The Master of Mind at Hogwarts

The world of Harry Potter is linked to the sequence, with magical concepts and interesting language. (I personally prefer not to have a female protagonist)

Give yourself a five-star as a reward [note]

The content has been verified, brothers, you can join the trap! The setting of this book is quite good. The protagonist and Harry are in two colleges, but the distribution is very good. At least the content is not too biased towards Harry's main plot, but has the protagonist's own main plot, which is great! It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. It is very awesome for a newcomer to write like this! At last! Big cheers for the author! More updates [laughing evilly]

This book is quite good. It has a HP plot setting that combines mystery and mystery, but the protagonist is a little too crotch-stretched. He has high combat power but suddenly becomes the nanny of the Iron Triangle. However, if you like most of the plots, you can take a look.

I'm curious as to why the protagonist, who has been with Ron for so many years as an audience, still makes Ron so childish. Even the audience of sequence nine can change a person's personality and nature through subtle influence.

I enjoyed reading the first part, but I didn't want to read the comments later. But here's a little suggestion: Don't be easily influenced. The majority are silent. If there is a heroine from the beginning, just go with what you set out from the beginning, and don't cut off the heroine's role because of the influence of some comments. I personally like to watch movies without a heroine, but if the author handles it well, I will also watch movies with a heroine or even a harem. What I'm most afraid of is that in a book like this one, a group of people will quit because of the appearance of a female protagonist. Influenced by some comments, the heroine's role will be cut off, and a group of people will be persuaded to quit.

Very nice. Come on, author. The protagonist is very good now. It is not recommended to add a love line. It feels very strange. It is not suitable for high-sequence detachment to have a love line. Personally, I prefer no cp.

To be honest, the name of this book could be changed. When I saw the title, I didn't know it was about the mind in the audience sequence in Lord of Mysteries. I always thought it was about the main character in Harry Potter learning his talent for soul magic.

Very good. The creation and setting of magic in this fanfic gave me a real sense of complexity, and at the same time it is not difficult to understand. While explaining the principles of magic, it also allows readers to understand magic. The setting is not bad, keep up the good work [Like]

I didn't find the ceremony for the Dream Weaver to be promoted to Insight and the Insight to Writer. It should be that the squid has not been released yet. I don't know how the author will deal with this. I personally think that it can be designed to forcibly combine the extraordinary characteristics of Sequence 2 and Sequence 1 due to accident. At this time, the system sacrificed itself to help Aiden stabilize his state.

Author, the writing is very beautiful, and have you designed your own heroine? Can I vote for Ms. Ka? [Sinister smile]

I've officially finished watching it, it's really good. Most of the pitfalls have been filled in. The original characters are well drawn and the original characters are not too bad. The senses are pretty good. I feel that this kind of protagonist's character is more interesting to me. It feels quite comfortable to watch. It is a bit entertaining but has principles and bottom lines. The image is lively and vivid, and it does have a lifelike feeling. I particularly like this kind of movie. The content of the article is fairly coherent. Fighting, daily life, and emotions are all handled relatively well. It is not too abrupt. It is very rare to be able to finish it completely. The content is also very vivid and has positive energy. For me, it feels very immersive. But at the end, if I understood it correctly, did everyone forget about the two protagonists? And he also fell into a deep sleep. I don't know when he will wake up. It feels a bit like He's ending, but better. It still feels very regretful. In the end, I forgot about them both. I hope there will be an extra episode to make up for it. I am here to celebrate the successful completion of this book. I have followed most of it. I admire the author's persistence. I feel that there is still something unfinished, but the journey will eventually end. We must learn to let go and then look forward to the new journey. Finally, I would like to once again express my blessings for the completion of this book, and praise the author's perseverance and writing style. Even though it may still have flaws, I feel that it is pretty good. 2024.12.11 23:30

It feels like it's so easy for the protagonist, a time traveler, to advance from Sequence 1 to Sequence 0 visionary in the Harry Potter world. I've never watched Lord of Mysteries, so don't blame me if I'm wrong [laughs]

Come on, I believe the author can keep up the good work. As long as it continues and does not deviate from the topic, we will keep following up.

Very well written. The language description is very vivid, and there is also a lot of psychological description of the characters. But some readers are simply amazing. Why can't there be a female protagonist? There is no large space about romance, which does not affect the development of the plot. What's wrong with having a heroine? There is also talk about the male protagonist being a nanny. The Weasley family is family and must be nurtured. Harry is the main character. And the power of prophecy joins in. Worth cultivating.

This book is very interesting. I don't understand why some people say that nanny is a nanny. If you make friends and help your friends, and try your best to help, then you are a nanny. Or do you think that if you help your loved ones out of family affection, then you are a nanny? If so, then for those of you who think so, do you think your parents are also nannies? I think it's the same. The protagonist helps you because of friendship and family ties. Those who say nanny, your parents raised you because you are their children, and help you with things that you can't handle. Do you also regard your parents as nannies?

Got Crane Moretti's grain I'm in a very good mood. I'll give it five stars [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's pretty good-looking, and the heroine isn't the romantic type, she's just a subordinate, not a poisonous one.

I have always felt that the Weasley family lacks tutoring and I don't like it, so I'm sorry, but I'll give you five stars first. There is a long way to go, see you later

Not bad, as long as the subsequent plot and characters don't collapse. Looking forward to updates!

In Tomato, less words means less points, but less points does not mean it is not good-looking. It has been many years since I read a book without skipping chapters or lines. This book is "Double Chef Ecstasy", it's amazing [laughing]

The Fool who does not belong to this era, the mysterious master above the gray fog, the King of Yellow and Black who controls good luck

Objectively speaking, the plot of this book is about 9 points, and the writing overall is above 8.7. The combination of mystery and magic is quite good. Emmm, some people may not be able to accept it. After all, it is difficult to agree with everyone, but objectively speaking, it is a good novel.

The characteristics of the audience channel are not written out. It is more suitable for the protagonist to be a mastermind behind the scenes and control everything behind the scenes. The academy stream is worse than the apprenticeship route

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By adding a series of private settings, the two systems are harmoniously combined, and even enrich the depth of the work. It feels more exciting than the original work, and finally achieves a logical closed loop.

The plot design is good, but you need a certain threshold to enjoy the plot. From the perspective of a fan, it is already a pretty good book. The female characters are not portrayed enough. Everyone has their favorite type, whether it is a single female protagonist or no female protagonist. I think the author should consider and design it well, and write it well. It is not a good thing to cater to others too much. In short, I give you five stars as a reward for the author's hard work in writing a book.

In order for you not to be banned, I can only give you four stars. Many Harry fans have been banned, such as Swinging the Sword, Glory Bow to Me, etc.

It's very interesting, why is it not rated high? Although some chapters look a bit confusing, the protagonist is cute and cute without losing his poise. It's very good and worth recommending.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking