[The protagonist has a 'personality' + does not follow the ship + is not a pirate + is not a navy + summons eight crew members + selects a few crew members from the original drama + builds his own power in the later stage + the heroine is undecided + original devil fruit]
[Existing crew members: Xiong Er, Yan Shuangying, Xizhilang, Nami, Xiao Zizai, continuing to be updated]
[This book is also known as: One Piece: Kill, kill, kill, and make a bright future] [One Piece: Summon your partners, starting with Xiong Er]
Mengka: I don't know how to do it. Kill me as soon as you come up.
Evil Dragon: I'm not honest. I was eating hot pot and singing a song in Evil Dragon Paradise, and this guy suddenly came in, and then I was gone.
Bucky: I'm not honest. When I was robbing wealth, I was suddenly killed.
Crocodile: I'm not honest, I didn't provoke him either.
Enelu: I'm not honest. When I was eating apples on Sky Island, this guy rushed up and killed me.
Akainu: No, you have to kill them all? Bad, I became conservative and righteous.
Qing Pheasant: Regarding justice, I seem to have new thoughts.
Kizaru: No? Did he kill the Celestial Dragon again? What is he planning? I have to make another trip. It's really troublesome. When can I get a salary increase?
Empress Hancock: He looks so handsome when he kills the Draco.
Long: I really admire you for questioning the justice of the navy in front of the world.
Whitebeard: What a surprisingly strong junior.
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Nan Xing: I am really a good person. This world has forced me to become an executioner. It is not my fault, it is all the fault of this world.
Reader comments
It's okay. As far as the protagonist group is currently deployed in the Grand Route, there is no problem. You can also fight with one of the Shichibukai. There is a high chance of winning, but it is still not enough to fight against the three generals.
Because currently, the only person on the ship who is strong enough to fight against the three major opponents is Xi Zhi Lang, and he can only hold off one of them, leaving the other two with no one to fight against (this does not include Garp and Sengoku).
As for the Yonko and Boss Im in the New World, they are completely unbeatable.
If you want to go sideways in the world of One Piece, you must at least have continent-level characters sitting in charge, because the highest level of strength in One Piece is only the country.
Very novel! The portrayal of the protagonist is very good, and the writing style is also good and needs to be improved. But [thinking] the portrayal of other characters is much worse, the number of productions is too few, and the image is not full enough [awkward laughter] Anyway, come on~ write more details about other people's lives and the interaction between the protagonist group, otherwise it will feel like tool people [face covering]
I give myself a five-star rating, which is very reasonable [laughing evilly]
So far, everything is good, he kills decisively, he doesn't lick women when he sees them, and he strikes quickly and neatly. The change in the protagonist's mental state is a little abrupt and the transition is a bit fast. Later, the protagonist should have a clear direction and purpose, such as establishing an organization. After all, it has always been like this. It is not good to go and kill without clear direction and purpose. After all, a boatload of people cannot kill all the unjust people. The protagonist should also grow and slowly assume his responsibilities. As he gradually matures, he will become more calm and domineering, and gradually change the mental state he had not long after traveling back in time. Just some personal suggestions. If the author has his own outline, don't worry about it.
The subject matter is very novel and beautiful. The author should update it soon.
The protagonist is neither a navy nor a pirate. He mainly cleans up the scum on the sea. The crew includes Xiong Er, Yan Shuangying and Xi Zhilang.
I don't know where I come from, but I know I should clean this shit up!
You can watch it, but I feel like it makes no sense for the protagonist to continue killing like this.
The revolutionary army wants the civilians to resist on their own;
The navy will protect anyone it can, and follow the orders given by the superiors.
If a big pirate pays a protection fee, other small pirates will not dare to come over.
The Pirate King Luffy just beats someone up and he's avenging you. It's none of his business if the house breaks down.
The whole world is in chaos. The protagonist kills the nobles, but there are still evil people among the common people, and there is no change from before. Just like Luffy.
Update! ! ! ! ! ! ! Both hands must be grasped, both hands must be hard! If it doesn't work, the author should stop sleeping [laughing evilly]
If nothing else, I agree with Nanxing's philosophy.
Please update it soon, the writing is really good, I hope it can continue like this, no navy or pirates, I am who I am
Very good. The combat power has not collapsed.
