[Super Genius] + [Growth] + [Village Super League] + [Five Major Leagues]
In the smoke-filled room, several people smoked the cigarettes in their hands silently. The smoke lingered under the dim light, as if everyone was feeling melancholy.
The room became silent for a moment, except for the faint sound of burning cigarettes.
Suddenly, an old voice broke the silence, with obvious anxiety and determination: "We must win the football match on Friday. We can lose to any team, but we cannot lose to Dawangzhuang."
Reader comments
I read more than a dozen chapters and played two games. How should I put it? It's not poisonous, but the taste is a bit bland.
The characters are not vivid, the competition is not passionate, and the rural people cannot see the "happiness of football". The communication between classmates and villagers is to talk in a formal manner according to the characters, and then there are long descriptions of the competition without passion and rhythm, which seems a bit watery.
The writing is smooth and there are not many bad sentences or typos, but this should be the basic requirement for writing, right?
I hope the author will continue to work hard and think about how to embody the excitement of online articles and how to interpret the passion of sports competitions. I don't watch many sports competitions, so I suggest you read Lin Hai Tingtao's football novels to learn from them.
I read more than a dozen chapters and played two games. How should I put it? It's not poisonous, but the taste is a bit bland. The characters are not vivid, the competition is not passionate, and the rural people cannot see the "happiness of football". The communication between classmates and villagers is to talk in a formal manner according to the characters, and then there are long descriptions of the competition without passion and rhythm, which seems a bit watery. The writing is smooth and there are not many bad sentences or typos, but this should be the basic requirement for writing, right? I hope the author will continue to work hard and think about how to embody the excitement of online articles and how to interpret the passion of sports competitions. I don't watch many sports competitions, so I suggest you read Lin Hai Tingtao's football novels to learn from them.