[Quick Transmission] the Heartthrob Me Is Always Shown Love by the Yandere Villain

It looks good, but it doesn't feel very complete. Didn't it transfer everything when it was transferred from another software?

It's a very interesting book, I couldn't stop at all. I think the chapters are a bit short [laughing and crying], and some chapters don't seem to be complete, but I really like Xu Bai and Li Wenjin! Xu Bai should be a strategist of Polaris (organization), and Li Wenjin should be the commander of Polaris, and since the end of an ancient world, they will have a ring on their fingers. And only they can see it. It's really sweet [laughs] Very pretty, very pretty, very good [Learned]

It's not bad, but the one with the demon concubine at the end doesn't feel very clean, but if it's just the two of them, then it's okay. The last one doesn't have a small punishment attack, hahaha, but the previous ones are all good, so go for it.

Please help promote it. First of all, I have to say that the concept is good. The first interface is very beautiful. The concepts of the subsequent interfaces are also novel, but their shortcomings are also obvious. Gong's yandere attribute has gradually deteriorated (a bit lost his personal charm). Secondly, the superb writing was too hasty and missed every shining point. And the penultimate page feels like the author is in a particularly unstable state as if he wants to end it right away. But the advantage of this short story is that it is very creative. If it is polished well, it can become a masterpiece. Actually I want to give it 4 stars⭐️

I kind of want to know what happened to that system in the end.

It's okay, but some places are not explained clearly.

Suddenly it disappeared, too fast and not enough to see

The writing is very good and deserves five stars. If it were not only five stars, I would give it more. Although each story is short, the content and details are very good. The two characters Xu Bai and Lao Gong are also well written. They are very interesting and highly recommended.

It's super good-looking, I recommend everyone to watch [Blowing Kiss] Super, super, super beautiful! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

[Like] [Like] [Like] It's very beautiful, very sweet and not cruel, but it disappeared all at once, not enough to watch.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. I like Shuangwen [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Still pretty good-looking [shy]

A very good novel. . .

To be honest, the penultimate plane scared me to death.

It's nice, it's from the author's previous book

The character setting seemed okay and quite eye-catching, but the ending felt a bit too hasty.

The writing was okay, the characters were distinct, and the story was multi-layered, but it ended too suddenly, and it felt like it wasn't finished.

It looked good, but the ending was a bit sudden.

It looks good, but I really want to know how the little system looks like in the end [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It's good to watch, but it ends very suddenly and is a bit lacking.

It's good to watch fast-paced movies occasionally. It's nice.

The writing is great, I just hope there will be a sequel, sweet love

It's okay, Su Shuang's sweet article.

I haven't seen enough yet.

Beautiful and worth recommending. [Like][Like][Like][Like]

I like it, it's close to love at first sight!

So beautiful [blowing kiss], I love it so much

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I don't have any good words to describe it, it's beautiful.

Not bad, not bad