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It's good to read, please update more. I'm from the group, I followed Jingliu's book, please update more.

Star Iron's second creation, the suggestion to treat Liu Ying as his wife is gone, no one will be hurt. The main plot and branch plots are basically developed to serve the male protagonist and Liu Ying. There is no repeating the entire main plot of the game like most Star Iron fans do. Skip, cool The skip is too fast, and the lack of details makes some transitions appear a bit stiff and stream-of-consciousness. You need to have a certain understanding of the Star Iron game to figure it out on your own. Finally, I am worried about future serialization. According to the current plot development, it feels like the Fairy Boat chapter can be completed. Liuying and Xing have been connected since they were in Xianzhou, and Pinoconnie's script has become a mess.

It is a very good Bengtie fanfic. It has not entered the main line for the time being. It has always been in the story set by the author himself. Apart from borrowing Bengtie's world view and setting, it can't even be seen as a fanfic. The protagonist has a knife in the background. It is speculated that there is no big sword in the later plot. The setting is Elio's second episode. The knife should have been eaten by Elio in the first episode.

Good-looking, good-looking, I seem to see a rising star in the Bengtie fandom [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The writing is very delicate, the plot is very interesting, the characters are very vivid, it is an absolute treasure, read it! "Lao Deng and Xiao Deng of Grammer" "Grammer's Moth and the Firefly" "The Grammer Super Elbow King and His Majesty the Queen" "The veterans of the final destruction of the country will not meet the motherland Xiao Deng" "The sentence "Recruits, witness my glory" warms fireflies for a lifetime" "Elio: "It's so suspenseful, I just couldn't hold these two people together."" Misleading to: "Xing: "Woman, I beat you too much"" "My niece wants to steal my man?"

It's perfect! I really like the protagonist's character, and the character's personality is not OOC. The only regret is that the author's writing is a bit stream-of-consciousness. The timeline + perspective switching is not very clear, which makes it look messy. Come on, author, wait for the big knife to hit. .

Very good, the character of the protagonist is established immediately. The relationship with Liu Ying was also written very smoothly. Rare good book

I love this book so much! Among all Liu Ying's fanfics, this is the one that suits my personal taste the most. I rarely review novels, but I really liked this book. I always like the gentle, kind, beautiful, cute and innocent Miss Liuying! Her Majesty Queen Grammer! I also like 619, the fictional Grammer Executioner, Ember Moth Pilot, and Grammer Twilight Rider! I also like the Star Core Hunter family, Magic Cat→Magic Pig, Sunglasses Eggplant, Savage Brother, and E-Sports Girl. And of course my favorite little angel, Firefly Girl. Finally, I hope the author can continue to update and bring this book to a perfect conclusion.

The plot is not dragged out, the writing is good, it can be considered a good Tomato fanfic, and it is also about Liuying [Like]

Like this book very much. Liuying, a cavalryman born for fighting, a girl fighting for her life. 1. The author uses memories and narrative techniques to make the story between Ember Moth and Liu Ying extremely rich and full of emotions. 2. The writing is smooth, very comfortable to read, and easy for people to relate to. 3. Two iron knights fight for their lives, overcoming all hardships. There is no better thing than living. I hope the author can give the two people a happy ending

In terms of plot arrangement, I think there is no problem and it is well done. It also inserts a part to write the plot from the perspective of the main character. This is a relatively innovative point - at least I really don't understand what some people say is that the plot is stiff. I have watched too much White Snake (⚯?) In terms of writing, you should know from the rating of this book of 9.4. I think the characterization is the best thing. Hidden under the mask, after meeting the "Queen" of the star core hunter, I have the shackles of survival... I won't spoil the specific details. You can check it out for yourself. ฅ ̳͒•ˑ̫• ̳͒ฅ♡

The writing is good, and it's also a rare Tomato switch between different perspectives. The protagonist's character is well developed Of course, it doesn't matter to me whether it's candy or a knife. Anyway, I still have the ability to withstand pressure as a bad guy.

Personally, I think this is the most readable book for Tomato Fireflies fans. The male protagonist is self-designed, the plot logic is smooth, and the emotional line is there. The ratings came out today. I took a look at the ratings and it was 7.2, Right? I've been shopping around and I haven't seen a rating lower than four stars. Why is it only 7.2?

