The Poisonous Man Chases the Girl, the Goddess Exclaims That She Is Willing to Spread Her Branches

The logic is quite smooth, but the part where the protagonist loses his memory makes it more difficult to write. It must be systematic. It is not easy for the author to make it coherent. So far, it is okay. Keep up the good work!

The start is okay, very thoughtful, and the characters are very bold. Whether the harem story can be stable in the end depends on the positioning of the heroine. Multiple heroines are okay, but it is better not to over-describe the inner drama, as it may become a stupid story. Just describe some psychology appropriately to increase the feeling of pleasure. . The value of every girl lies not only in the time before she is acquired, but also in the role she plays after she is acquired. She is also a strong woman who supports her husband and raises her children. As long as she is not fighting aliens, all kinds of daily development are good options. Really not. There are many life movies in island countries. South Korea also has many options.

It's written so carefully, even more so than a detective novel, but I just can't understand it.

Very good, the taste matches

Good, good, good, good

The last chapter ended suddenly.

Well written by the master

What a shame, what a great book

It's so appetizing. I hope it will be updated soon [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's okay. Compared with this book, there are fewer gimmicks and the system is a bit ordinary, but the plot rhythm is still good.