[E-Sports] After Retiring, I Fell in Love with a Big Guy Online

The plot is quite good, but it needs to be scratched a little. The punctuation and wording in a few chapters are a bit problematic, which affects the viewing. The settings of the two male protagonists are quite good. It was towards the end when Gong said that he and his teammates were thinking of retiring, which looked a little sad. That is to say, in the end, they can only be teammates for one or two years. Although it is very realistic, it also feels a bit difficult to accept.

It needs to be improved. There are not many good female characters in it. They feel silly and love to cause trouble. Because it is watched by female viewers, it will turn away many readers. It cannot be said that girls in dual male protagonists must be villains. What impressed me the most was that there was a meatball in it and she said something normal. And the content, not to mention whether it was a cool novel or not, was just very frustrating to watch. Fortunately, the male protagonist opened his mouth and the ending was okay.

What's good to watch is that Yan Jin's past five years were too hard... When the misunderstanding was resolved, the writing was okay, but it's still a pity, five years, the best five years... And the outside world doesn't know about their bond, so I feel it's a pity. I really want to see netizens cry after their story is exposed, it must be interesting~ But it's acceptable to end it like this. After all, I wanted to give up several times in the middle, so it's just right to end it so quickly. The double c extra is good to watch (✪ω✪) and also very annoying (✪ω✪) Shi Feng and Song Aiyu were also easy to laugh at, but there were too few and I didn't see enough! One star is deducted simply because the female supporting role was not ruthless enough to be removed from the production line. After five years, she has been so advantaged. The outside world does not know that Yan Jin and the others feel uncomfortable because she missed five years. It is a pity.

Good-looking, with super positive views! Our Jinjin is really a poor baby, but his moon illuminates him, and they will be together happily forever! I wish all CPs happiness forever! Come on (actually I feel a little shortcoming is that I don't have a specific imagination of Jin's appearance, but Duan is a lot of the appearance that is described, I feel that the writing is a bit biased, I'm sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, just my personal opinion, if you mind, I can delete it QAQ)

It's a very good novel. It was a bit rough in the early stages. I felt really wronged. I really wanted to hug my little assistant. After all the hardships, I will be happy in the future! ! ! Sweet and sadistic style, memories kill~, the plot has twists and turns, the emotions are more intense, it is too much for one person to bear, but fortunately it goes in both directions!

I spent a morning reading this book. Let me summarize it. In this book, the emotional scenes of the two male protagonists are very direct, there won't be a lot of procrastination, everything is there, and it is well organized, and the top and bottom can be connected. There will be no male protagonist Shen'an. He is from a wealthy family, but there will not be some not so good plots like those written by wealthy presidents. They are all written around the plot of the two male protagonists, and misunderstandings are resolved quickly. After all, after 5 years, there are two pairs of deputy CPs. The plot of the first pair of sub-CPs has been finished, and the second pair of sub-CPs seems to have not been completely finished by the author. CP is very good, but the only drawback is that the plot seems to be missing a bit. There could be more extras, which may be a little tiring for the author, but there is no way. It is very interesting to write, because this is an e-sports article with a lot of content about e-sports. What should I say? I just feel that there is a bit too much, or too much, and I feel like it, but this book is worth reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Adoration][Admiration][laughing][laughing]

Duan Mingyue [Love] Shen Yanjin is so sweet, Mingyue's IQ is very online, Xiao Yanjin is also very cute and shy, in short he is very, very good-looking [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

They are two very cute people, their emotions are very smooth, and their memories are intertwined well. The only flaw is Shen Yanjin's self-narration in the early stage, which means that the inner feelings are too exposed. This should be due to the bias in the use of words and language expression. In comparison, Duan Mingyue's inner activities in the later period are very good, just right, the image is substantial, full and vivid. Love that goes both ways is the most beautiful. They are good. (Of course, twisted love, I love it😍) As for Miss Lu, well, people are always sad... From chasing dreams to being corrupted by greed, people inevitably change from shining to being twisted, dark and extreme. Therefore, losing my true heart is the scariest thing, because I am no longer me.

This book is really a treasure among Tomato's two male protagonists! ! ! ! ! The writing is very good and not awkward, and the ending is very different from the endings of ordinary e-sports novels. Shou is not made cute, and Gong is very considerate and considers Shou's feelings. This is also the first time I have seen an e-sports article about retiring at the beginning. I really don't lose money by investing in it. I highly recommend it! ! !

Except that the ending is a bit rushed, the character description, psychology, details, foreshadowing, etc. Are all done well. When I saw some misunderstandings between Duan Mingyue and Yingold, it was really a bit heart-wrenching. This also shows that this book is good. If possible, I hope to publish more books. I like it.

I wish CP sweetness and peace of mind, but what should I say, some plots and some descriptions are particularly misogynistic, that is, girls are not good at playing e-sports, and then Gong doubts whether Shou is a boy or because girls cannot have such good gaming skills. Anyway, after reading it, I actually feel that Tiantian is a bit misogynistic.

