One Punch*********

Just give a brief review. First, and most importantly, although I have not read the original work, I still know a little bit about the limiter. After breaking the limiter, it will remain that way. In other words, breaking the limiter cannot have an impact on the monster's transformation, which means that even if it eats monster cells, it will not become a monster. Although it is said that the Chinese formula breaks through the limiter after turning into a monster, but theoretically speaking, he can still be in the original state, but it is not the weird state. I haven't seen the original work, so I don't know. The second point is that Shuilong and Junjie don't know each other. The third point is that the big ugly eyes are not female. Of course, this is because I have not read the original work. The fourth point is that in Shuilong, you just shuffled the order of everyone's dialogues, and then different people said it. This is what you wrote about loneliness. In other words, you have messed up everyone's dialogue and asked different people to speak another person's dialogue. This gives me a very confused feeling. Of course, it does not rule out that you have no way to write it, so I will not comment on this. Then there is the fact that you did not describe the details of the character settings accurately. Overall, this book has a lot of mistakes, but there is a lot of room for improvement, and it's not bad. I finally have a book that can be added to a bookshelf.

Very good, I must keep writing.