I Am in the Ancestral Star, but I Have Become a Closed Disciple of the Sect.

I have read novels for more than ten years, and this is the first time I have written one myself. This was my dream when I was in middle school and high school. I also know that the writing is not good, and I think it is only one or two stars at most, but I would like to give A Dream of Youth more points, and increase it to four stars. Hahaha. I originally felt that it was a bit shameless to criticize myself, but today is my birthday and I am approaching a million words, so I might as well give myself an explanation and summarize my efforts for so long. In fact, not many people read my book, and it was not well written, so it only received a score of six, which is probably a guaranteed score. When I reached 800,000 to 900,000 words, only two or three Taoist friends were reading it. Thank you very much. Many times when I couldn't finish writing and wanted to give up, I saw your reminders to update. I felt that there were still people reading it, so I just finished it. Thank you for accompanying me all the way. There were two periods of long pauses during the course. One was due to tenosynovitis, and the other was because I really couldn't stand it anymore. I spent a lot of time every day, but only one or two people watched. But I still feel that youthful dreams must have an ending. Even if the ending may not be happy. The sky and the earth are vastly different, and I feel the infinity of the universe. When joy and sorrow come, there is a clear sense of abundance and deficiency. I wish all fellow Taoists good health and a prosperous journey! ——Wealthy little bunch downstairs.

The author must have good writing skills. Maybe he is a new author and is not so experienced. It is understandable that there will be some minor flaws. Please encourage the author and hope that the author will write better and better and the novel will become more and more popular.

Spiritual energy recovery articles with completely Chinese elements are better than those that use Western skills and occupations to save the people after recovery.

The writing is good and the setting is good. It's rare to read it now that there are so many systematic articles.

How should I put it? The author's background is in the prehistoric times, but his writing style is very similar to Dong Ge's Holy Ruins [Laughing and crying]

I feel that this is a better prehistoric novel. Although it was interrupted several times during the update period, it is good that the author can persevere. As for the ratings, the main reason is that the loss of readers caused by the discontinuation of updates is too much.

It feels pretty good. Come on [code]

It's a novel with such good writing, but so few people are reading it, so it's been suppressed in terms of traffic! [Laughing out loud]

It's really beautiful, good luck to the author

Not bad, can watch it

After reading it for so long, I think this novel is still very good, but it is a pity that the reading volume cannot increase, otherwise I think the results will be more than that.

The writing is beautiful and well written. I hope I can write a few million words.

You can work hard and write well

New direction, not bad, come on

It's pretty good, but no one is watching it

You can continue to work hard!

It's ok, so far there are no problems except for the slightly controversial setting of Ding Haizhu (Zhao Gongming's twenty-four Ding Haizhu in "The Romance of the Gods" were later taken away by Ran Deng Taoist)

Fresh and refined, refreshing. At first glance, it looks good. I hope it can be to your liking.

Looks good, can recommend

This book is pretty good and worth reading. Good luck to the author.

Very beautiful and rich in content

Yes, the alternative ancient novels about cultivating immortals are much more unique than those stereotyped ancient books where you can guess the rest of the story just by looking at the beginning.

Good book 📖 worth recommending

Good book worth recommending

Why is such a beautiful novel rated so low?

Flesh and blood, delicate emotions, sharp writing

I read dozens of chapters. The description of the fighting scenes has a very Chendong feel to it.