Returning to the Apprenticeship Day, I Gave up on the Beautiful Master

I stayed up all night to read it. It was pretty good, but there was too little, and a lot of foreshadowing was left unfilled. There is no need to allude to Zhu Xian, and the original owner is not that unbearable

It's not very exciting, I hope it will be more exciting later [angry]! ! !

The rating shouldn't be so low! It's so beautiful! It's much better than those traditional regret articles! After watching it, I rarely felt at ease, feeling like a big brother. The style of a great god. It's true that he doesn't treat pleasure as directly as whoring. What stands out is the "moistening" of moistening things silently and the "slowness" of water flowing through channels. There is no naughty mother-in-law in it. Let me reiterate, there is no naughty mother-in-law! There is no naughty mother-in-law! The emotional line is normal! Normal! There is no hat! If you have mental mysophobia, don't worry!

I really like this style, it looks like a fairy tale and fantasy. It has the simple feeling of a fairy novel, but also has the refreshing feeling of a fantasy novel. Chapter 20 is available for now. She personally killed the male protagonist's master in her previous life. She didn't even know what happened in her previous life, and the male protagonist forgave her.

This is the best novel of the same type that I have read so far. It has almost no watermarks, the plot is attractive, and it does not stick to the ordinary story of cultivating immortals and starting a harem. Although there are also routines such as stacking boxes and ascending to a new world in the middle and later stages, the creation of villains, male and female protagonists and other main characters in this article is very interesting in the early and middle stages. At the same time, the foreshadowing in many places and the background explanations for the main characters are also very comfortable to watch and will not feel abrupt or anything. Then the author's handling of the ending at the end also made me feel very unique. It broke away from the feeling of traditional online novels. It was not just a simple family fun, but more profound. Finally, I would like to say that I really like every aspect of this book. I hope more readers will be willing to read it slowly, and I also want to thank the author for his great efforts.

To be honest, this book is really good. My only regret is that the ending is a bit sloppy to be honest. I could have written dozens more pictures at the end. This book's foreshadowing and brain-burning can also arouse the emotions of some readers. And to be honest, the author feels a bit miserable. He can only add more updates with ten yuan a day. This is also the helplessness of small authors. The platform does not provide traffic. There is no way. Finally, I wish the author better and better, and hope to become bigger and stronger.

It's so good. I can't be the only one reading such a poisonous novel [shy]

At first glance, it sounds like a novice, but upon closer inspection, something is wrong. It is not a brainless villain story, nor is it a simple regretful face-slapping story. If the confrontation with the so-called destiny's son is the main theme on the surface, then the contest with the chess player who claims to be the way of heaven is an inescapable undercurrent. This book is not deliberately for the pursuit of cool points, but uses these cool points to express the author's views and attitudes at the appropriate time. From the current point of view, it is still developing in a good direction, but if the author does not grasp it well, it is very likely that the article will be bad. I hope the author can continue to work hard and strive to create a good article with a certain depth (I thought the book would be popular when Alien Beasts first came out [laughing]). I will give you five stars for encouragement.

The protagonist Chu Tianjun is the reincarnation of the strongest person, and then the people around him are also the reincarnation of strong people. Everything is the arrangement and layout of the protagonist's previous life. At the beginning, the protagonist thought it was rebirth, but unexpectedly it turned out to be a prophecy that had been planned. Then he gradually broke the tragedy of the prophecy, developed rapidly, and defeated the sons of luck (the sons of luck are all sent by the immortal world to seize opportunities), and then led the entire sect to ascend to the world, slowly regaining memory, unifying the whole world without breaking the end of the world. Personally, I think it's quite good-looking, not brainless, everything is logical, maybe there are some flaws, but it's innocuous, everything has a reason, it's not aimless, there's no brainlessness like the female channel, and there's no random killing like the male channel, and there's no random collection of harems, all of which are closely related to the protagonist and have been together for millions of years.