Although this book has a low rating and few chapters, it is indeed a masterpiece among Beng Tie's novels! The portrayal of the protagonist is very good. Although the emotional drama of the heroine Hotaru is less, and Elio has more plots than her, the emphasis is on quality. This novel is definitely not a loss after reading it. Do you really want to read it?

It's very interesting. The author writes it very well. It's rare to find a novel that suits my taste so well.

A good book, it is the best Liu Ying book I have ever read.

Just for the author's update speed, it's 5 stars, it must be 5 stars, and the content is also top-notch.

Well written, everything is included! Sending knives to earn tears. The author is also very good at it.

*Nothing but good-looking. [Eat melon] *You can't imagine the greatness of updating 130,000 words in 13 days! My first p-picture was just for him, because he is worth it! [Praise]

It's a pretty good Iron Breaker fanfic. The whole text is fluent and has no poisonous points. The emotional line with the female protagonist Hotaru is also well described. In the ending, they get married and have a daughter. Overall, I recommend reading [Blowing Kiss].

It's very good. There is no OOC that ruins the character. The plot is compact and there are many creations. There is a knife and a candy (a knife is fine, but the author must not kill me with a knife in the ending [thinking]). Although the first one or two chapters are confusing, it becomes more interesting when the real story starts.

Nice! Come on, author, don't give up.

I've watched half of it and it feels pretty good. I'd like to support it with five stars.

Tian Wen Wei Dao (The Knife in the Immortal Boat) has a complete story background and rich descriptions of fighting scenes and emotions. [Yysy, the best supporter in relationships is the old father, he can teach you how to do it (Jing Yuanyuan: No...)]

In the later period of this book, the fire from the sheath was unsheathed and burned high And it will be sweet every day in the later period A touch of sadness in the early stage This different flavor makes the book very layered, like eating a multi-layered cake.

As for this book, there are basically no flaws in the plot. It's sweet when it should be sweet, and it's sharp when it should be sharp. The backgrounds of the characters are also well written, and the characteristics of each character are very distinct and prominent, especially the protagonist, who has a very complete background and a very distinct personality. In short, I like this book very much, and I recommend everyone to read it, preferably after 20 chapters, and then you will be completely obsessed with this book.

It's a very good book. The protagonist's experience is not bad, but in the end it's HE. I read that the author writes relatively late and I don't know if he has written other books before, but whether it is his debut or his second book, it can be said that it ranks at the forefront of Bengtie fans. Unfortunately, as a passer-by and spectator, this story has become a thing of the past in my life, but I still hope that people who read this review can go to see the story of old moxibustion in person and witness the glory of moxibustion.

It's so good and I love to read it, I hope the author can update it at the risk of his life [laughing evilly]

Excellent literary talent, movie-like camera switching, and an epic sense of disillusionment. If the ending ends with the death of the protagonist, without Yang sit-ups, it will be a short story that will be called a god; but I can't say for sure, if the protagonist still dies as predicted by the magic cat, how can it be regarded as a change? It's just that the process of Yang sit-ups and the change in the protagonist's emotional problems are a little abrupt. I couldn't imagine the protagonist finally enlightening, but it doesn't hurt. Talking about the plot, the understanding of Grammer's plot is very good and accurate. The thinking is wonderful, comprehensive and profound. The protagonist's image is extremely successful. The contradiction between the imprint of a weapon and the thinking of a human being is very clear, which gives a perspective of looking at Grammer from a higher point. To be honest, I should include everyone who was attracted to Liuying. After reading this book, I became interested in the original protagonist Yi Moxi, and was inevitably attracted by his personal charm. Unlike Liuying, he did not end with awakening. He was thinking about the meaning of life and the future, why we are born as human beings, why our will is called great, and why it is worthy of dedicating everything. In my mind, at least in this book, Yingbao can be safely handed over to him. Now I am reading it for the third time. The writing is really good and worth reading. I have never heard Bengtie Fans recognized as the number one. I think his book can hold its own in the forefront in terms of writing style and depth of thinking.

It's good-looking. Thank you to the author for giving Liu Ying a happy ending. This novel is really good-looking and the character of each character is well developed. As the author said in the last chapter, our protagonist (Big Flapping Moth [laughing]) has a character that is just like a living person.