Fool, Magic Immunity, Blacksmithing, Archery

Although the protagonist is relatively miserable, a bit stupid, often taken advantage of, often suffers from disadvantages, and is a bit unhappy, the author is able to make the villains bad without making the readers hate them too much, which makes them surprisingly enjoyable to read. In retrospect, the reason is that the protagonist has been making progress, and being taken advantage of has not caused much damage. There are also good people around him, and his mentality is good, which makes people want to get angry but stop. If you think about it carefully, don't many of the protagonists have a miserable beginning? It's just that the book has been miserable for a longer time. It is still suitable for those who are a little patient and want to read cool articles... The current rating is 7.9, Which is not a good score [shy]

It's pretty good, the plot is smooth. I don't pursue rigor or cruelty. People often talk about the blacksmithing part but I don't understand it. As long as it's interesting, there are so many requirements for free. (Note: The author is illiterate, so please do not delve into it. It may be that the sense of substitution is too strong and he has been assimilated.) It's quite interesting. It's one of the better ones in Tomato. The plot is casual. The protagonist doesn't cause trouble and doesn't seek death. It fits the character. It has a single female protagonist. It's not too cliche. It's innovative. I'm looking forward to the plot in the future. However, updates are slow. Five stars for you, keep up the good work.

At present, it seems that it is at least mid-level. The author's control of the plot is very subtle For example, the protagonist is a fool, so he talks to his girlfriend for a lot of things. Then there are the supporting characters, which are always unexpected. A kidnapped child and an ordinary accountant. The portrayal of their growth is very interesting. The perspective of this book can be said to be first-person. The eyes in the text follow the protagonist, so the sense of immersion is very strong. There will be no situation where the reader knows something about him nb, but he himself does not know it. When the protagonist wants to do something very bad, he may not be able to do it due to some reasons, such as massacring a village. This way, there is no sense of guilt. It would be good if the author doesn't go crazy later and dedicates all the characters who don't deserve to die to the plot as a ignition point.

If you like knives, you can check it out. The main character is the Great Sage.

It's good-looking and good-looking, with almost thousands of hours of reading time on my 🍅 platform to ensure it's good-looking. First of all, I feel that there are no flaws in the world view setting. Because everyone has superpowers, long-range weapons such as bows and arrows have not been developed, which is reasonable. Because everyone has superpowers, it makes sense that the protagonist's ability to control superpowers even without superpowers is the protagonist's "superpower" in this world. In comparison, that system is actually the icing on the cake. It is obviously not a traditional system text. The system is just an auxiliary. I really like this and hope nothing will change. Secondly, the novel's description of daily life is very appropriate. On the basis of ensuring the protagonist's combat effectiveness, it writes a lot about the daily life of blacksmithing, and also advances the plot through daily blacksmithing. In more than 100 chapters, he even found a girlfriend because of blacksmithing. It really broke through the routine of traditional systematic novels and was written in a very stylish way. The only drawback is that the update is really too slow. I haven't read it for a month. When I came back, I only updated more than ten chapters. It's really too slow. As a reader, I hope that the author will update more quickly; as a stranger, I hope that writing novels will not affect the author's life and work, and that he will update more quickly in his free time.

I read more than ten chapters and it made me happy. The protagonist father and son met a reasonable high-ranking member of the sect and deliberately beat him half to death. When he was slandered and framed by the little official Sesame, he was able to reason with them.

A good novel should be engaging, entertaining and immersive for the reader. It should have a compelling storyline, interesting characters, great dialogue, and a unique worldview or setting. In addition, excellent novels should also have profound themes and ideas that can arouse readers' thinking and reflection. In short, a good novel should be both interesting and meaningful.

I just caught up with the latest chapter, it's a very good novel. The overall feeling is that it is very solid, with rich details, the characters' IQs are online, the pace is not too rushed, and the writing is okay. It feels narrated, and there are jokes from time to time, such as "I won't buy your horse because it costs the same as me." The most rare thing is that there is no Honkai combat power, low martial arts and pan-demon are carried out to the end. The disadvantage is probably that the update speed is relatively slow, but the balance between speed and quality is difficult to grasp. I hope the author can completely tell the story of this iron fool. Anyway, I still recommend it.

It's good to read, but I'm too tired to keep up with it. I put it on my bookshelf to save more and I'm afraid I'll forget to read it later.