Subjective comments: If you have different opinions, you must be right. First of all, this is a novel about Liu Ruyan's rebirth. The author's setting of the framework is different from the public, and has been adjusted from the basic Liu Ruyan. The Liu Ruyan in this book actually belongs to him through no fault. He is controlled by the protagonist and was not controlled in the second week. However, he still promoted the development of the main line with the invisible hand, and then reacted to whitewash it. That is to say, the so-called master, sister and junior sister xxx in this book are actually positive characters in the framework, and there is no regret scene about Liu Ruyan. The shortcoming is that the male protagonist is too promiscuous. After all, he has suffered a loss for the second time, but he still keeps an eye on him and lets him get the coffin. That is to say, there is no system + grandpa in the setting, otherwise the second episode of Percentage will be overturned. As for the plot of the traitors in the sect, there is a feeling that the protagonist should be let go even though he could have been eliminated earlier. (I haven't finished reading it, so I'm sorry if something is wrong)

Shen Nong came here. He is a very artistic author. Although he was really "awful" in the early stage, the author came back later. In fact, the memory of the protagonist in the early stage was tampered with. In the end, the "fairies" who made the protagonist "good" in the tampered memory lived happily with him. It can be seen that he is a very imaginative author [laughing][laughing]

I think this book is quite good, but after reading the book reviews, they all said that the male protagonist is a dog-licker, did he really read the book seriously? . . . I remember that the male protagonist has a peach blossom because he did not hand it the Nuanyang Jade himself, and the grilled fish was something that he insisted on eating, and it was not something that the male protagonist came to beg her to eat. Some people always make excuses for this. . . . As for the yin and yang, after all, you and I feel that there is no problem. We are both reborn and have nothing to do in the future. Why can't we yin and yang her? And what's the problem with resurrecting Chu? He didn't hurt the protagonist in this life, but he seriously injured Ye Ye and brought him back to life. What's the problem? Do we have to talk about a future that has not happened in this life? Besides, haven't Chu Luye and the three others been punished in this life? There is only one female protagonist now, Lu Wo, I guess she will become the female protagonist in the future.

To be honest, it looks really good at the beginning. There is no deliberate depiction of hatred like other novels of the same type (although it is not a rebirth novel, so it may not be considered the same type), but there is a smooth transition in the writing. It is very comfortable to watch, but the later part feels a bit like the previous one. It's good to watch, but it's still better than others of the same type. The writing is also good, not embarrassing, and there are those who talk about forgiveness and 🐢 and so on. I think this is also a description of characters. As long as the author's description is good, it's comfortable to watch and not embarrassing, then what does it matter?

If this type of novel is carved from a mold, then this novel is the mold. It adds its own creativity to the original model. The story is well-founded and it is a very good novel. I don't understand why the score is so low. There may be other reasons, but I still think highly of this novel.

It's a very good book on philosophy. From the anime version of station b to chapter 204, the next 40 chapters are honestly more in-depth and thoughtful than the previous ones. Originally, it was just to watch the male protagonist of Shuangwen Xiuxian seize his luck and fight back to slap the master in the face. But I didn't expect that the dozens of chapters that follow have a lot of philosophical meaning [Adoration]. It's a good recommendation. It's just that the title of the book is a bit conflicting with what the author wants to express.

It's normal to feel uncomfortable at the front, because the back will look great. Yes, that's right, I can't do it alone, I'm sorry, brothers.

