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Welcome to give us your opinions [send heartfelt messages] Although no one seems to be watching it... I'd better keep updating it, as if I'm writing a big movie. I can't let the movie have no ending [crying]. Just treat it as writing for yourself. Maybe some knives, there were quite a lot of battle damage scenes. Volume 4 "Memory of Time and Space" [Writing and emotion are recommended first! ] Mainly writes about love and bondage. It takes over Ga Xiao's confession in the third volume. The content includes time and space transfer, life cycle, time reversal, identity replacement, etc. This is the best written volume! "Heaven and earth hang in the sky, connecting the past and present; time flows backward, and cause and effect return to zero..." Volume 3 "Return to Adri" [Preferred for plot and characters! ] Mainly writes about sacrifice, oaths and fate. The name is cliché but the plot is definitely not. I personally like this volume! Everyone has their own ending and story, which is a volume with a strong sense of fate! Including the destined Jia Xiao, the deputy CP who fell in love and killed each other, and the absolutely loyal deputy CP. This volume is long, but the ending is worth it for everyone, and it will be exciting after the mid-term! "Don't let the future me wait too long..." The second volume "Breaking through the Abyss" is mainly about fighting and redemption. Jia Xiao is very handsome, and Jia Luo who was damaged in the later battle is very handsome! (Reworking the writing style) "It's noisy outside, but I hear your voice..." The first volume "Twins" is mainly about guardianship. The style is more cheerful, somewhat similar to early Kaibao. (The first volume has been revised! The second volume is being revised. The fourth volume is the best in writing!! You can read the fourth volume first!!) Jia Xiao HE is sweet but not greasy, but ruthless. [Shy][Shy][Shy] (The feelings are mainly in the fourth volume, the knives are mainly in the third volume, the battle damage is mainly in the second volume, and the most relaxing thing is the first volume) I respect the original work and love pure love, so I don't like it to be too OOC or inappropriate [shy] There will be daily sweet stories in the extras, and the extras will be as sweet as the main text has! !

Teacher!! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] I like all the people and situations in this book. My wife's writing is also very good [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] I feel like Ah Xiao is very worried about Jia Luo [Blow a kiss] I don't have a lot of vocabulary, but my wife's article is definitely a masterpiece!

The teacher's writing style is excellent, and the character settings are almost non-ooc. The characters in the teacher's writings are as if they are alive, and the detailed descriptions and characterizations are really amazing! (Especially when giving out knives) The teacher is very active and will give us some paragraphs to guide us in reading, making the article not difficult to understand. There will be a few extra chapters at the end of each volume of sadomasochism, which is sweet. The first two volumes are the original daily life of a homebody. When the knife is damaged during the battle, it is a big loss. After the knife is replenished, it is the same decline. It is a kind of abuse first and then sweetness. In the third volume, their encounter is like God's arrangement and destiny. They don't have to deliberately look for each other, they will meet each other. It is really touching! The tacit understanding such as mutual cooperation and eye contact in the battles in the first two volumes, as well as the family ties at home are also very beautifully depicted! In the first volume, one party is missing, and the other party can go to any lengths to rescue him. When he sees the partner he wants to save in front of him, his unfocused eyes can become clear in an instant, as if the other party is the only one left in the whole world. In the second volume, the mutual rebelliousness between Jia and Xiao was also deeply reflected by the teacher. They are special to each other and can lead each other to the light when the other is trapped in darkness. The teacher writes this sense of redemption vividly and has a strong sense of substitution! "I don't want to lose you again!" "This time, I must save you." The teacher cleverly connected the legend of the God of War with the story he wrote. The emotions of being each other's arms and opposing each other are cleverly interspersed with Jia Xiao's protection of the other when the other is in danger. Jia Xiao's thunder point is also the other's. If someone steps on a thunder, both parties can lose control for each other, risking everything just to protect each other. Jialuo's "willingness to listen to orders" for Xingxin and Xingxin's meticulous affection for Jialuo make each other indispensable in each other's lives. Xiaoxiao will ignore his own safety in order to save Jialuo. Similarly, Jialuo will insist on helping Xinxin regardless of whether his old injuries have healed. These plot details are all very vividly portrayed by the teacher, and the picture in his mind is super strong! The supporting characters written by the teacher are also very three-dimensional and vivid (the following book review contains some spoilers, please read with caution for those who have not read the book). Although the Blue and Pink Twins in the first chapter are villains, they are not pure villains. They are also forced, they just have something they want to protect; Pink replaces Garo's energy with his own energy, making Garo Survived; "I'm sorry, we promised to go back to Gemini together, but I might not be able to do it." "I'll accompany you, pink." The vows the two made when they were children to always be together are very vividly portrayed here. At that moment, their friendship reached its peak. The teacher painted these scenes in a really tear-jerking way. I really loved the first volume when Xiao desperately saved Jia, and how Jia risked his life and took Xiao to escape at the last moment was really loved! All in all, I really love what the teacher wrote about Jia Xiao! Combining Xiao Xin's "I don't want to lose you again" eagerness to save Jia Luo and Jia Luo's instinctive protection of the other party's vow to "always protect Xiao Xin", it's really amazing! Stop reading and read them all for me! ! !