So pretty! ! ! ! Although I don't understand the game part at all, he is the top love brain of our Jinjin baby. Without him, my CP would not be possible! ! ! Baby Yueyue is also a belated love brain. Love should be discussed by two love brains! ! ! ! ! Finally, dear author, I urgently hope that you can make the relationship between Fengfeng and Ai Ai more interesting. I want to see Ai Ai fired! ! ! !

Let's make up for the extra story!! I want to show off the horse and let the whole network know that Sliver is uoow!!! He also put on a vest and chased the bright moon [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

If nothing else, it's just good. I'm really, really, really satisfied with this kind of unconventional e-sports novel in Tomato. It's not bad. It really made me like it so much that it forced me to comment.

A very good e-sports article. The plot is very interesting and exciting. The only flaw is probably the deputy cp. It is obviously not finished because the author did not finish it for unknown reasons, but the rest is very good. I personally like it very much. Although the story is short, it is very complete. Of course, it would be good if it were longer. I still recommend it to babies [Sending Hearts] [Blowing Kisses]

I read it in a small size so the reading time is short. Overall very sweet! The young lovers last forever. It's just that Lu Yuan is so brainless as a villain, which made me angry and laughing at the same time. If there is an official announcement or a spin-off, it will be easy to mess with

The emotional line is very delicate, the sub-CP is super sweet, the author's writing style is very good, and the e-sports article is also very good. Mainly, it is recommended to read, and it cannot be decided by rating it. The main thing is to take a look with your own eyes, and then you will know the treasure in the article [Blow Kiss]

To put it simply, I really don't play MOA games very much. Playing with my friends is only at the entry level. I feel like the author has really played the game. The good descriptions of the game are dazzling, but I feel inexplicably wonderful, especially the linkage, adapting to the version, jungle processing, and playing routines. It really feels good, but the part before the vest is dropped in the middle makes me a little uncomfortable. , Quietly wiped my tears for a while, and then came back to watch it. It was really good, the regret of missing it, the reflection of the moon, and the final ending is the warm feeling in my heart, we want to be together forever. By the way, the author likes the series very much. From the main CP to the deputy CP to the extras, there are so many different brothers. Can the extras be finished one day? I really want to know what happened to the two of them.

Good-looking\(//∇//)\[flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] is the follow-up to another pair of CPs. Big [flying kiss][flying kiss][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's great. Although it ends a little hastily, it's really good to watch. You guys should go and watch it! ! ! It's not as deep as a bloody sadomasochistic relationship. Both people have brains and completely trust each other. The characters of teammates are also very eye-catching, and the occasional compliments are also very interesting [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Overall it's pretty good-looking, but the length is too short, and the first half is pretty good. The second half ended a bit too quickly. It's a pity that the competition is not included in the official competition. Overall it looks pretty good. There are very few Tomato books that I have read through in its entirety.

Super good-looking, real Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people! ! ! ! Both male protagonists have grown brains and are so sweet! ! The sub-cp is also so sweet, wow wow, it's really hard for me not to love it,,, this book is the first book I found that I read in one sitting after not finding a book I liked for a long time! ! ! Although it has something to do with the e-sports theme, it is really good-looking! ! ! Show them all to me! !

The writing is good. It's the first book I've read on Tomato. The ending of the main plot is a bit rushed. I hope to add more extra chapters. The writing is also good. The plot is more traditional and sweet, but I always feel that the author is a boy. . . From some literal expressions, I feel

It's very interesting, and the author's writing is very good. Generally speaking, it's difficult to write about this kind of fictional world view, games, etc., But I think the author writes it very well, and I also like the emotional line between the protagonist and the deputy CP. The only shortcoming is that it is too short! Finally, we met by luck.

The plot is very fascinating and very smooth, making people want to read more after reading it. After reading more than 70 chapters, I found that there are only more than 90 chapters in total, and I was a little bit broken. Don't really read the ratings. This article is really great and great.

I have been reading this novel for 10 years (Yan 3 Dan 7) and basically everyone has read it. The quality of this article is really high. It is the kind of novel that you stay up late to finish. Even when the plot is dull, it is very exciting to read.

It's so good. I couldn't help but finish watching it. I really wanted to see them compete in international competitions. I feel so sorry that I didn't see the main CP revealed. But I believe they have publicly lived a happy life in a place where we can't see it. *^O^* In the end... It's really good-looking.

Love this story! ! So sweet, so sweet! ! [Send heart][Send heart] I like Shen Yanjin's triple vest so much! ! [Laughing][laughing] Thank you to the author for this novel! ! [Send heart][Send heart] But! ! ! ! ! Not enough to watch! ! ! ! ! ! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy]

This is the book, how can I say it? The whole movie is also very warm. When they find out their identities, there is no sense of dissonance. When they are together, it is also very good and the pace is a bit slow. In fact, as a deputy CP, I may prefer watching Jiang Fu. Because the description is more detailed, the other parts are a bit brief and disappear as soon as you get to the point. ૮₍ ¬ ᴗ ¬₎ა

The characters are all three-dimensional, the overall story is smooth and beautiful, and the game part is not just a random sketch. It's not a long book. I came here when I read it. I didn't expect it to be very good. The rating is a bit low.