I've finished reading it, I feel good about it. Why are old songs updated so slowly? The rating is too low, 7.5. The steps are well written and quite interesting [thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking]

The logic is smooth, the plot is reasonable, and the fighting descriptions are detailed. It's not a cool novel, but the writing is smooth, concise and eloquent, making me feel like I'm reading a martial arts novel by Jin Yong. The world view is novel, and the advanced setting of cannibalism is cruel. I look forward to the subsequent development. Not bad. So far, there seem to be several obvious foreshadowings. The protagonist and his wife seem to have problems, and their background may be unusual. Let's see how it ends later. It's relatively slow, I hope I won't be an eunuch. I also want to play archery with a bow [face covering]

The story is quite interesting. Unlike other time travels, it is not mindless.

After listening to it for a whole hour, the content is good and the concept is also very good. I am most likely a new author. Although the skeleton is good, there is no flesh. A good book is mainly about the carving of details. Let's talk about the character dialogue😰. The whole article is said by Tie Yuan, old man Tie, the housekeeper, xx, xx. The writing skills are obvious. Give some encouragement to the new author, four stars.

It looks good so far, the plot is flowing, the actions of the protagonist promote the development of the plot, the story is strong, and there are few explanatory texts. Many online articles now look like explanatory texts. The characters are also very three-dimensional. The biggest problem is that the update is slow, which should have lost a lot of readers.

You can take a look at it when you have free time. If you are serious, what should you say? Still a little bit poisonous.

It's unpleasant, for people in the devil's path, this is really unpleasant.

In fact, it stands to reason that the death of Old Man Tie has nothing to do with pig horns.

It's good to read, but it's a little bit toxic, but it's harmless. It's a good book in Tomato

Oh, can you still make your own comments? I write too slowly. It has taken almost a year and I have only written more than 500,000 words. Now here is a summary. To be honest, I didn't expect that I would be able to persevere. I didn't know how to do anything at first, and now I feel like I can't do anything anymore... Every time I write about a new link or a new situation, I find it a challenge. I also often suffer from the inability to think of plots and feel sad that the writing is not satisfactory. There have been countless times when I wanted to give up this book and start another one, but the story was not finished and I was very reluctant to let it go. I have to mention again the original intention of writing this book, which is to practice my writing skills and my ability to write stories. Because what I wanted to write the most was another story. After writing tens of thousands of words, I found it very difficult. I was afraid that the story would be wasted if I could not write it well, so I thought of a science fiction story to practice writing. I wrote tens of thousands more words at the beginning of science fiction, but it was still very difficult, so I started this writing practice book again... So this book is for practicing writing... So if this book can be finished, I want to write the science fiction story in the next one, and the third one is the story I wanted to write the most in the first place... [Face covering] Since it's a pen practice, I'll just finish it, and don't open a new book just because my grades are poor. Otherwise, the new book will be of the same level. It's been almost a year, and I can earn an average of 10 yuan a day... [Face covering] The goal is to finish this book, 1 million words, and complete the story. It doesn't matter even if I fail to write, it's better than not writing at all [face covering] To be honest, I have also fantasized about becoming a god from a book. I also fantasized about the book becoming famous and being read by more people, and finding cooperation to make and sell all the weapons designed in the book, so that I can get two real flower whips for fun... [Face covering] Of course, it may be possible that after writing this book, I will realize that I really have no talent for writing novels, and it is possible that I will not write the other two stories again... In short, let's finish this book first. Regardless of whether it's good or bad, it's all about the level! Thanks to my friends who keep watching me!

It's really good. This book is a rare type among Tomatoes. It's not fancy or blustery, but it's very solid. The author may have some background in military combat.

, But overall it's still pretty good-looking and very frustrating. I feel like I've spent hundreds of chapters [rolling eyes]

It's very interesting. The angle is unique and interesting. It's not the same as other time-travel novels, but the spell system is too rigid.

I think it's pretty good-looking, and the subject matter is quite unique.

Good book. The language is refined, the story has twists and turns, and the characters are delicate!

It's witty and interesting, the details are vivid, the story develops in a reasonable and sudden way, it's very good, I hope to update it more often.

So far, I think it's quite interesting. The plot is not too cliche, but the introduction doesn't appeal to me. But I clicked on it and took a look, and found that the content is pretty good.

It's okay. Blandness can be a style, but it's just too slow -

Except for the starting setting, there are not many good people in the world, but it's pretty good when you get into Shuangwen later. It's quite worth reading. It's not poisonous either.

Not bad. I've watched less than half of it. Nothing poisonous. Is it funny how the mage advanced? Alas,,վ^վ,, I've just finished reading it, it's very good. I still think the mage advancement is a bit weird, maybe it's for warriors to attack mages to give them weaknesses [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Second on the recommendation list, looks pretty good