Arrive at Teyvat and Start as Fonina

It's a bit too radical, but it's really novel, give it a try

I like the first part very much. I give five stars to the first part, but the second part becomes too ordinary. I suggest there be less emotional scenes. The first part is really to my liking! It is recommended that the style be the same as before, and the author will greatly support it.

After reading it, the few Genshin Impact fanfics I can read are pretty good (maybe I have read too few Genshin Impact fanfics?). Except for the character of the protagonist, which is slightly problematic (I might be happier if Xiuyuan had this character? Of course, after he realizes his ideal), the writing and logic are all online, especially the current description of the Inazuma chapter. Apart from the perspective It has a fresh feel, and the story is also more delicate. To use the words I often heard before, the flesh and blood is really reflected vividly, both objectively and subjectively. It is relatively rounded, and the knife is not as abrupt as the ones I have seen before. The most important thing is that it is all connected, which is rare. Another thing is, is the emotional line of the girl a bit hasty? I hope the author will explain this process, at least I personally think it is necessary... [OK] [Like] [Love]

It is a very novel angle, although it is a bit radical, but it also makes this book more interesting. [Eat Melon] The protagonist will carry out his own ideas to the end, regardless of whether the protagonist's ideas are right or wrong. When the author does not have a very high level, I think the behavior of writing a top laner is very good [Eat Melon]. If the change of concept is not well written, it will become a huge poisonous point. The whole book will be in an embarrassing situation that is very different, and it is easy for people to abandon the book. Some people also like your previous style. So if you don't have enough level and full assurance, you might as well implement this concept and style to the end.

It is indeed extreme enough, but your way of sequestering the country is incomprehensible. Although the mass extinction of species has its reasons, the lack of cultural exchange is a bit too extreme. Of course, I came to this comment only after reading the previous 16 chapters. I think the protagonist should discuss with other gods about not being able to intermarry. There should be no problem with other cultural exchanges. It is better to block than to open up. You cannot block all roads, otherwise, there will be a serious counterattack. This is just my personal opinion on the first 16 chapters. I think this content is indeed very exciting, so it deserves this five-star rating. Reminder: It is better to block than to loosen "You can't block the entire road." It's really cool enough.

I feel like there can be one later, where the traveler fights with the protagonist with everyone's wishes.

(The author is looking at my five-star reviews, so just take a look at the suggestions I give you.) (Note: The reminder to readers is all about Fufu, don't get confused!) The protagonist of this book is a bit strange in the early stages. Here is a reminder for readers. There is also a reminder for the author later: 1. I don't recommend it to those who have a good impression of Fukalos. The author has personal suggestions for Genshin Impact characters. For example, the protagonist expresses his first attitude towards Fukalos. (Note: This is just a reminder, there is really no malice) 2. The character of the protagonist described by the author is a little uncertain. At the beginning, it was very interesting, but when it came to Fukalos, it became a bit radical (but it was okay, at least it was reasonable), and then there was the emotional line. Readers may be bored after seeing the latter part. 3. [Important reminder]: When the protagonist controls Silly Fufu, he is strong, crazy and handsome. If the protagonist is not brought in to control Silly Fufu, but Silly Fufu is brought in, there will be a feeling of character collapse. People who don't like it, please don't bring it in. "Note to Authors": Authors Beware Author, you have also seen that many people like your style. So like a certain reviewer, if you can't write a plot in which the protagonist's personality changes, I suggest you continue this style. A friend of mine suffered a loss when writing a book, causing a large number of readers to abandon it. If you really can't write a plot in which the protagonist's personality changes, then don't change your style because of what people say in the comment area. Also, it is recommended that the author add a few words in the introduction to express the heartwarming plot at the end. Otherwise, some people will easily give up after seeing the middle.

It was very enjoyable and comfortable to watch, but if possible [laughing awkwardly] I wish I could be a little nicer to Bai Fufu. In the middle, I thought the author was going to kill Bai Fu, and I was a little scared.