Super pretty! ! ! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Why are so few people commenting? It's so good. The author needs to increase publicity. The characters are not broken, and the plot is interesting. I'm super looking forward to the second volume. I came from Tieba [I'm about to cry]. You stopped updating in Tieba, so I caught up with Tomato. Hurry up and update to break through the abyss! ! I want to see the follow-up! ! I love knives! [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] It's not a reminder, absolutely not Modify the review again! Volume 4 and Volume 3! ! ! I was so blown away! ! ! This writing! This plot! No ooc! ! ! Everyone in the Zhai family is so handsome! ! Not just Jia Xiao! Everyone is so handsome! And not OOC at all! ! ! It simply brings out everyone's strengths to the fullest! And! They are all so smart! ! I love it so much! ! The third volume is also very good! ! The ending was really powerful! It's been a long time since I came back to my senses! I thought the third volume was already the peak! Unexpectedly, I enjoyed reading the fourth volume again! ! Everyone! Not only the supermen, but also all the supporting characters, Ying Xian and Dan Dao, Jiang Jiang and Sai Ao in the third volume, X and Xiao, and Xiao Xin in the fourth volume. They are all so beautiful! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh I want to roll and spin like crazy! ! Let me see them all! !

"Sacrifice of Protection and Redemption" is really great to read. Now that I have finished the third volume, I feel that the author's writing style is really great. This is simply Jia Xiaowen in my mind. I declare that this novel is the best Ga Xiaowen I have ever read! ! ! If you want to read Jia Xiaowen's novel with vivid descriptions, good foreshadowing, and delicate emotions, then this novel is the perfect choice! ! ! !

This book is super nice. The author's writing style is super good, and the characters are well created. Each character has his own personality characteristics, especially the interaction between Superman and Gallo. I really love these two heroes to death [Adoration] [Adoration]. I hope there is more in this book, otherwise I'm afraid it won't be enough [laughing] [laughing]. In short, fans of Kailian can feel free to read it. I love this book so much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's great to watch, the characters in the plot are all very fresh, and there's nothing OOC about it! The author writes with great confidence (I hope Ah Xiao and Jialuo's fighting power will be stronger, the original drama directly killed me) Teacher, please pay attention to rest [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Top post][Top post][Top post]

The writing is really great, it's worth it! The writing is natural, and pictures automatically appear in your mind just by reading the words. It should be sweet, it should be sad, it's easy to even throw yourself into it The details are in place and the article is very coherent. It's really fun for the young couple to have sex [Adoration] I really hope this book gets better and better! ! Come on! !

One particularly good thing about this book is that it has no broken characters and is consistent with the logic of the plot. It has a strong sense of immersion and does not feel disconnected from the supermen in our impression. Whether you simply like to read Kailian or like small cp, it is worth reading.

Great writing 😍😍, I give you a big thumbs up. The updates are much more diligent than mine. 😍😍 This rating may have been lowered maliciously. The author calms down a lot, come on! I think it's well written.

It's really detailed, and the writing style is also very good. It's not OOC!!!!!! Mainly because this article is not OOC! ! ! ! ! ! ! Dear author, as long as you give the order, we will promote you as the new official! ! ! ! !

Like! ! Particularly beautiful, the writing is also very good, [love][love][love][send heart][send heart][send heart][adoration][adoration][adoration][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][laugh]

The teacher is really nice and he writes well. Love it so much! Reading the teacher's book is like watching a Kailian drama, and the teacher wrote some "famous quotes" that can even be used in compositions. The third article is being updated passionately, and I hope that the teacher's work can be seen by more people! Come on! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's good to read, I love reading it, if you have a little bit of candy, I recommend reading it if you like eating knives. This novel is like smearing honey on the knife. I was stunned while eating it. It's super, super, super super good to read. I highly recommend reading it. Please read it quickly! Take a look! Take a look! Take a look! (Screaming) (Dark crawling) (Randomly grabbing an unlucky monkey and pulling him to read this novel together) (Being tortured and crying with the monkey) (Being so sweet that he screamed with the monkey) (Eating a honey-coated knife with the monkey) (Catching handsome and beautiful people with the monkey to read this novel)

The teacher brought us rice with his wonderful writing. After watching the ending in more than an hour, I really enjoyed how Jia and Xiao redeemed each other. The first volume is okay, and the last three volumes are very exciting. Whether it is fighting scenes or daily life, the writing is vivid.

