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Overall, it's pretty good. The descriptions of the protagonist's roommate and other people are very three-dimensional and vivid, which is really rare. The protagonist Miaomiao is also very cute, but I feel that Chi is a bit too humble in this relationship. It was not obvious when the pure brotherhood was in the front. Later, when Miaomiao went to contract the little bird, I felt that Chi was very suppressing himself. It made me very sad to see it, including the occupation of the contract mark later. I don't know how other people treat brothers. Maybe I have been thinking about it. Zhong tacitly admits that they are a couple, and they can't help but feel unfair to Chi. He wants Chi to wake up later and not be too hurt. Although Dada has described in Miaomiao's heart many times that "Chi is his most important brother", it really doesn't show through what he does. It always feels like every time he does something that he feels sorry for Chi, he must emphasize in his heart that "Chi is his most important person." (PS: Maybe I was too caught up in the drama. I really hid under the quilt and cried for the sake of their relationship. This should be the reason why the netizens laughed at me. Both the hero and the hero said it was okay, but only the netizens clamored to say that something was wrong. Hahaha)

If you like western fantasy themes, read this book The description of the forest chapter is really good, it feels like a fairy tale, and the characters are well drawn. The academy chapter is very typical, this is Long Aotian Shuang! It's just that we often forget that freshmen are actually young boys under 15. Geniuses gather together, Miaomiao's dormitory is composed of four people, representatives of the Water, Earth, Wind and Thunder Academy. It feels so good to be a team with such geniuses who are far superior to others. Miaomiao, you are a white-cut black cake, let me kiss you For now, I feel like I still have to write a lot more, so if you can't wait for serialization, be cautious () A very good little couple that made me roll over on the bed. The emotional lines were well written and the transitions were good. Chi is affectionate and patient (?), And respects Miaomiao enough that you can really feel the deep feelings for Miaomiao behind the concession. And Miaomiao also forced herself to give Chi an answer. Author, I like you woo woo

Read it from beginning to end, it's a great book with great potential! Looking forward to more updates, woo woo, baby Sanshui is really cute [love][love][love]

It's okay. My wife can try to use less physical descriptions. It's a bit too repetitive. I can see the teacher's progress (whispering bb: I thought it was a cool novel, but it turned out not to be very happy. I feel that my wife really wanted to write some happy stories). In the article, Miaomiao is a genius, and the people around her are also geniuses, so I have no idea about levels. Chi's feelings for Miaomiao are a bit volatile. One moment it feels like a spoiled wife novel, and the other moment it feels like a strong character. Overall, the problem is not big. It can be seen that the teacher is a real mother. My final evaluation is: it is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. Looking forward to better works from the teacher! (*´I`*)

Come on author, although you are not very popular now, the story background and subject matter are very good, and the writing style is also very good. I believe that as long as you can persist, you will definitely become popular. However, the beginning is a bit weak. The beginning is the most attractive to readers. Generally speaking, the beginning determines whether readers will stay or not. I hope that your second book will be more mature and excellent for you now. I feel like I have discovered a treasure [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It feels very good. Although it is said to be a monster-killing, upgrading and cultivating system, it has always been Long Aotian's cool style (it has hidden strength but does not affect its coolness). Miaomiao is also very measured and cute! ! Chi is also very good, but the emotional line is in the later stage, and the early stage is basically the plot. It seems a bit too much, but it is still very satisfying to watch it for a few hours. The two little ones are also very cute and warm, the supporting characters are also very fragrant, and the most important thing is that the no-vice CP is really great. I like it like this! ! Two men + nurturing type (attack and shou all) + (attack) secret love comes true + save the world (?) + Warm little daily life + Long Aotian's cool writing + no bloody plot (such as the Virgin, chasing his wife in the crematorium, mouth sealed with glue) + long-haired beauty + getting married + having no children + the author is very, very awesome! ! Just look! Cool! ! ! ! !

