[No Romance] Heretic

Five stars give the author great intentions and persistence ε(´｡•᎑•`)っ♡ Seeing that the author has written from 25 years to now, it can be seen from the time span that the author has put great care into it. I'll take the liberty of saying the following after just a cursory glance. If you want more readers to see it, I have two suggestions. The first point: the current naming is too complicated and too similar to Western names with long and difficult sentences, which is not conducive to readers' identification and memory. The name should be simple. At least it should allow readers to quickly recognize the protagonist and supporting characters. Western names such as Lilith/Ethan are best if they have been localized. At least they should not be too difficult to recognize, just two to three characters, and it will look exotic even if they do not use commonly used domestic words. Second point: The paragraphs are not appropriate. The opening paragraph is too long. It is recommended that the paragraphs should be controlled within five lines. If it is too long, the readers will be exhausted and they will easily run away and cannot retain the readers. From the creator's point of view, it can be seen that the author mostly wants to output. If he just wants to write it out, it will be considered confidential. However, if the author really wants to have readers, changing the above two points will be more conducive to readers. After all, the mainstream audience of the platform is not familiar with overseas culture. Just using long and difficult names will dissuade many readers, and long paragraphs of text will be depressing to read. Of course, if the names and paragraphs are drastically changed, it will inevitably add a lot of workload to the author, which is also a subjective trouble. Or the author can finish this book first, if he is willing to open the next one after finishing it. There are few readers when writing about Western themes. For names, it is best not to use long and difficult sentences, but two or three characters. This is in line with our language habits for naming, and is easy to recognize and remember. The segmentation is generally controlled to two to three lines, the short one can be one line, and the long one generally does not exceed five lines. Of course, the above is just from the perspective of a reader. If it offends the author, please let me know and I can clear it.

What's going on?!!! Why is it that no one reads the treasure book?!!!