Finally, she made up her mind, took off her backpack and placed it on the river bank, then slowly walked into the river...
Her body shivered a few times reflexively. She couldn't swim, so she let herself be submerged in the river. If she endured it any longer, it would be over soon. Farewell to this world, all the beauty and ugliness, luck and misfortune would have nothing to do with her.
"Wake up, wake up..." Li Xiuhan knelt down next to the woman and patted her bloodless face. It was not ugly, nor was it stunning. A few strands of wet hair stuck tightly to her forehead and cheeks, which looked touchingly poignant.
The rain had stopped by this time.
Su Jinran slowly opened her eyes, and what she saw was the enlarged face of a man. She was slightly startled, and she coughed violently. The man helped her sit up, and after she slowed down, she raised her eyes and looked at him again. Being single and unmarried, she didn't expect that when she opened her eyes, she saw a man with an iconic appearance. , Deep eyes, thick black yet delicate eyebrows, a high bridge of nose, and sharp ridges make the already sexy lips even more charming. Su Jinran swallowed, stretched out her hand to touch the man's handsome face, and asked: "Am I in heaven?"
Li Xiuhan subconsciously wanted to hide away, but when he thought of what she had just experienced, he held back, "Yes, are you feeling uncomfortable in any way? Do I want to send you to the hospital?" The woman's cold hand slid across his face, like an electric current passing through, making him shrink back a little in shock.
Reader comments
The plot is fast and not draggy, and the characters are well developed. It's just that the plot is too fast, and the details need to be strengthened. The actions, expressions, and psychological thoughts between the protagonists can be written in more detail, and the characters' images and characteristics can be better highlighted. The language dialogue written by the author is still very good. The relationship between the male and female protagonists develops too fast, which is a bit difficult to digest for a while. The male protagonist's physical strength is a bit scary, but the female protagonist is a bit overwhelmed and hopes to be more restrained.
I hope the author will work harder to create after seeing this. Come on, I believe in you [Sending Hearts]
The plot is fast and not draggy, and the characters are well developed. It's just that the plot is too fast, and the details need to be strengthened. The actions, expressions, and psychological thoughts between the protagonists can be written in more detail, and the characters' images and characteristics can be better highlighted. The language dialogue written by the author is still very good. The relationship between the male and female protagonists develops too fast, which is a bit difficult to digest for a while. The male protagonist's physical strength is a bit scary, but the female protagonist is a bit overwhelmed and hopes to be more restrained. I hope the author will work harder to create after seeing this. Come on, I believe in you [Sending Hearts]