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Medium cup medium Children, I am short of reading a book before the Spring Festival😫 The shortcomings are too obvious, namely the free logic of the heroines and Xiao Chunan's love fantasy, which feels like artificial saccharine but not fully understood. The second is the perception. I understand that when two-dimensional people write novels, they always want to add some goods into it. It is understandable to consider the audience when writing. However, those who are less involved in two-dimensional novels will be less popular, and the two-dimensional flavor is a bit too strong. The advantages are also obvious. The description of food is exquisite and the writing style will not let any porridge bar users go. It can be seen that it can be lifted from low to medium with just a little light. For suggestions, please refer to the above. I also suggest that the author also find a good wife.

There is no need to say much about science fiction. As long as you don't write embarrassing and other irrelevant plots, we will be good friends. [Like] As a Granblue Files player, I come to Tomato just to hold the little loli and gnaw on it.

I thought it was Se Se, but it turned out to be Asasi, who was just a sidekick. I still like to see Xiao Liu Bei.

I see that all the love lines so far are very well written, I can't get enough of them.

Author, if you want to write Tong, please tell me first, I will give up immediately [blowing kiss]

It's too bad that the author is gone. There are too few, and it can't satisfy people at all [laughs evilly]

You know the author very well [laughs evilly]

Makes my brain spin with Penn State

The evil Asasi male protagonist

Good-looking, good-looking [admiration] [admiration]

Why is it gone? [Cry][Cry][Cry]

It's beautiful, the three heroines each have their own characteristics, and the author writes it sweetly [Blowing Kisses]

This book will disappear sooner or later, so I can only say that I will read it and cherish it.

This name really corresponds to the theme, Little Dark Room Simulator. Congratulations on entering the palace. [Laughing and crying]

It's ok. Excellent work. I hope the harem won't catch fire.

Beautiful, this book is both simple and powerful

Okay, it feels like watching Japanese movies, very good

It's not bad. Although the protagonist is Asasi, he is not stupid. There is no high blood pressure scene [eating melon]. The author's writing style is also decent, with a 9 points.

Very nice, there are many types of female protagonists, I like the president, the plot of the president unfolds at the maximum speed➕Hurry up Shura Field

It's so beautiful. I like the character of the protagonist so much. If you like them all, just want them all and work hard for them. Don't delay. It's beautiful.

The male protagonist is simply a succubus [face covering] It can be seen that the author wanted to write about high school love.

Ahhhhhhhh, not enough

Wai Bi Wai Bi, Wai Bi Babu.

It looks good. If you like it, come and see more.

A bit arrogant

Very good very good

Come on, I hope you won't be a pigeon again

Very good, I want to see it again

I agree with your experience [face covering]

My poor Lin tide is gone