I'm Writing a Diary in a Xuanhuan World, but I'm Really Not Cao Cao

Beautiful, love watching it! It fills in the loophole where the male protagonist is stupid and doesn't know that the female protagonist has a copy of the diary; instead of walking through the book, the male protagonist is not so omniscient, and the female protagonist even knows the existence of the system. This kind of subject is quite novel. Come on, author 😘, support you more 😏

This diary is more interesting than other types of novels, and it is not like other novels that have been tainted by the Son of Destiny later. It is clean and comfortable to read. The pace is not too slow. There are no poisonous points. There are some minor flaws, but they are not major problems. Five stars.

It looks okay in the early stage. With a diary system, all the fun comes from the diary. Yes, the content of the diary only makes it look good. I won't say anything about the five-star praise I gave you in the past. I won't even mention the slowness of writing. The latter part is bloody and arrogant. The first part is really good, but the second part is too lame.

I've read Chapter 17, so I'd like to comment on my feelings after watching it. The author's writing style is a bit watery, and there is no need to emphasize some well-known things. It is not the first day of reading, and no one understands the common sense of cultivating immortals and fantasy. So deduct one star. The system is very interesting. Although it is a sign-in and clock-in diary, there is a copy of the heroine's diary. The heroine can see a lot of information, such as other heroines' information, and the heroine can also get rewards. This is relatively novel. There is a lot of room for development. If it is well written, it will be a masterpiece. The portrayal of the heroine is okay, each has her own characteristics, and she is not just a passerby. I have always felt that a heroine is a successful character if she is not too clever and can be remembered and liked by people. I will continue to watch it later and wait for my follow-up review.

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a weak person was lying beside the bed, but with a slight smile on his lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update..."

It's a good and interesting harem story. I hope it doesn't leave any pitfalls. Luo Huangjun's first direct descendant and Tantai Jinglian's only disciple were written at the beginning but haven't appeared yet. There is also the heroine of Taihuang Holy Land. I will collect them all when the time comes. Don't forget about them. Don't forget the author by then. There are several other lines about the Son of Luck that haven't been written yet. It's understandable that the plot advances slowly because there are more heroines. The heroines who haven't eaten should eat it as soon as possible. Sometimes it's a bit delayed. The heroines who have diaries can just collect them and eat them. It's really boring to travel with ten female protagonists after more than 500 photos. They are either fighting or on the way to fight. It feels like it was written by AI. The previous pitfalls in Wanqing have not been solved and the heroine has not finished the pitfalls and has not filled them in. There are also pitfalls in Taihuang Holy Land. It is boring to keep writing about traveling.

These stars are given to the people in Taihuang Holy Land. After leaving the Holy Land, the women behind them are too purposeful, too strong. Even if the author tries his best to explain, he can't hide the intensity of his purpose. That means Yuan Jue's setting is not so purposeless. The purpose of the family dynasties that appear later is too strong and too proactive. They all have a purpose. Come on, even if the author tries his best to explain, it is still difficult to conceal it. As long as there is a family or sect in the dynasty, these people will have a strong purpose and initiative. Even if the author tries his best to explain, it is difficult to conceal it. I have emphasized it many times and needless to say, it is very disgusting.

So far, so good, nothing bad, but the writing and content feel like there is a lot of room for improvement. It reads like just an outline. The connection in many places is quite abrupt. There are many places where you can actually add some plot or something. But the advantage is that it is all dry stuff and the plot is really not draggy. As a bookworm, I can make up my own brain and expand the plot [smile]. If I were to write this novel, I can write twice the number of words of the author based on the current plot [smile] [smile]

The protagonist has no ink, the system is powerful, the heroines are also smart (except for the second senior sister), and they are creative. The bad thing is that the author is too slow to update, only two chapters a day [laughter] By the way, I estimate that there will definitely be many female protagonists in the future. I hope the author will not favor one and let the male protagonist be devoted to every female protagonist. What do you mean, was retried? I plan to keep it for the New Year to watch.

It's pretty good. It's much more interesting than other diary types. It's the first time I've seen that the bound person can help the protagonist. Although it's similar to other types, at least it has something of its own. It's also a cool article and I haven't seen any major flaws. There are some small flaws, but why is the score low? I'm a little suspicious that someone deliberately lowered the score. Or is it because the word count is relatively small?