Destiny: Revelation

This is probably a new book that has just been published. I feel like I have just entered the main story. The author is said to be a newcomer, but I think the writing is really good, but the length is a bit short at the moment. I finished it in half an hour [face covering] I hope the author will write more. Now let me talk about my overall feelings after reading it. First of all, the writing style of this book surprised me. When I read this book, I felt a little bit like I had when I read "Dragon". Some of the words in it are really good. I believe that people who read it will have similar feelings to me. Second, I think this book describes the feeling of youth very well, from the graduation season at the beginning to the confusion of the teenager later. Perhaps it is because the author has just finished the college entrance examination. The youth he describes is really as if it is in front of me, which makes me unconsciously look back to the past. Thirdly, I personally prefer to read books that focus on supernatural powers and cities. It would be better if there is a bit of mythology. I came to Tomato just to kill the gods [face covering]. But this book gave me a new idea. Although Zhan Shen integrates various religions into one world view, religions are still their own systems. This book integrates different religious myths into one system. In the mixture of Nordic and Bible, I can't even find any big loopholes in the author's current description. I look forward to the follow-up plot. If the world view does not collapse, it will really be a masterpiece. Fourth, after reading too many system streams and time-travel streams, I seem to have developed a fixed understanding of online literature. There are fewer and fewer anti-routine novels. The fantasy genre is just a template. There are fewer and fewer eye-catching novels such as "Lord of the Mystery" and "The End of Ten Days". For "Star Destiny", I feel that the author does not want to write according to the usual routine, and should have his own ideas and expectations. Of course, this book still has many shortcomings. Here are the points that I feel the most about. First, the foreshadowing in the first part is too long, and the progress of the plot seems to be a bit slow. I know that there should be foreshadowing later, but in the current online writing environment, if it cannot capture the hearts of readers at the beginning, it will be difficult to promote it. I also know that the previous part will probably be foreshadowing later. The author will work hard to make up for the rhythm in the future. Another point is that the author may have typed a little faster when coding, and there are two consecutive repeated words in some places. The author should come down and check, after all, for the sake of the reader's experience. Overall, this is a very good book. The author is a newcomer and I am starting to support it. Maybe I will become an old fan later. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. I also wish the author an early signing and the day he becomes a great master.

After I finished the college entrance examination, I tried to write a book. This is something I have been conceiving for three years in high school. I hope readers will like and support it. Talking about "The Destiny", in my conception, it will be a very long story. It will not be divided into volumes like other online novels, but will be divided into many original books, because it has chapters and prequels, which are separate books, and I also want to choose a separate cover for each book. "Revelation" is only his first one, and also my first one. As a newcomer, I still have a lot of shortcomings. I hope readers can understand me, and I also hope readers can put forward some more opinions. I will definitely make changes. The world of "Destiny" is my world, and it is also your world. I hope that we can continue to go forward. I will definitely insist on finishing this story, no matter what its data is. Maybe some of what I said is wrong, but this is what I want to say. In short, welcome to my world, I hope we can make it to the end together. This one is here to make up the numbers [roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes]

I don't know if the Star Dome Railway in the article is the game I played, hahaha. I feel like the author may have buried a hole in the early stage, or I'm overthinking it. Ye Xuanheng is a person with upright views and kind-heartedness. I quite like his image. And the principal wants to know if it's good. Please update the author soon (I'm not confident yet)

It's a very good book. The pace may be slow in the early stage and we need to calm down and read it carefully. I like Ye Xuanheng's character very much. I feel that he is a very story-telling and transparent person. The only shortcoming is that it is not enough to read [Please update][Please update]

Very well written! The writing is very smooth, the environment rendering is very good, and the romance at the beginning is very interesting. I will be a long-time fan of "Dragon" at first glance [laughing and crying] Author, can you read my book? I often meet you in the bookstore [laughing and crying]

The author writes so well, with the ultimate slow-burning and stunning writing style. The ups and downs of the plot starting from the fifth chapter and the good setting. Except for the emotional foreshadowing in the first five chapters which is a bit bland, it is really an excellent book!

The plot is exciting, very enjoyable to watch, and I support it.

This novel uses a very different perspective to write a new world view. Even if I have not played this game, I still think this novel is very attractive and passionate, and the protagonist's character is also very realistic.

After reading the first 0 and 1 chapters, I feel that there is too little plot, and I feel nothing. I am missing a sense of anticipation when reading later. Finally, the writing is not bad. The author will continue to work hard. I hope there will be more plots and more paragraphs. Some paragraphs are too long...

It's very good. The author's writing is very detailed, very literary, and the writing style is smooth. The protagonist of the novel is very good👍

Overall good, you can check it out

It's a very good novel, and the character in it is Ye Xuanheng the most. Great writing, I will admire it for a long time. It feels like the pace is a bit slow in the front. But it's great for savoring slowly.

Great writing! Big cheers for the author! [Sending Hearts]

Talented and wonderful

Such a good book, the author is so awesome! ! ! !

How should I put it? It smells like a dragon, but the author has his own ideas, so it's worth a look.

The author is really a breath of fresh air. The conception is rigorous and the story is very good. It feels refreshing. I must support it.

It is a very good book, with a slow-burning plot and exquisite writing. The grand narrative is mixed with the spirit of youth, with a mythical and novel world view. There are really few words in this era that can make people calm, and the author even writes about Gao Wu. I can see some shadows of "Dragon Clan". The author must write well and work hard! Strong support as a reader!

This book has a fascinating plot that makes you unable to put it down. Every page is full of surprises and twists, making you want to turn to the next page.

The story is beautiful and exciting, and the author's writing is superb! The first chapter is profound and thought-provoking. What a great article! Like it very much!

Your writing skills are very good! The plot is novel and the concept is clever [Like] [Like]

I discovered it by accident. I couldn't stop reading it. It's very well written. I'm looking forward to the next stories.

Very literary, the story is novel, the protagonist has a distinctive personality, recommended

I almost stayed up late to read it in one sitting. It's worth recommending (#^.^#)👍🏻

It's so good that I almost stayed up late to read it in one sitting. It's highly recommended.

Very nice and well written. The characters are distinct. Five-star praise. Keep going, keep going, keep going. Not bad, good, additional comments, five-star praise, Ye Xuanheng, the characters are distinct.

The author is awesome! The writing is so good! The artistic conception is profound and beautiful, the story is wonderful, and the characters are vivid and interesting. I really like this kind of article [Like]

It's beautiful. I read it in one sitting. I felt the story was wonderful. The author's writing style is delicate and interesting. I recommend it! It's good to read, I've read it again [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Twists and turns, exciting. Very exciting and interesting. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's great, the story has interesting twists and turns, add it to my reading list!