In Detective Conan, Being a Full Member of the Organization Is Just Too Good

The writing is superb, how can I put it, the daily plot has a main line, the writing is good, and the character creation is OK, but there are three shortcomings in my opinion, one is that there are relatively few emotional scenes with Shiho in the front, the second is that there is a fake Haibara Ai, and the third is that I think the protagonist is too kind to some people on the red side. To be honest, you are too merciful, so merciful that I don't know where to go. You didn't kill Shuichi Akai, and later you didn't kill Toru Amuro. You also said that you liked Toru Amuro more than Shuichi Akai, and that he shouldn't die in a place like this. Then don't write it, and force yourself not to die. There are more than 300 chapters so far. There are so many opportunities to kill the red side, and you have written so many direct rival scenes, but in the end, you didn't kill a key character. What do you mean? I understand that the emotional drama of the protagonist in the early stage was bad. I understand that you created a fake Haibara Ai. I also understand that Shuichi Akai was not killed later. I can tolerate it, but at least there should be a degree. I don't know what to say about you. Your writing is very good, but the shortcomings are very big. Let me see how you come back later. If you don't kill a main character on the red side, then what the hell are you writing? Also, you are really classic and will not follow the original plot. Please don't write pure black in the introduction. And the hydrology at the back is so serious that I don't know what I'm writing. Also, the emotional plot between you and Miyano Shiho was very OOC. But no matter what, I actually have only one purpose for saying so much. I really like this novel, but how you write it is really annoying. I don't know what to say. That's it.

It's very good. I've basically read all the Conan fanfics on Tomato. The subject matter of this one is very new. It's about the same novelty as "Gin Doesn't Want to Work". It's quite interesting and the character design isn't broken. Currently, I'm leaning toward the black side. I just don't know how to get along well with Xiao Ai. I'm kind of looking forward to how the author will handle it. The people in the Black Organization are usually ignored by everyone. You must know that they are also people of flesh and blood, with their own stories and their own personalities. So I like this book very much, but the number of words is too few. I hope the author will not be ungrateful.

I really like this style of Conan writing. Even someone like me who has only read a little bit finds it very attractive. The male protagonist seems indifferent, but in fact he is very funny at heart, and the female protagonist Xiao Ai makes me want to stop [admiration][admiration][admiration]

To briefly describe this book, the reasoning component is very low (those who like to watch mystery plots can run away). The main plot is Black's relaxed daily writing based on the Conan world (the Black's character in this book is at least 50% less evil than the original). Highlights of this book: 1. Most members of Black are addicted to the game (including Gin) 2. All members of the Black Tokyo branch have various awards from the police, including the Tokyo Good Citizen Award, the Osaka Hero Award, etc. (Find the psychological shadow area of the red square bourbon) 3. The heroine Miyano Shiho (hasn't become smaller) has become a homebody. 4. Gin and Sonoko teamed up for CP (this should be a CP combination that has never been seen in any fanfic, anyway, I haven't seen it), and for some reason Gin showed signs of being manipulated. 5. Summary of the characters of the members of the black team. They have a kind-hearted Tequila face, are addicted to the game Chianti, are socially afraid of Cohen, are the Wolf Warriors (Wolf God) Calvados, and are the otaku Miyano Shiho (who is addicted to games and TV series). The persecution of the red side in this book is quite severe, but there are not many red-black battles, and the main focus is on the black side on a daily basis (they often collide with Conan during team building). Black's character design has also changed a lot compared to the original work, but two words are "good-looking".

This could have been ok, there weren't many purely dark ones, and even less the heroine was Shiho, and the content was also very interesting, just like the game. I don't think the author was fooled, because I've read a lot of detective fanfics, but there was basically no innovation. They were either fighting against organizations or investigating cases, which was boring to read. But this one was different. It was very comfortable to read, and it didn't feel boring at all. Overall, it was an interesting and pure dark novel, but the author specified that he had a side job. What's wrong with you, my wife? 🫵🤨

This book is really well written. Normally, Conan fans all write about how bad the people in the black organization are. This book definitely shows that each person has a unique personality and personal hobbies outside of the mission.

I've been smiling ever since I read this novel. It's a different kind of Conan fanfic. It's really interesting. If you're in a bad mood, take a look. If you're depressed, take a look. In short, you'll feel very good after reading it. Highly recommended!!

I have read a lot of Conan fandoms, and this one is really good. It has a single female protagonist, Arcana, and I saw a different Black Side. Everyone on the Red Side has their own life, and the same goes for Black Side.

Not bad. The protagonist is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. Indeed, because he was a chatterbox in his previous life, the plot is pretty good so far. You don't need to read what some people say about Xiao Ai. The character hates the black organization. Don't talk about white-eyed wolves. It seems quite interesting so far. If anyone wants to ask, you can ask me. Wulatai, you are right if you say so

It's so beautifully written, I love it! Finally, someone made the major members of my winery look like real people. From all the major Conan fandoms I've read before, I feel like the winery employees are like killing machines, with no sense of existence at all. The flaw may be that the protagonist is too invincible and there is not much confrontation between red and black, but that's okay. Also, Hide Akai got off the line a little too quickly once, and was disabled in a head-on confrontation. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