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The writing is superb, how can I put it, the daily plot has a main line, the writing is good, and the character creation is OK, but there are three shortcomings in my opinion, one is that there are relatively few emotional scenes with Shiho in the front, the second is that there is a fake Haibara Ai, and the third is that I think the protagonist is too kind to some people on the red side. To be honest, you are too merciful, so merciful that I don't know where to go. You didn't kill Shuichi Akai, and later you didn't kill Toru Amuro. You also said that you liked Toru Amuro more than Shuichi Akai, and that he shouldn't die in a place like this. Then don't write it, and force yourself not to die. There are more than 300 chapters so far. There are so many opportunities to kill the red side, and you have written so many direct rival scenes, but in the end, you didn't kill a key character. What do you mean? I understand that the emotional drama of the protagonist in the early stage was bad. I understand that you created a fake Haibara Ai. I also understand that Shuichi Akai was not killed later. I can tolerate it, but at least there should be a degree. I don't know what to say about you. Your writing is very good, but the shortcomings are very big. Let me see how you come back later. If you don't kill a main character on the red side, then what the hell are you writing? Also, you are really classic and will not follow the original plot. Please don't write pure black in the introduction. And the hydrology at the back is so serious that I don't know what I'm writing. Also, the emotional plot between you and Miyano Shiho was very OOC. But no matter what, I actually have only one purpose for saying so much. I really like this novel, but how you write it is really annoying. I don't know what to say. That's it.

It's very good. I've basically read all the Conan fanfics on Tomato. The subject matter of this one is very new. It's about the same novelty as "Gin Doesn't Want to Work". It's quite interesting and the character design isn't broken. Currently, I'm leaning toward the black side. I just don't know how to get along well with Xiao Ai. I'm kind of looking forward to how the author will handle it. The people in the Black Organization are usually ignored by everyone. You must know that they are also people of flesh and blood, with their own stories and their own personalities. So I like this book very much, but the number of words is too few. I hope the author will not be ungrateful.

I really like this style of Conan writing. Even someone like me who has only read a little bit finds it very attractive. The male protagonist seems indifferent, but in fact he is very funny at heart, and the female protagonist Xiao Ai makes me want to stop [admiration][admiration][admiration]

To briefly describe this book, the reasoning component is very low (those who like to watch mystery plots can run away). The main plot is Black's relaxed daily writing based on the Conan world (the Black's character in this book is at least 50% less evil than the original). Highlights of this book: 1. Most members of Black are addicted to the game (including Gin) 2. All members of the Black Tokyo branch have various awards from the police, including the Tokyo Good Citizen Award, the Osaka Hero Award, etc. (Find the psychological shadow area of the red square bourbon) 3. The heroine Miyano Shiho (hasn't become smaller) has become a homebody. 4. Gin and Sonoko teamed up for CP (this should be a CP combination that has never been seen in any fanfic, anyway, I haven't seen it), and for some reason Gin showed signs of being manipulated. 5. Summary of the characters of the members of the black team. They have a kind-hearted Tequila face, are addicted to the game Chianti, are socially afraid of Cohen, are the Wolf Warriors (Wolf God) Calvados, and are the otaku Miyano Shiho (who is addicted to games and TV series). The persecution of the red side in this book is quite severe, but there are not many red-black battles, and the main focus is on the black side on a daily basis (they often collide with Conan during team building). Black's character design has also changed a lot compared to the original work, but two words are "good-looking".

This book is really well written. Normally, Conan fans all write about how bad the people in the black organization are. This book definitely shows that each person has a unique personality and personal hobbies outside of the mission.

This could have been ok, there weren't many purely dark ones, and even less the heroine was Shiho, and the content was also very interesting, just like the game. I don't think the author was fooled, because I've read a lot of detective fanfics, but there was basically no innovation. They were either fighting against organizations or investigating cases, which was boring to read. But this one was different. It was very comfortable to read, and it didn't feel boring at all. Overall, it was an interesting and pure dark novel, but the author specified that he had a side job. What's wrong with you, my wife? 🫵🤨

I have read a lot of Conan fandoms, and this one is really good. It has a single female protagonist, Arcana, and I saw a different Black Side. Everyone on the Red Side has their own life, and the same goes for Black Side.

I've been smiling ever since I read this novel. It's a different kind of Conan fanfic. It's really interesting. If you're in a bad mood, take a look. If you're depressed, take a look. In short, you'll feel very good after reading it. Highly recommended! !

Not bad. The protagonist is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. Indeed, because he was a chatterbox in his previous life, the plot is pretty good so far. You don't need to read what some people say about Xiao Ai. The character hates the black organization. Don't talk about white-eyed wolves. It seems quite interesting so far. If anyone wants to ask, you can ask me. Wulatai, you are right if you say so

Nice! A very good Conan fanfic. Character details and emotions are described delicately. The author handles the relationship between people very well. There are also some laughs. Not much else to say. Among tomatoes, he is definitely considered a good Conan fan.

