbled upon this novel, and I found a treasure. The writing of the two male protagonists is really good, and the author's writing style is wonderful, and the details are vividly described, making people feel like they are immersed in the novel. Love really only needs to flow slowly and slowly. [Love][love][love]

This Harry fanfic seems pretty good so far. It's more western, different from the ones I've read before, and relatively new. The emotional line is of a thin and flowing type. I really think the young master is so cute, lively and brilliant, but also a bit too honest. I look forward to the content that follows.

Judging from this type of dual male protagonists and this kind of subject matter, well, it is rare to be able to attract people at the first glance, but when you look at the middle, this book is different. It's not the kind that has no bottom line. Although it is said that it is a preference, it is also ignorant and gradually progresses.

The old man is so handsome! It's the first time I've seen this in a different style. I'm very surprised. Let's just say [like] [like]. The ignorant feelings, the possessiveness, ah ah~ who understands [love], and the description of magic is also very interesting. It's really fascinating!

Sure enough, there is no reason to like it. There is no bottom line of love and respect. My heart is filled with warmth after watching it, and the corners of my mouth are blooming with joy [Adoration] [Adoration]. The two men are so in love with each other that I can't extricate myself after watching it. It's amazing [Like] [Like]

It turns out to be an original male protagonist. The relationship was ignorant at first, but as it slowly warmed up, everything became sweeter. I love the two male protagonists the most. They are very successful in character creation. For Harry Potter fans, they are so friendly and I really love them.

But don't be too good at writing. The sweet love is not abusive at all. The two male protagonists should not be too in love [admiration] [admiration]. There is also a magical element, which is very magical. There is love and magic. The writing is superb and I call the author!! !

It is a particularly interesting story about two men. The main reason is that they are very different. The two fell in love at first sight. They were ignorant at first, but then they became deeply involved in it. The bottomless preference is very fascinating and eye-catching!

Very nice. I hope the author will work hard! Please write a few more pictures, there are simply not enough to read!

When will it be updated again [crying][crying], I really like this book

A particularly good-looking novel about two male protagonists. They are possessive for no reason and have no bottom line preference. They slowly fall into a well-woven trap and turn accident into habit. It's so sweet! The emotional line is long, the main focus is a long-lasting flow, strong recommendation, strong recommendation

This fanfic is really good to read, and the content of this novel also contains magical elements. The love at first sight when the two met was still confusing, but it turned out to be super sweet and very interesting!

This kind of novel is really beautiful. It describes the mystery of a magical world at the beginning, and starts a plan that makes me very curious. It is my favorite type of novel. The author will give it a thumbs up [Like][Like][Like]

This is the most interesting book I have ever read on Rotten Tomatoes. The description of the various strange behaviors of the protagonist Elvia in the beginning attracted me to continue reading, and also made me particularly interested in the subsequent story. The more I read, the more I want to read it, and I really want to keep following it [Top post] [Top post] [Top post]

I really like the progressive rhythm of emotions in this story, not the kind of ups and downs, but the kind of gradual progress. It's not the kind of ups and downs, big openings and closings, but a very sincere and delicate description.

OMG! I found a treasure again. Even if I am trapped in a high tower because of love, I will still be greedy for the prosperity of the world. This couple is different. It is the kind of sweet story. There is no bloody plot. It looks pleasing to the eye and is very enjoyable [Thinking][Thinking]

This fanfic looks pretty good, a bit biased towards Western literature, and the novel is particularly sweet. The love between them is very beautiful, the setting is very novel, and there is a strong sense of immersion. It is immersive, as if you are in a magical world [lick screen][lick screen]

I love it so much~ It's very transparent and sweet, the kind of love that falls in love at first sight and slowly becomes a habit! It really pokes my heart [love] [love] It's so good-looking, so enjoyable, the magical world is full of mystery, wonderful and interesting, it's such an excellent article.