Crying and Looking for Me? I'm Just an Author

I personally feel that this book is quite good. I have read more than 50 chapters now, but there are some places that are not very good. I don't often watch anime, and I have a general understanding of some of the more famous characters. I can actually accept it when I see Sagiri being a little temperamental. After all, she is the protagonist's relative, but Accept it, and it seems that it is mainly about the Yamada Fairy. From the perspective of the protagonist, a stranger knocks on your door to say hello, and then directly goes to the table to start eating. I was so upset that I started to curse. The commentator also said that he wanted to get started, but the protagonist just felt helplessly that this person was too familiar,? I can only say that this does affect the perception a bit. Since the protagonist is set as someone who does not know the plot, please do not write with such an attitude that you are familiar with each character. I hope the author can adopt it and write less plots that easily affect the perception in the future [Love]

The writing style is very pleasant, and I like the plot and characters very much [adoration]. I look forward to the author's big updates [love]

Yes, few people write "The wife in an online game can't be a girl?" , At least I haven't seen a few of them. The character of the protagonist is a bit unclear and unclear. And is Kato Megumi so excited to be a guest at home? We've only met each other a few times, and the protagonist seems to have never seen the plot. Why are you so excited? All in all, it is a book with good potential, and there is no plot that is very discouraging. I also hope that the author can make the character of the protagonist more distinct, so that readers can see what kind of character he is. If he keeps wavering like this, the character of the protagonist in the harem plot becomes stronger and there will be a sense of fragmentation. The difficult part of writing about harem is how to open a harem reasonably and powerfully? Gentle? Aloof? However, the current protagonist does not have these. The best thing to write is to be gentle and treat every harem equally, so that they have to accept the current situation in their minds, because they don't want to leave the protagonist. Of course, the pseudo harem pretends that I have never been there

It's worth a look, it feels quite comfortable. The characters are also rarely written realistically, giving people the feeling of seeing old friends again, which is very good among comic book fans [Like]

It's pretty, but too short

Author, what are you doing? If you don't update, how can we fight against the book shortage @

The characters are very close to the anime, but the plot feels like the anime is mixed together. On the one hand, it is close to the original work, but on the other hand, it feels very bland. It would be better to watch anime. I just hope there will be a little unique plot, anyway, this is what I see now.

It seems to be very good at first glance, the writing style is smooth and comfortable to read, but there are a lot of typos, especially the writing in the first chapter is relatively immature, but I am not a novice, and it should become a good comprehensive comic work, as long as you don't stop updating it. Old thief, if you dare to be an eunuch, just wait for me.

It's quite comfortable to read so far, but first I want to ask, is the heroine of this book single? If not, then Umume Kitagawa, who has already appeared, is also one of the heroines, but she was fattened by Sagiri. To be honest, Sagiri needs realistic materials, so just pay for one, but the protagonist has to have an ambiguous partner?

It's very good. It's one of the best comics I've read. The only drawback is that there are too few. Author, do you know how much my heart hurt when I finally saw that shitty yellow button? ! (I've decided on Megumi the Saint, she is the heroine. As I said, even if Jesus comes, it won't work. Megumi Kato is the best in the world! [Shy][shy][shy])

It's okay, but the emotional relationship between the characters is a bit fast-paced.

It's okay so far, that's right. Our heroine's age is best not to mention that she is easily banned [Thoughts] Brother has been banned again

Just watch it and finish it

Come on, old man, it looks good and I love watching it [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's too short. It's pitifully short and not enough to look at.

It's very beautiful, but it's too short. I didn't get enough of it before it was gone.

It's a 5-star rating. In terms of plot, it's quite comfortable for me. Although the plot is slow, I don't dislike it. There's no brainless plot. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

I'm a local dog and I love reading. It's very comfortable to read Wenzhaogong-type comprehensive comics from time to time. There's nothing interesting about this one.

So far it's going great, come on don't stop! ! The protagonist's personality is okay, and the rest of the characters are not broken. It can be regarded as a good work among variety comics.

It's pretty cool, give it a thumbs up [laughs]

Good luck to the author! Too short, the author is great

Not bad, nothing poisonous

Very wonderful, I am very happy, I will give you five stars

The author's women's clothing must be praised!

Not bad, keep up the good work

Personally I like it better

How much does it cost to integrate?

Ah, is this systematic? I didn't see it [laughs awkwardly]

There are shortcomings, but to be honest, this rating is still low.

It's good, but that's all you have [you taste it carefully]