Good-looking, Miaomiao (white and black are also very cute), very cute [send heart], Chi is also cute [send heart], Chi's positioning for himself when he was a child is also very funny [face covering], he always thought he was the knight who protects the princess, and the two grandfathers are evil dragons, but little does he know that he himself is the evil dragon who wants to take away the princess [laughing and crying], he always wanted to take Miaomiao away from the two grandfathers [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's really beautiful to look at the front. The author's words are as warm as early spring, like a fairy tale, about the cabin next to the clear lake, the loving grandfather and magical animal friends, and the warm fire and soft pillows~ Looking at the corpse makes me feel warm❤️ If time stays at this moment

After reading it for a while, I want to leave a review. The author's writing style and OC are amazing. The setting is also very suitable to my taste. When I have free time, I like to think of some scattered and interesting settings. When I read this book today, I found that the settings are very similar [shocked] to the world (bushi) We are quite destined, thank you for meeting me [sending heartfelt wishes]

Very very beautiful! ! ! Blessed are those who like to cultivate! The author's writing is very good, but it's a little slow in the early stages, so those who don't like delicate writing and slow plots can avoid it! Miaomiao is really very beautiful, and she has a very good personality. Especially the line "Good night, I wish you a nightmare" is so handsome to me! They are both very beautiful. Zundu Zundu, come and see [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] Chi also really loves his wife hahaha (*^ω^*). I've reached chapter 203! Read it in one go! The author spent a lot of money to save money. (I changed many accounts to watch this account and only watched it for 2 hours.)

It's sweet, it's beautiful and I love watching it (As a side note, I actually thought it was just a mini-boss, and that black and numb figure would be the final boss of Chapter 2, but I didn't expect it to happen so soon)

It's very well written, in a style I've never seen before, and the plot is complete. Brief summary: Jiang Liujing is a dark elf. Because he was too strong, the leader of the elf clan and the strong men of other clans trapped him in a room while he was ignorant. He met Cyrus and became friends with him. Later, because of the disaster, he came out and met the Chi Po of the Po clan - Chi. Jiang united all races in the world to fight against Calamity, and Sai founded the divine religion. Jiang was the God of Law. After a period of confrontation with Calamity, Jiang found a way to eliminate Calamity. He went to the crack alone. To prevent Chi from dying, he trapped him with a magic circle and promised to let him out when he came back. Jiang stayed there for a long time until he became a god. Chapters 320 to 328 will be discussed

The writing is great, the plot is very coherent, the foreshadowing is very good, and it can be matched later. It is a real double-strength novel. The emotional line does not take up a lot but it is very smooth and natural. It is very enjoyable to read, and I can see it all the way to the end. The writing is really good, and it is the best one I have read recently.

Miaomiao is very cute, Grandpa is very cute, Laoshu is very cute, Dahei is very cute, Big Tiger Jin is also cute, Chi... Well, Chi is very handsome. All in all, everyone is cute! This is a lovely book (so far) and will probably turn into a handsome book later [thoughts]. Anyway, there are no shortcomings except that there are a few chapters.

The writing is okay. I feel like it's really rare to combine the themes of dual male protagonists, group favorites (?), And male protagonists (?). If you want to gather people who like to read these themes, you really can't find a meal replacement. It's really good-looking🥹 I feel like each chapter is too short and I finished it before I even read it. I really recommend combining the two chapters into one🥹🥰

The structure of the main book is very clear, and the ending is perfect and happy. As we all know, few people write about the Western fantasy genre, but I like it very much. I was excited when I saw this book. It was only updated a little at that time, and it was very unreadable. Now the book is celebrating, and although the story we've seen ends, their lives go on [laughs][laughs]. This book includes elements of nurturing, group pet, two male protagonists, cool writing, and the Western fantasy world. Xiao Jing's life is very exciting and dazzling. He will always be the most eye-catching existence, but his life in his previous life was not easy [grievance] [grievance]. This may be the compensation given to him. On the way of growing up, he gained trustworthy partners and was no longer as lonely as in his previous life. Xiaojing is very afraid of being alone, and Chi is his eternal support, so that he will never be alone. Chi's love is passionate, but cautious, fearing to burn his boy. Fortunately, his boy also loves him. I really like the way Chi likes Xiao Jing. His eyes are always on Xiao Jing, and his love is only for Xiao Jing. It can be said that Xiao Jing is his whole world. It is true that Xiao Jing is the treasure of the world, and he has innate power that is admirable. The villain in the book is the one who puts Xiao Jing in the dark, and is also the one who created Xiao Jing's misery [angry] His offline deserved it. Thank you to the author for your hard work. I have been following the book for a long time. I finally saw the ending. Is the pitfall of the children who went to the God's Cult in the extra story? I hope they will be fine too. [Please update]