The content written is very interesting, and I can only say that the author's imagination is also very big. There is no shortage of words in writing so many pictures, and the author is very skillful in using homophones. From time to time when driving on the highway, I can only say that it has something to do with the author being on the review team [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] The author could reduce the plot of Eshimabukuro Kimie a little bit, but I always feel that adding it like this is a bit uncomfortable. I feel that this female partner is a bit too green tea, and her inner drama could be reduced a bit. Add a little more Miyano Shiho's role, after all, she is the real heroine. Personally, I still don't feel like I want the male protagonist to have pink bubbles with too many people, please [cry][cry][cry]

It's so beautifully written, I love it! Finally, someone made the major members of my winery look like real people. From all the major Conan fandoms I've read before, I feel like the winery employees are like killing machines, with no sense of existence at all. The flaw may be that the protagonist is too invincible and there is not much confrontation between red and black, but that's okay. Also, Hide Akai got off the line a little too quickly once, and was disabled in a head-on confrontation. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

This content is very exciting, rich, and dizzying. It is full of amazing details and unique insights, and each chapter is like a shining gem, attracting us to explore and discover. The content is rich and exciting, like a colorful picture, every stroke is full of vividness and vitality. It not only provides a wealth of knowledge, but also triggers our in-depth thinking about the world, giving us a deeper understanding and appreciation of life. The brilliance and richness of this content is like an endless treasure, and each excavation can bring us new surprises and revelations. Its depth and breadth are breathtaking, and every time we read it we gain new insights and inspirations.

It's so beautiful. Mainly because I think it's quite funny and it feels more vivid. It made me laugh so hard! Come on, author! I haven't seen such an interesting article in a long time! ! Come on come on!

I have finished reading all of the book, and let me talk about my feelings. The protagonist is a cold-faced killer who is similar to Gin. He mainly believes in money. In this novel, he has changed a lot of his feelings about the black organization. It feels like a harmonious company. In addition, most of his descriptions are about the organization and the main line as a supplement. This book is mostly about daily life and there is very little main line. But overall, it is a very novel feeling. Those who have a good impression of the black organization can read it.

It's really good. It's the best one I've watched in Conan so far. It has a single female protagonist and focuses on the life line. It simplifies the over-and-over cases and looks at what's happening in the world of Conan from another perspective.

The description is very delicate, the plot is very funny, the character design is quite interesting, the author is very attentive, the quality of the novel is much better than the previous one, except for the first three chapters which are a bit slow, there are no major shortcomings.

It's very beautiful. It's really rare to see such a beautiful pure black Ke Wen. The character is very vivid. The author greatly updates quickly [Love][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I'm so sorry! I haven't commented after watching it for so long! I've been following it from the beginning! The book is beautiful! It was when there were a lot of Xiao Ai's books that everyone wrote in blood to beg not to make it smaller, but the author agreed not to make it smaller, okay! Let's get to the point! This is a different Black Square book! Black is like a big family, with some fighting and fighting, and some living in harmony. After watching it for so long, I have forgotten the characters. I only remember the socially fearful Cohen, the bold Long Silan, the pretentious male protagonist, the contrasting cute cat Shirley, and the carefree Kittian (she can be He is the first person to take advantage of Shirley) He takes the gin that the protagonist has no choice but to pamper, and the all-purpose vodka. The most important thing is the big boss who is very kind to everyone. Every time he calls, the first thing he says is my child. Isn't this kind? The organization also organizes frequent team building sessions to create a warm family

The best Conan fanfic I have ever seen! Here you can see: Vodka transforms into idol fans and dances trendy dances Gin turned from a question maker into a question solver and raised the banner Tequila transforms into Mumu and spends time with primary school students day and night. [You take a closer look] Being involved in gangs is work, being an enthusiastic citizen is life [laughing]

This book is quite nice, and the author has done a great job. When you read it, you will feel a contrasting cuteness, and sometimes you will feel a little knowing smile when you read some parts.

A sultry man who wants to show off clearly writes that being cold and cold is his disguise. It's weird and not good to watch (the part where I first came into contact with Shirley was so awkward, and then I suddenly started calling the protagonist) I personally recommend a successful aloof male god - Chi Feichi,

So far, the writing is good. There isn't much description of Black's character in the original work anyway, so it works well with the writing style and it can accept the magic modification. The heroine is most likely Shirley. Looking at the latest photos of Aso, I feel like there is still a role. However, Nanliang is still too weird. As long as it is not really involved, it is barely acceptable to have a role. If it is added, it can only change the gender. It depends on the author's handling. If it is good, I will add the last star.

It's good to watch. The characters in the organization are described in detail by the author. The black characters are portrayed as good guys by Conan [smile][smile]

So pretty, so pretty. There is no need to say anything, just read the content and you will know. Shirley might be a bit annoying when she first appears, but that's all. But, it only takes a minute or two. Later he became honest when paying for the protagonist. So, it's still good. 😀😀

Very beautiful♥♥♥♥(ง •̀_•́)งCome on(ง •̀_•́)งCome on. The plot written by the author is very good, especially the harmony and love in the organization. The protagonist is cold on the outside but very warm on the inside, which makes me feel that Lin Jiayou is cute in contrast. To sum it up in just four words, it's not a loss if you fall into the trap.

The author has opened up his imagination and created a novel "Ke Xue" world, which is quite interesting. What's special is that almost all members of Black are "good people". The author has also slightly modified the images of many Black characters. I personally feel that it is very good and I won't fall asleep after reading it. However, the author is a bit watery in some chapters, but I can forgive it and it is still highly recommended! (Please do not comment on your personal opinions)

Yes, the setting of the protagonist is quite good, and the heroine is also good. It's just that the protagonist keeps holding a black umbrella, so it's a bit unclear. Maybe it's foreshadowing. Come on [eat melon]

It's very interesting. Too many fans focus on the original case content. Now I'm a bit tired of the eyes. I'd better write more innovative plots. The current content is quite to my liking.

It's really good👍, and it vividly describes everyone in the winery that we don't pay much attention to.