You Asked for a Life of Falling Leaves, but I Wrote About Facing the Gale

After reading it, I will express my personal opinion The first point: The plot arrangement is a bit confusing, and some places are a bit rushed. As a result, even with the high-rated lines of the original plot, the scene cannot be described, making people feel a bit mechanical. Second point: The author likes to suddenly add some jokes into the writing. I don't know how others feel. I hate it because it disturbs me very much. When I am immersed in the original plot, if you suddenly say an inexplicable joke that is completely inconsistent with the plot, it will happen again. It's awkward and awkward. A little humor is not a problem, but I don't recommend doing it this way. People who like memes won't suggest where you write the memes, but they will dissuade people like me. You can adjust it and put it somewhere else (¯―¯٥) so that both parties can accept it. We watch the plot and they watch the memes. Finally, I still hope that the author can improve his writing skills. There are not many people who write about this kind of subject. People who write well will like it more. We have to give reasons for publishing your book. Come on, look forward to the follow-up development.

I'll give it to myself, I'm invincible

No problem, just watch it 😏

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's okay to review Cg again

Come on, improve it

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking,

Come on! It is already the best of its kind, and the others have been discontinued.

Worthy of recognition, not bad for a fan,

It's okay, it's not a studio article