Some complaints and advantages Advantages The author writes well, the basic logic is still very clear, and some small bugs can be corrected. It can be seen that the author wants to write a different regret flow, which is very good. It is much better than some that are always unforgiving. Many of them use the mistakes of the past life to punish old friends in this life. Regarding the rating, according to my standards, I will give it a three-point rating. However, I saw that many book reviews were too naive and made me angry, so I gave it a four-point rating. What's the problem with accepting the master and the junior sister? This is the author's creative right. The author has already written more than fifty chapters. Don't use your little rights to interfere with the author's creative ideas. Complain The emotional line is a bit weak, and there are many places where there is inexplicable love, which is very embarrassing to watch. The turning point in the awakening is very tough. Since the author uses a "nothing before it happens" method to wash it out, the female protagonists have a weak sense of regret and satisfaction. For example, when Haoyue killed the male protagonist in the deduction, but in fact None of this happened at all, which makes it unnecessary to hate Longyue. If you don't hate it, you will feel resentful, because in a certain situation, if there is no deduction, these are bound to happen. This is the shortcoming of this whitewashing method. The advantage is that it is easy to wash away, because it is really not that cruel and it is logical. 1. To be honest, little junior sister Hei Hua is a bit emotionally weak. From the perspective of God, we know how bad Ye Chen is, but from the perspective of the junior sister, Ye Chen is a pure disaster, and the second life when he falls in love with the protagonist is also emotional. Although the reason is given, it is not enough because it does not belong to a life-and-death feud or a mentor. The love and hatred are not strong enough, but he shows extremely strong behavior, which makes me very uncomfortable watching it. It made me laugh when Chu Youwei wanted to die together with Ye Chen. To put it bluntly, the future and life were compared. Obviously life was important. Chu Youwei obviously had more ways to kill him without getting hurt. The author was too deliberate here. 2. There is also the inexplicable pursuit of Master, who has become a licking dog in this life. From the human perspective in the book, isn't there just a bet in the dungeon? Why did he become so hateful again? 3. For the first time, the protagonist is given a small role that lasts less than one chapter. Many people may find it uncomfortable to watch here. How should I put it? It's not that you won't do it, but if you do it for the first time, it should be given to someone with a little plot, such as Lu Qingxue. At least they will be interested in you. 4. Lu Qingxue couldn't stand it when she chose a sect that was bigger than her master. There's no place for you to miss a shabby sect. His master treated him well, and he was even looking for a way out. Why don't you just plainly say that you're on the side of the protagonist, and you're acting out of righteousness, and you look disgusting, and you say that this woman is kind, and then you change hands and do something unfilial, right? No, Nine Swords can open a new book of regrets. The protagonist claims to hate White-eyed Wolf, but in fact, the first general under his command is White-eyed Wolf, right? After all, her master also had some kindness, right? The protagonist is just destroyed in one fell swoop? And then Lu Qingxue didn't show any expression at all? How can you save his life even if he loses his cultivation?

Listening and reading slowly along the way, I feel that the author writes very carefully and expresses his clear logic, philosophical thinking, and mature life values. In just 249 chapters, it contains really a lot of content and is very concise. The final ending should be understood as the real author entering the book, just like Ye Dadao's Chaos Clock, it ends without finishing the meaning. After watching the game, I very much agree with the protagonist as a manager. As long as he establishes a reasonable competitive environment for healthy development and provides strong military support, the overall development in this environment will be extremely rapid. The same is true in reality. On the contrary, as long as any aspect is not developed well enough, then there must be problems with the environment and it is not conducive to development.

A very good book, with depth. The author incorporates his own thoughts and goes beyond many straightforward texts. Even though the title of the book is impressive, the content is extremely rich. As the story develops, the male protagonist clears away layers of fog and discovers the truth about himself and the world. Improve yourself through constant calculations and battles, and finally crack the truth. The male protagonist is not aggrieved and will beat anyone who makes a move. The two female protagonists have a very close relationship with the male protagonist (one is a mutual admirer, the other is a lifelong admirer), and no one can let go of them. Except for special reasons, the two heroines do not get involved with other women (Liu Shu's one is a little secret [laughing]). The male protagonist also despises the so-called sons of luck who run the harem (these people are actually pawns cast down by the upper world. Because of the intervention of the upper world, they feel like the protagonists of the world). In short, it is a rare good book. The only shortcoming is that the author has no inspiration at the end? Once the outline is posted, the book is finished.

A very good story, it should be regarded as the creation of a novel genre. The writing is very good, the logic is rigorous, and the five-star praise is not excessive. If the details are more detailed and the chapters are expanded, it can become a masterpiece!