It's super beautiful, with a novel subject matter. It's a combination of Western fantasy + cultivation + genius + group favorite. The author's writing style is very good, and it's easy for people to associate with the picture. The plot is also very exciting, from young to old. It was a bit slow in the early stages. To be honest, when I first read it, the main character was too young and hadn't started learning magic yet, so I neglected the book once. Later, I continued reading at my leisure and found that the content was quite good and the logic was rigorous. But I think I like the current second volume better. The competition in the academy is really exciting! I hope the author will continue to update [Sending Hearts]

The author's writing style is excellent, natural, smooth, and just right. This article is beautifully written, as if every sentence is a carefully crafted work of art, which makes people marvel. Anyway, just be good! ! ! ! ! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] The unique style and profound connotation of this novel are very attractive. The large words are full of magic and the writing skills are unparalleled. He brought me into the book with his unique narrative method, such as "The spring breeze shakes the leaves, and the autumn water washes the stones. In the blink of an eye, three years have passed by in a hurry." Another example is "That will be a life-long, heavy, difficult The tomb of responsibility is like "The drizzle is falling, and the falling rain is as thin as the white mist covering the plants and the earth." The writing of the novel is beautiful, and the characters are well described!!! For example, "The lotus flowers in Pinghu are clear in the wind, and the flowers are blooming in the sun." It makes people feel the author's love and intention for the story. I've finished reading it, I hope you all know how beautiful this is! ! !

Super cool book. In fact, I rarely write book reviews, but I really couldn't help it [laughing] The world view of this book is very large and complete, and the extras also continue the personalities of everyone in the protagonist group, and the descriptions are very vivid, as if they are characters living in parallel time and space. I finished reading it in one go, and I even feel that I still have more to say. The writing style is really good, and there are some amazing passages. I highly recommend it. Sisters will not lose money by investing in it. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

[Two male protagonists + Western fantasy male style + cultivation + bamboo horse + group pet + genius + strength Photo] (The main text is finished, the extras are being updated) Jiang Liujing is sweet, good-tempered and talented. She is a graduate of the Imperial Academy of Magic. The most popular grass. ——The only bad thing is that everyone who confesses to him will be I found myself sleeping on the street of the school in a miserable state. ——Or on a branch of a tree or beside a pond. "Chi." After bidding farewell to the one hundred and first person who complained to him, Jiang said Liuman looked helplessly at the man behind him. "As promised, you won't care." The man turned his back and said nothing, and instantly transformed into a huge beast with a red tail. Pulling the young man into his arms. It narrowed its eyes. Don't care about anything. The beast doesn't understand. The beast doesn't know. The beast is just defending its territorial sovereignty. Reading guide: 1. Physical and mental 1v1, black long straight genius beauty mage × domineering loyal dog contract beast warrior, bamboo horse loves each other, different body shape and skin color, handsome attack and beautiful reception 2. The traditional fantasy upgrading stream is very slow to catch on. They were raised as children. They all used the nickname "Miaomiao" in the early stage. After going to school, they went back to the nickname "Jiang Liujing". In the first year, it was just a brotherhood, and later it turned into a "brotherhood". 3. The protagonist Long Aotian has a dark personality but is usually independent. He upgrades together with CP and has a golden finger. The author-protagonist only wants the best for his son.

Super pretty! ! ! A very good-looking Western fantasy with two male protagonists, a mage and a contract beast, mixed with some Eastern elements. The overall world view is very complete, and all the foreshadowings are filled in. It will not make people feel that something is missing or suddenly popped up. The author's writing style is very good, and the character description is very delicate. There are many descriptions of scenery, emotions, and situations that make people stop and savor it. The connection is appropriate and the text is smooth, making it smooth and comfortable to read. There are also details about the plot settings. There is a sense of fate between the two male protagonists. Is it a glance that lasts forever or is it the intuition of a beast? No, we saved each other in the previous life, and I will still protect you unswervingly in this life. The author is really her own mother and did not let Miaomiao and his important people suffer. Everything is the most appropriate [sending heartfelt messages][sending heartfelt messages]

