Raising Hell in Another World with MC

The first two or three pictures are fine, but the problem becomes bigger as you go to the back. What about the details of the special meow, and the details of the scene of you meow? I said that the more you look at it, the more chaotic it becomes. I always feel that something is missing. There is a lot of content. I personally feel that the content of the scene is missing, which makes the content a bit confusing, and There is very little narration about character actions and the like, and even less expressions and the like. It's so damn bland, and a lot of the content is incoherent, like a piece is cut out in the middle. The worldview has no structure, which makes it even more confusing. I really can't understand it -_-||

There are many settings that are very troublesome. This is because MC elements are rarely reflected, and the protagonist is currently useless, and the guns are not very good. Although there are currently no combat elements, it looks very dull. There are no modules to reflect it, it's all about things in the real world. Even the little girl who picked up the protagonist is better than the protagonist.

Give yourself a score, and by the way, tell people who see this comment that the author's account cannot be posted on Tomato for the time being, so this account is the author's normal account, so if you have anything normal to say, you can tell me, or ATT me

We just want to support you. After all, I am also a street author, and I am much more diligent than you, but no one reads it. Come on, I'm optimistic about you.

It's so weird to read, a little unclear.

It's still ok

The writing is a bit messy. I write this now and that now, which makes me dizzy.

Talking a bit too much,

Book Review 185,

Come on, author!!!