It's okay, the tomato standard is above the standard level. It's not a straight up pure novel, but it's still okay. Well, if it's not something that everyone likes, those batches can go. After the main plot of the early stage was completed, the world view also began to appear, but there was not much description, which made the second and subsequent chapters of Destiny Child very uncomfortable to watch. The ambush at the beginning and the subsequent revelations revealed layer by layer. It was obvious that I was a veteran, but it was still a bit uncomfortable to read. There should be more space to introduce the world view in about 100 chapters [face covering]

The author's writing is good, the logic is clear, and the reversal is quite exciting. I read a lot of novice novels when I was young, and I can still read this book if I have a bad taste. I can give you some opinions. There are flaws in the ointment. The author's environment is basically borrowed, but the character creation is still successful. Compared with those romance novels, the opening chapter of the harem novel is invincible. It's not a bit strong, maybe it's because there is no complete and independent structure. There are too many references in the book and it's a little obvious, so the length is not too long. It has its own complete structure and unique plot, and it can control millions of words without lowering the reader's IQ. It should become popular. I wish the author will write better and better.

To be honest, the plot is really good. There is no verbosity or cliché. You need to read it without skipping chapters. It's just that the plot moves a little too fast and the character descriptions are a little lacking, making it a bit stiff. Among similar novels, it can get high marks. At least it is much better than those AI regret articles and revenge articles.

Finished reading! Seriously underrated work! The actual score of this book should be between 9.1 And 9.2! Please believe in professionalism [cool] [laughing]! Of course, if you ask me how much it costs, I have nothing to say [face covering], I don't know if I will be harmed [laughing]. This book is a high-quality condensed version of a high-quality long article. First of all, let's clear up the name: there are no dummies, no licking dogs, and no color lubrication. The plot itself develops into a highlight, with a bit of suspense. It's a cool novel. Although I feel the protagonist's final concept is flawed, nothing is perfect because the novel itself is telling a story. Because I have a glassy heart, I can't stand the difference between the evil personality and the plot, so I read other book reviews before reading it, with 200 good and 100 bad reviews. After reading it, I found out what the problem is. It was delayed by the title of the book "Rebirth". The author may have wanted to quote it by name, and also surprise others with the contrast, but it backfired [laughing][laughing][laughing]. Some readers who are accustomed to being wronged and then reborn for revenge read the title of the book, but after reading a few chapters, they felt something was wrong [snickering] [smirking] and left the book with negative reviews. The title of the book should be "Predicting the Future, I Say Goodbye to the Beautiful Master" [laughing]. Recommended, everyone should read it!

I have read more than 90 chapters, and it is not a revenge story. The protagonist forgives the master and the others (I don't think this is a bad point). The pace is actually okay, and it is more comfortable to read than other formulaic rebirth stories. It does not keep repeating the repentance of the person who hurt the protagonist in the past for hundreds of chapters. The "Child of Destiny" does not keep holding off on killing him, and it becomes a normal immortality story later on.

What this book describes should be one of the possibilities for the protagonist to deduce the future, and there is no rebirth. It feels like the person behind the fairy world is in charge of the chess game of this world. The way of heaven in this world allows the protagonist to know the future, in order to fight against the forces of the fairy world!

I'll give you a piece of advice. This novel is indeed okay. I'm an old bookworm. Don't bring in the rebirth template. You can understand it as a future simulation template. In this way, you will basically find very few poisonous points. I have already sorted it out for you. If you read it according to my way of thinking, you probably won't feel uncomfortable.

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I saw the tweet on a certain video at noon yesterday, so I came to Tomato to look for it. I have seen the update so far. Overall, it is pretty good. There are some flaws in the early stage, and I have dug a lot of holes that I haven't filled yet, but it doesn't look bad. Come on, author [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

This book is calming to read, not mindless, but if I slow down my reading speed, I will read page by page, use my brain, and my heart will not be so impetuous. It seems that the story is so natural. The protagonist has always been a kind of person, a person who has his own principles and can stick to it for a lifetime. I am very touched. The love in the book is also very brilliant. Meeting, getting to know each other, staying together, step by step, is not as fast as Shuangwen. I love reading Shuangwen the most, but I think this book is very different from the Shuangwen I have read before. The previous Shuangwen was like KFC, and it was all about showing off, but this book is like a steamed fish, and it tastes delicious if you taste it carefully. Friends who want to read book reviews to guide the way, no need to hesitate, come and read it