Naruto: I'll Launch the Fourth Great Ninja War

The writing is okay, but I really think that the one who used Kamui to twist Itachi's head and then Tomigaoka's head, after all, Kamui's long-range attack will not be noticed. Kakashi used Kamui to twist Didara's hand because his sight was biased, and Didara didn't notice it before his hand was broken.

So far, it's pretty good, and the foreshadowing is in place, and I don't think there's anything wrong with Obito's death. I think it's normal to kill Obito with mental arithmetic or not. Fugaku can be regarded as a qualified clan leader in the end. I think Itachi's paranoia is quite consistent with the writing, and he is very decisive in killing and is not unkillable because of the follow-up plot? I think the use of other gods is quite unexpected and expected. Although Black Zetsu Danzo Obito's offline will affect the advancement of the plot, the protagonist also handles it just right. The next plot is to develop and train the clansmen, and then wait for Konoha to collapse and start the Ninja World War. The length may be a little shorter. If it is still too watery, I think it is good to go to unlimited flow. At present, the plot is good and the characters are consistent with the portrayal. The logic is also consistent. I hope to keep it up and work on it.

This is a very good innovation, but I don't know if there is an outline. I feel like I can't write 1 million words. I hope the author can continue to maintain the quality and write a long novel. Overall it's a very good novel

It's okay, except for Danzo, almost no named characters were killed.

Handling Itachi to new highs, I'm fucked

Why is it a eunuch? The plot is very good, smooth and not draggy. Spoilers below. The protagonist relies on his own advantage in the plot to win the power of the gods, and then kills Konoha indiscriminately. Finally, he leads some tribesmen to leave Konoha, seals the Black Lord, and so on.

Please lead the protagonist to quickly change his face to a spotted one.

You can be more decisive in killing and more ruthless in killing.

Surprisingly okay

It looks pretty good so far. I have changed some settings in some places. I think the changes are OK. Anyway, I enjoy it.