Can I still watch One Piece without Pandaren? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Very good, non-toxic, ready to eat after opening the book
Support! Support! Support!
The subject matter is novel and beautiful. Needless to say
Update quickly, update quickly, today I collected a copy of One Piece, a copy of Naruto, the Naruto book, I update 5 chapters a day
Not bad, not bad, not bad,
Good reviews and support, well written
Come on, come on, come on
It seems that a person feels quite comfortable
It's rare for the protagonist to use a cold weapon gun
Different experiences, different colleagues,
Not bad, very pretty
... How about summoning a pie to appear? …………(I) always feel that there will be many wonderful stories when traveling with Paimeng.
I really like such a flesh-and-blood protagonist group.
Can't there be a beginning and an end?
It's okay, but the anime characters are too dramatic.
It's okay. As far as the protagonist group is currently deployed in the Grand Route, there is no problem. You can also fight with one of the Shichibukai. There is a high chance of winning, but it is still not enough to fight against the three generals. Because currently, the only person on the ship who is strong enough to fight against the three major opponents is Xi Zhi Lang, and he can only hold off one of them, leaving the other two with no one to fight against (this does not include Garp and Sengoku). As for the Yonko and Boss Im in the New World, they are completely unbeatable. If you want to go sideways in the world of One Piece, you must at least have continent-level characters sitting in charge, because the highest level of strength in One Piece is only the country.
Very novel! The portrayal of the protagonist is very good, and the writing style is also good and needs to be improved. But [thinking] the portrayal of other characters is much worse, the number of productions is too few, and the image is not full enough [awkward laughter] Anyway, come on~ write more details about other people's lives and the interaction between the protagonist group, otherwise it will feel like tool people [face covering]
I give myself a five-star rating, which is very reasonable [laughing evilly]
So far, everything is good, he kills decisively, he doesn't lick women when he sees them, and he strikes quickly and neatly. The change in the protagonist's mental state is a little abrupt and the transition is a bit fast. Later, the protagonist should have a clear direction and purpose, such as establishing an organization. After all, it has always been like this. It is not good to go and kill without clear direction and purpose. After all, a boatload of people cannot kill all the unjust people. The protagonist should also grow and slowly assume his responsibilities. As he gradually matures, he will become more calm and domineering, and gradually change the mental state he had not long after traveling back in time. Just some personal suggestions. If the author has his own outline, don't worry about it.
The subject matter is very novel and beautiful. The author should update it soon. The protagonist is neither a navy nor a pirate. He mainly cleans up the scum on the sea. The crew includes Xiong Er, Yan Shuangying and Xi Zhilang.
I don't know where I come from, but I know I should clean this shit up!
You can watch it, but I feel like it makes no sense for the protagonist to continue killing like this. The revolutionary army wants the civilians to resist on their own; The navy will protect anyone it can, and follow the orders given by the superiors. If a big pirate pays a protection fee, other small pirates will not dare to come over. The Pirate King Luffy just beats someone up and he's avenging you. It's none of his business if the house breaks down. The whole world is in chaos. The protagonist kills the nobles, but there are still evil people among the common people, and there is no change from before. Just like Luffy.
Update! ! ! ! ! ! ! Both hands must be grasped, both hands must be hard! If it doesn't work, the author should stop sleeping [laughing evilly]
If nothing else, I agree with Nanxing's philosophy.
Please update it soon, the writing is really good, I hope it can continue like this, no navy or pirates, I am who I am
Very good. The combat power has not collapsed.
Can I still watch One Piece without Pandaren? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
Very good, non-toxic, ready to eat after opening the book
Support! Support! Support!
The subject matter is novel and beautiful. Needless to say
Update quickly, update quickly, today I collected a copy of One Piece, a copy of Naruto, the Naruto book, I update 5 chapters a day
Not bad, not bad, not bad,
Good reviews and support, well written
Come on, come on, come on
It seems that a person feels quite comfortable
It's rare for the protagonist to use a cold weapon gun
Different experiences, different colleagues,
Not bad, very pretty
... How about summoning a pie to appear? …………(I) always feel that there will be many wonderful stories when traveling with Paimeng.
I really like such a flesh-and-blood protagonist group.
Can't there be a beginning and an end?
It's okay, but the anime characters are too dramatic.