Watch Closely: This Is How You Use the Murasame Maru

A very good novel that allowed me to witness the cherished scene of early humans training punctuation marks.

A rare Cong Yu fanfic, the plot is good, but the punctuation is a bit confusing

Rare second creation of Yuzu Chef, please go to the author

Almost every paragraph in the following chapters uses quotation marks. It is a bit difficult to distinguish whether the content is what the character said and who said it. I hope the use of quotation marks can be changed ( If you also use quotation marks for psychological description, in some cases it will make people confused whether it is what you said (. If the author wants to use symbols to express psychological activities, please distinguish it from quotation marks 🤦

The author's ideas are quite interesting. I have read dozens of chapters so far. I hope the author can go back and change the sentences and punctuation. This should give more people a good impression (the most important thing is that the punctuation and sentences make me afraid to recommend it to others)

The biggest problem with this book so far is that the author is not very good at using punctuation.

Damn it, where did Yuzi Chef run away!

There are so few second creations in Qianlianwanhua

Except for the punctuation, everything else is pretty good.

It can be seen that the author's writing style has improved, and you can consider resetting the previous chapters. If the character portrayal of the fanfic does not appear to be broken, it is not too bad in my opinion. Work harder!