Gundam: Why Am I Being Taken Out Right After Arriving?
高达：怎么刚来就让我下线？
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 231k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
98Chapters
83Reads
11Listens
20.5kReads · all time
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Reader comments 1
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It's well written, but it's better to divide it into more paragraphs. The text shouldn't be too dense. At the same time, the plot is too tight. Slow down and don't be too hasty, otherwise you won't be able to write for long.