This book is very delicately written about feelings, bit by bit, step by step, both sweet and sad. I am currently reading the fourth volume. I wanted to write this book review a long time ago, but I thought it would be different later on before I finish reading it. What touches and envy me the most about Jia Xiao is that they can give everything for each other, even their lives. But when I see that the little one is injured, Jia Luo's lack of energy may disappear. I really can't stand it anymore. It will be sweet later, right? I'll eat this knife first. Please use less knife later. I really cried to death🥹 Garo is the god of war. They are a chivalrous duo. The setting is very powerful. Don't cut it. I want to see something sweet. In the end, it was really well written. It tortured me a thousand times. It's also really sweet.

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that you cannot regard it as a book to get into trouble, otherwise when you read any Jia Xiaotong humanities in the future, you will feel that it is almost boring (no exaggeration) The stamina is really great. After reading it, I really wanted to write a book with a similar setting. After repeated revisions, I found that only the author's version is the most dramatic, the most sadistic, the most contrasting and outstanding, and the most captivating. Although I am more inclined to Tenzenga, the two people are close friends and brothers in life and death, rather than so-called "lovers". However, there is not much sense of inconsistency when reading this book. There are basically no character issues, and it fits Gaara's cautious character very well. What I want to brag about the most is the third chapter. How come the author is so good at writing! ! ! Whether it's the setting, the advancement of the plot, or the suspense, and the gradually heightened atmosphere, it's all just right. After seeing it, I think it's completely on par with or even much higher than the level of screenwriting for Kaibao's first eight seasons of feature films, and it can be used as a feature film or a movie! Yong Xin gets to know Gaara again in the past (Here Xin Xin also uses Xin Xin's inner struggle to highlight the deep bond between the two), first uses daily life to keep the audience, and deepens the contrast with the subsequent destruction of Adri. One wave after another, the crisis is constantly resolved, and the plot is particularly compact.

I love this book so much! ! From the beginning of school until now, I have finished reading it. I open Tomato Novels every day after school just to see if this book has been updated. It's so good! ! The author is amazing! ! [Adoration][Adoration]

Well written! Everyone's writing in it is great! I just love reading stories about mutual redemption! Madam, you will be my father from now on! ! ! But when will the titanium alloy wood of Jialuo bloom~

The detailed descriptions are super rich, and the foreshadowing is very comfortable. It really seems that the characters have been brought to life. You can imagine the picture just by looking at the text. It really feels like an official joint venture, especially the lyrical description of the environment through scenes, as well as the detailed description and emotional pull. It's really Like a real person, the emotions are really rich and the words are beautiful. It focuses on describing the flow of emotions. In addition, I particularly like the third and fourth chapters. There is a feeling of responsibility and love colliding. It is really refreshing. And this I like you is not said directly, but slowly. The over-the-top plot and foreshadowing recycling are really enjoyable to watch. The key is that the author will sort out the key points first and capture the emotions of the characters very well. The action description is very good. It is the best book I have ever read. Every plot is controlled like a roller coaster. It is very exciting. The emotional feeling of being knifed and sweet at one moment is really very immersive. It feels like one's heart has been pulled, and some people want to guess the plot. It is very exciting. Anyway, it is very beautiful and has many advantages. I won't praise it yet.

It was so well written that I almost cried.

It's super nice to look at, and the character design isn't ruined. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have their own characteristics and world view [smile]

The writing style is very good, and the characters are not broken at all. The story is novel and three-dimensional. I really want to read it. There is a little bit of abuse, and there is a sweetness in the abuse. The little old man is hurt and I cry to death.

Super pretty (✧∀✧)! ! ! ! ! ! The author's writing style is really great! Not OOC at all! ! ! It's so good, the plot, logic and everything are great (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧The author continues to produce food and makes great efforts (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's very beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. I think there are many sentences that are very beautiful. I already have no less than 10 bookmarks, especially the sentence "I bet that sunshine... Will penetrate my heart... And everything lost will come back in another way...", It is very beautiful.

The teacher's writing is very good! The character descriptions are even better! Hardly ooc! There are knives and candies, and the sense of immersion is strong, as if it is right in front of you! Each volume is described in detail! The fight scenes are also very detailed! Not difficult to read! Very beautiful! Highly recommended for everyone to watch!

Really, I don't know why I was so excited when Beware and Gaara fell together, but the author's writing style is very good. It's just that we can have some couple scenes later.

I love these parts of the story. Because I am a person who prefers reading knives, and I particularly like your books. Although I prefer to be careful with my sword, the plot and content of your article gave me a different feeling.

It's pretty good-looking. Overall, it's very good. The relationship between the two is really well described, and there's nothing OOC about it. The cautious character is also vividly described. In a word, it's very good.

The author's writing is really good. I look forward to the follow-up and new works.