It's a good read. I read more than 400 chapters in one go. The two protagonists not only have online IQs, but also have incredible strength. Miaomiao is a doting child and will be willful, but she is sincere, trustful and fond of her friends and family, and will not do anything to harm them. Chi has followed him in both lives. Although he loved Miaomiao, he never wanted to be imprisoned around him. Instead, it became a force that pushed him to become a "god". Moreover, this book also has a bit of a group portrait. Everyone is a genius, and each is his own king. It is a very good book. I recommend it [Blowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss]

Overall, it's okay. It's a theme about growing up academy that I like very much. The forest chapter in the early stage is really touching and beautiful. The only regret is that I didn't write about the 7 years later. I feel that if I wrote it, it would be longer and more popular. If I write it, I can feel more about the relationship between the protagonist and other characters. It highlights the charm of the group portraits, but it is not written. Because there is a gap period in the middle, there may be a bit of a gap in the end. I am looking forward to the setting. The main plot can also be advanced, but I think it would be better to add some practice mission clips. It may be because the writing is not enough or the imagination is not enough. This is the plot aspect. The emotional writing is okay, but there are some descriptions that I don't like very much. Maybe I am more reserved. The following is a subjective assumption. Miaomiao has trusted Chi since she was a child, and there are inevitably some close contacts. But sometimes she is too close, and she hugs the princess casually in public, which makes me feel weird. I think some of their behavior when they are not together is okay, and it should be to highlight their intimacy, but after they are together, I find that sometimes some descriptions are too explicit, which I don't like too much, and the emotional writing is very long, ignoring some descriptions of other characters. Sometimes I think the writing is good, but there are At the time, I felt that it was not very good. I didn't write the necessary descriptions, and I wrote a lot of things that were unnecessary. Of course, it may be a time period issue. It may have been very good before, but I don't feel that way now, because it was a book two years ago, so I can't say anything bad. The above is a subjective evaluation. Overall, it's very interesting. I like this kind of subject matter. There are some chapters that I haven't read yet, so I'm looking forward to the reveal of the foreshadowing. But I feel like it's not big enough. The Dharma God makes me very curious and happy, but I think the description of the country can be more detailed. After all, other things People come from different countries. I think there can be plots to explore other countries, but at present, it only mainly describes three countries. Because of my preferences, I still want to see the disputes between countries, because I like the king of the country where the protagonist is at the beginning, and the portrayal is very vivid.

Ahhhhhhhhhh it's very interesting, I haven't seen this type of movie for a long time, but the plot developments in the recent few photos are really full of familiar [making faces] [making faces] [making faces], refreshing articles hehehe, when I saw Miaomiao was a lot shorter than others and shouted her name loudly, it made me laugh [laugh][laugh][laugh]

A novel that suits my taste very well Two strong men, nurtured, childhood sweethearts, two lives of marriage It's a bit like Harry Potter. I like it very much. Chi and Miaomiao are both very good. Grandpas are also very good. Mo Ya and Chu Zhou are both very good.

Dada, 📚It's very good to watch [Blowing Kiss] The plot is also very good, very attractive, but Dada, you are not constructing a world where the jungle is strong. I think Miaomiao should be allowed to see the cruelty of this world earlier because not both Grandpa and Grandpa Sang can protect him in peace throughout his life [Shy][Shy][Shy] And Dada, not enough👀[Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying]

Nice! ! Zai Zai is so cute and the plot is very good. He is not the kind of virgin Zai Zai, but he has his own kindness and outlook on life. He loves his family and friends very much [love] [love] so cute [blowing kiss]

His Majesty Haihai's Miaomiao looks so cute, I really want to masturbate~ It's the most beautiful thing to grow up together, and then when they grow up, the contrast is so exciting [laughter] [laughter] [laughter] [laughter]! Come on!

I haven't seen such pure writing in a long time. There is no brain thinking at all. There is no game at all. Techniques have been completely abandoned. Superfluous thinking has been abandoned. It feels like it is completely instinctive every time. All operations come from the nature of human killing. This is pure fighting. I feel hearty while watching it. It makes me forget the intrigues in today's society. But I really have to say that it's really beautiful. It's the only book I've read in its entirety.

I like it, I love it. The author is very beautiful when describing the background scenes. Even after seven years, it feels so sudden. I don't mean it in a bad way. It just feels like the child who is watching suddenly grows up. For a moment, there is an empty feeling in my heart. QAQ