You are invincible, buddy. You are hostile to Huang Mao. Taking back the divine power from Fukalos and judging Silk are things that other fans dare not do. Especially Silk. This kind of xxn is really ugh. So when to kill others?

If you start from the human race, this book is very good. If you start from the second dimension, then you are good to go.

Regarding the previous part, I have nothing to say but give you some advice. The male protagonist did support Fu Nina on the throne, but the way was more similar to a gift, and Fu Nina's growth was not shown much. Secondly, in the middle period, due to the protagonist's powerful power, it is understandable to attract more outsiders, but I don't understand why there is a scene to help other people understand sex. Maybe it is out of the protagonist's bad taste and no sense of morality, but this is undoubtedly a betrayal of Fu Nina. Give it four stars. I admire every author who is willing to write his inner thoughts, but there are different ways of doing things. All in all, I only see that in the mid-term, the protagonist will most likely take over the harem. If you want to see Funina being devoted to her wholeheartedly, there is no trace of filth in her that you can refuse. The evaluation I made is only my personal opinion. It would be an honor to be able to help you. Furthermore, I don't want anyone to comment on me in a form similar to a quarrel. Finally, I only accept doubts in the form of questions. I will answer my personal thoughts. If you don't want to read this comment, you can click "dislike". I wish you all your wishes

It's a bit interesting in the early stage, but sometimes the acquisition of women is too sudden. Apart from these sudden emotional parts, the rest of the plot is not bad. It is a relatively radical kind. It is rare. At least it has an impact on political and historical changes, and it dares to kill people. It is in some characters that it can be more radical and extreme.

The same can be said about the protagonist's abilities. God says that the world has light and it has light. He said that when the world has darkness, it has darkness. He said that there are many lives in the world, and there is life. You can understand that what I say is what I say. You can't disobey, you can only abide by it. But you can't create something out of thin air.

Anyway, the beginning looks quite comfortable, just wait for my follow-up. The first ones are okay, but not so good after 20 pictures. I don't want to read them in the harem. If you are a fuchu, I suggest you skip the 20 pictures.

Fufu is very happy in this book. She has become a real water god and has all the power of the water god. There is no feeling of frustration.

From a species perspective, the content of this book is correct and well written.

It looks good, but I don't recommend it for some character chefs, as it may break.

Come on, it's just a bit extreme.

The rating isn't so low.

No matter how much you write, author, it will never be as shocking as the five elements of the traveler being shocked by the servant [laughter]

Very well written! It is engaging, informative, and clearly structured so that readers can easily follow the author's train of thought. The writing is smooth and expressive, conveying exactly what the author intended. In addition, the article contains many interesting examples and vivid language, which makes readers feel happy during the reading process. Overall, this is an excellent and highly recommended article!

The protagonist has a great personality and the plot is well done. Unlike the mainstream plan to pursue Fukalos, the protagonist is very rational and knows what to do.

When I first read the title, I thought it was another one of those zz romance novels. Today, I saw it again and had it recommended many times. I was curious and came in to read it. The novel plot successfully kept me here.

The interpretation of Genshin Impact from the true direction is also very well written.

It's quite realistic, but some people may give it a low score based on the character.

The content is vivid and vivid, I highly recommend Fuchu to read it! But I don't recommend Magic Chef…

Real and beautiful. But some elementary school students can't stand it

This book is still good. Don't look at those with low reviews, come in and see for yourself. To be honest, the only problem I have with the protagonist's character is the character of the protagonist. I think it's pretty good in other aspects.

It's a novel angle, but it makes sense once you think about it. The explanation of the original sin of the Fontaine people is quite novel except for the girl's emotional line which is strange and sudden. Now I especially hope that the progress will be faster. I want to see the protagonist clean up the accounts of Liyue, led by Ningguang, who interfered in the internal affairs of Dao Wife, expanded the civil war in Dao Wife and took the opportunity to make money!

The writing is good, and the extended content is good. There are more than twelve additions. I hope the author will write about the Narcissus Cross branch later.