[Quick Pass] the Villain Needs to Increase His Favorability

When I read the first part of The Second World, I was always unsure whether Gong was the same person, but when I saw the 'senior brother' in the back, I "confirmed that they are the same person" [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] This book really makes people want to continue reading! ! ! I am very picky, but this book is so well written! ! ! (ง •̀_•́)ง Cheers for you! ! ! ! ! ! ☆ * . ☆ . ∧＿∧∩* ☆ * ☆ (∀)/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ (ノ

After reading Chapter 50, I would like to give the author some suggestions. As for Shi Yao, the actor's identity in the original world, since he is the actor, he should have a strong and even obsessive awareness of acting. He should be able to have a deep understanding of the character and become the character himself, instead of being like the first or second world. How to choose to let people around the character quickly accept the change in the character's personality. If the system did not mention the OOC conditions at the beginning, I might not want to say anything more, but the problem is that there is such a requirement. There is no explanation for a person's sudden change in temperament, which is really strange. Acting requires you to take on the role and become the character itself rather than letting the character become you. As an actor, Shi Yao cannot fail to realize this and be inconsistent. Where the character design is placed, it does not necessarily have to follow the original plot and the original owner to do what is not OOC. The character can be improved while retaining the characteristics of the character. The senior brother himself is cold and selfish. Another way of thinking is to be cold and protective. In the end, the feeling of being "cold" and "the flower of the mountain" cannot be lost. The original plot does not mention whether the senior brother is upright, so the author can polish the senior brother, which is a good job. In this way, the image of senior brother becomes much more three-dimensional and distinct, instead of being the same, it is all about Shi Yao's kindness and tolerance after his arrival. The same goes for the school bully in the third world. No matter how he changes, his unruly temperament cannot be changed. The OOC is so obvious that it's a bit hard to stand. The world of Little Star was considered a world that buffered Shi Yao's emotions, so I didn't pay much attention to it. Of course, these are just my personal opinions. It can be seen that the author insisted on writing this book and it is already very good. At least the general framework and plot direction should be written down. It is great [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

This book is very interesting. Although sometimes the main character is a bit feminized, the main character is still quite strong, and several worlds are very novel. It's just that the rating is so low, it really shouldn't be, at least it's over nine points. The ending of each world is a bit abrupt

It's okay, but I feel that the transition of the love line is not very well written. Overall, it is very interesting, but not many people read it, and I didn't read it for a long time. There are really too few comments. Let me comment [shy][shy]

The ending book introduced by Tomato can be completed directly, but I like sweet ones, and the relationship between these two is a bit hard, so let's go

I found a treasure novel. It's super good-looking. It's very sweet and not trivial. The two protagonists have distinct personalities. That's why so few people have read it. They haven't rated it yet. It's a very interesting novel. I guarantee it with my more than ten years of book experience. Trust me [laughing]

So happy, so happy. Others paid for it, but I watched it for free. Is this Tomato? Love, love, love, love, love it so much, support, support, support, support [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

For me, this novel just touches on the emotional line, and the love story rarely ends at the end. Not so exciting love. The story is still good, very interesting, and every time it is a new beginning.

It's beautiful, I love watching it, why is no one watching it [I'm about to cry]

The writing is good and I think it looks good. [Blowing kiss]

Only a skeleton without flesh and blood, looking up close the beauty is beautiful and withered bones

I like it so much. After I confirmed my relationship, I started chasing my husband. Every world is super sweet. I like it so much.

So pretty, so sweet, so damn good

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, too love

Really pretty

I love it so much, the first world is really beautiful

Well enough. Demining: The first world has a secondary CP. (Hopefully this can be explained in the introduction)

I saw a world, it was really beautiful

If you like to read "Save Little Sweet", you can join in. It's quite sweet.

It's quite good to watch, but there are too many career parts. It's like a career mission, but there is very little love part. If you like to watch career missions, you can watch it.

Nice! ! (˘ ³˘)❤[Adoration][adoration]Why is it that no one reads such a beautiful book? [What][what]

Looks good, but no one sees it

Very good, very exciting

Wow wow wow, it's really good to read, I finished it in a short while...

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

I looked at the master's plane first, and it can still withstand very strong people. It can be regarded as a double strong, and it seems that the double section is also The plot is corny, but then again ~ this book was written a few years ago, and besides, I'm a bitch, I love reading it How to say it? Most people may be persuaded to read the first plane, but if you really like this book, you can skip the first plane and read the second plane. Because the first plane may have just been written by the author, and the writing is not very good. I just look at the later planes first, and then go back and look at the first plane. The plot behind it is quite interesting, so it's still acceptable when watching that plane. The first level is to attack and be bullied, and then there are many people who say not to let those who are innocent for the first time and so on. Speaking of attacking the Holy Mother, I actually don't feel much about it. The change is too big, can't it be done step by step? When I first entered the small world, I used my original personality. To be honest, I don't like it. It's obvious and embarrassing, very sacred and weird, just like a big change in temperament.

It's so good. I finished reading it a long time ago. I just remembered to give it a good review. Hehe.

Kuaiwen sweet stories are about 30 chapters into a world. They should all be considered love at first sight. I personally think they are good-looking. If you like it, you can read it.

It's so beautiful, I almost cried at the last scene

Very nice! ! ! The whole text is sweeter