HP Sijiao Slowly Approaches You

The writing is very good. In my opinion, the Sri Lankan teachings are at the best level. After reading it for four days in a row, I just felt that it was still unfinished. The book makes Si Jiao see clearly that people who really care about him will stand up for him, instead of just saying not to bully him like Lily, but what he gets in return is more serious bullying.

I really like the author's point of view in this book About the relationship between Sif and Lily Yes I like Sev, so I hate Gryffindors except Minerva, although I also don't like some Slytherins who promote pureblood supremacy. I haven't read the original novel, and I don't know whether Rowling's description of Sif's feelings for Lily is love, but I have always felt that Lily's so-called friendship towards Sif is very pale. In the eyes of Sif, whose family is broken up, Lily is the light that Sif is eager to catch in his childhood. However, I always thought that Sif is just a similar person in the Muggle world who understands the wizarding world in Lily's eyes. She is a child who grew up in love, and she likes passionate feelings, just like Pote. But the poisonous Sifu is obviously not this kind of person. Lily may have had some friendship with Sev when she first entered Hogwarts, but the disputes in the house, the hostility of her roommates and predators, and Lily's complete lack of understanding of Sev's situation, that poor friendship was too easily worn away. I never felt that she really regarded Sev as a friend. She would not put herself in Sev's shoes at all. Either Slytherin's interests come first or pure blood comes first. She asked Sev not to come into contact with people from the pure blood family. Yes, I always understood it as a request. She didn't even have a preference for Sif. My understanding of Lily's feelings for Sif is like the feelings of the two young masters in the Predators towards Pedilu (although I don't like or sympathize with him), and even Lily's trust in Sif is not as good as that of the Predators towards Pedilu, such as changing the secret keeper (although Pediru betrayed this trust). Sif is definitely not without some problems, but I like him. It is unreasonable and partial, so I don't like Gryffindors except Minerva.

It's a very interesting fanfic. The heroine grows up step by step and her relationship with Si Jiao gradually ferments. At this time, Si Jiao is still very young. When he is most repentant and longs for love and salvation, he meets a little girl who loves him wholeheartedly. The plot of Harry Potter is advanced a lot but not abrupt, and the character creation is also very full. It's a pity that not enough people read it. It's a very good and delicate fanfic.

Why is no one watching? Very good

It's a rare good article. I really like the first half. The characters are detailed and the plot is good. Then the writing is also good and doesn't feel dry. Now that I'm a little over 200, I feel that the narrative is quite grand. The new built-in logic and the newly added characters make me a little confused. Especially, I feel that the description of the protagonist and Sri Lanka is too small. It is gradually filled up by the plot, and then the progress is a bit slow, which makes it a bit boring for me. If you like the plot, you can really watch it.

Wuwu is so beautiful, and Rowena is really cute. I feel like the relationship between the two of them is developing relatively quickly. Big cheers for the author! [Blowing kiss]

Really well written!

Looks good, looks good, recommends, recommends

It's so nice and beautiful [Flowing Kiss] The author keeps it up [Flowing Kiss] [Adoration]

It is very well combined with the plot of the original work, and the love between Si Jiao and the heroine is also perfect.

It's beautiful, please give it a thumbs up to the author✊

Not bad, please give it a try.

I rarely read unfinished books. I couldn't stop this book once I started it. Please author keep up the update speed, because I like it!

It's really interesting. Is it over? Still want to see it

The writing is very beautiful, the logic is clear, and the emotional lines are clear.

It's really delicate, and it feels like it's being narrated

The heroine can risk her life just for curiosity

Many ideas are very innovative, especially teaching professors what a true friend should look like. But the author seemed to be unable to hold on to the overly grand narrative and layout, which made the description of the characters and plot seem a bit messy. I had to take notes halfway through [laughing and crying] In fact, if this article is written well, it should be a very good group portrait article, but in general, the flaws outweigh the advantages.

Very nice. Recommended! !

The author's writing style is very good. The love life between Si Jiao and the heroine is very sweet and happy.

A very cute heroine. I don't really like most heroines in HP fandoms because they are too high-profile. Who wouldn't like such a naturally cute girl?

Very nice! Sri Lanka can be pushed into it.

11. Added a new female character from the Malfoy family, and she is Black's girlfriend...