Arriving in Teyvat: From the Start, I Play Furina

It's a bit too radical, but it's really novel, give it a try

I like the first part very much. I give five stars to the first part, but the second part becomes too ordinary. I suggest there be less emotional scenes. The first part is really to my liking! It is recommended that the style be the same as before, and the author will greatly support it.

After reading it, the few Genshin Impact fanfics I can read are pretty good (maybe I have read too few Genshin Impact fanfics?). Except for the character of the protagonist, which is slightly problematic (I might be happier if Xiuyuan had this character? Of course, after he realizes his ideal), the writing and logic are all online, especially the current description of the Inazuma chapter. Apart from the perspective It has a fresh feel, and the story is also more delicate. To use the words I often heard before, the flesh and blood is really reflected vividly, both objectively and subjectively. It is relatively rounded, and the knife is not as abrupt as the ones I have seen before. The most important thing is that it is all connected, which is rare. Another thing is, is the emotional line of the girl a bit hasty? I hope the author will explain this process, at least I personally think it is necessary... [OK] 👍 ❤️

It is indeed extreme enough, but your way of sequestering the country is incomprehensible. Although the mass extinction of species has its reasons, the lack of cultural exchange is a bit too extreme. Of course, I came to this comment only after reading the previous 16 chapters. I think the protagonist should discuss with other gods about not being able to intermarry. There should be no problem with other cultural exchanges. It is better to block than to open up. You cannot block all roads, otherwise, there will be a serious counterattack. This is just my personal opinion on the first 16 chapters. I think this content is indeed very exciting, so it deserves this five-star rating. Reminder: It is better to block than to loosen "You can't block the entire road." It's really cool enough.

It is a very novel angle, although it is a bit radical, but it also makes this book more interesting. 🍉 The protagonist will carry out his own ideas to the end, regardless of whether the protagonist's ideas are right or wrong. When the author does not have a very high level, I think the behavior of writing a top laner is very good 🍉. If the change of concept is not well written, it will become a huge poisonous point. The whole book will be in an embarrassing situation that is very different, and it is easy for people to abandon the book. Some people also like your previous style. So if you don't have enough level and full assurance, you might as well implement this concept and style to the end.

(The author is looking at my five-star reviews, so just take a look at the suggestions I give you.) (Note: The reminder to readers is all about Fufu, don't get confused!) The protagonist of this book is a bit strange in the early stages. Here is a reminder for readers. There is also a reminder for the author later: 1. I don't recommend it to those who have a good impression of Fukalos. The author has personal suggestions for Genshin Impact characters. For example, the protagonist expresses his first attitude towards Fukalos. (Note: This is just a reminder, there is really no malice) 2. The character of the protagonist described by the author is a little uncertain. At the beginning, it was very interesting, but when it came to Fukalos, it became a bit radical (but it was okay, at least it was reasonable), and then there was the emotional line. Readers may be bored after seeing the latter part. 3. [Important reminder]: When the protagonist controls Silly Fufu, he is strong, crazy and handsome. If the protagonist is not brought in to control Silly Fufu, but Silly Fufu is brought in, there will be a feeling of character collapse. People who don't like it, please don't bring it in. "Note to Authors": Authors Beware Author, you have also seen that many people like your style. So like a certain reviewer, if you can't write a plot in which the protagonist's personality changes, I suggest you continue this style. A friend of mine suffered a loss when writing a book, causing a large number of readers to abandon it. If you really can't write a plot in which the protagonist's personality changes, then don't change your style because of what people say in the comment area. Also, it is recommended that the author add a few words in the introduction to express the heartwarming plot at the end. Otherwise, some people will easily give up after seeing the middle.

I feel like there can be one later, where the traveler fights with the protagonist with everyone's wishes.

It was very enjoyable and comfortable to watch, but if possible 😅 I wish I could be a little nicer to Bai Fufu. In the middle, I thought the author was going to kill Bai Fu, and I was a little scared.

Regarding the previous part, I have nothing to say but give you some advice. The male protagonist did support Fu Nina on the throne, but the way was more similar to a gift, and Fu Nina's growth was not shown much. Secondly, in the middle period, due to the protagonist's powerful power, it is understandable to attract more outsiders, but I don't understand why there is a scene to help other people understand sex. Maybe it is out of the protagonist's bad taste and no sense of morality, but this is undoubtedly a betrayal of Fu Nina. Give it four stars. I admire every author who is willing to write his inner thoughts, but there are different ways of doing things. All in all, I only see that in the mid-term, the protagonist will most likely take over the harem. If you want to see Funina being devoted to her wholeheartedly, there is no trace of filth in her that you can refuse. The evaluation I made is only my personal opinion. It would be an honor to be able to help you. Furthermore, I don't want anyone to comment on me in a form similar to a quarrel. Finally, I only accept doubts in the form of questions. I will answer my personal thoughts. If you don't want to read this comment, you can click "dislike". I wish you all your wishes

You are invincible, buddy. You are hostile to Huang Mao. Taking back the divine power from Fukalos and judging Silk are things that other fans dare not do. Especially Silk. This kind of xxn is really ugh. So when to kill others?