At the Swordsmanship Academy, a mysterious old man provided the "100 million year button" to the failed swordsman. It is said that pressing the button can achieve effects equivalent to 100 million years of practice. The fallen swordsman pressed the button hesitantly, and the next moment, he felt huge power filling his body. He pressed the button repeatedly with ecstasy - again and again.
However, this is a cursed button. The moment he pressed the button, he was trapped in a "time prison" of 100 million years. For the first hundred years, he was excitedly immersed in cultivation. Thousands of years later, he began to wonder why he was wielding the sword. By ten thousand years, he gave up thinking.
One hundred million years later, he was almost a cripple and finally returned to the real world. However, the memory of the 100 million years he experienced was completely erased, leaving only the sword skills honed to the extreme. "You can become stronger just by pressing the button!?" He mistakenly believed this and kept pressing the 100 million year button, cursing his stupidity every time. As he continued to cycle through hell for 100 million years, he suddenly realized something:
"If you can cut off this world, maybe you can escape from here..."
Hundreds of millions of years later, he finally "cut off" the prison of time and escaped from the 100 million-year cycle.
Reader comments
Judging from the technique, it seems to be that of a newcomer. The writing style is very green. I want to describe the inner world of the protagonist, but the writing is a nagging and messy style of various gods. It is obviously the style of high school students, especially around 00, a lot of soapy Japanese comics. If it is around 80, the style will be very hardcore. Give 5 stars to newbies, try your best. Swordsmanship is more suitable for writing than hardcore writing. Your writing style is more suitable for writing weak harems. If you really want to write swordsmanship style, go and watch some classics in the 70-80 stage, which may improve your writing style.
What does this book say? In fact, it's okay, but the most abstract thing about him is that he doesn't have realm divisions. At first, I thought he was just a martial arts mortal with no special abilities. As a result, he gave me Horcruxes, especially the ice wolf Horcrux, which gave me the illusion that as long as the talent is good, there is no need to work hard on thousands of layers of ice walls. I said, it really makes me happy! And the most important thing is that I have already written so many chapters. It will be useless if you write another realm. You can't forcefully insert two chapters to write about realm in front. It can be said that this book cannot be saved even if it is scrapped. The author and world view have not been determined. A book either has no fantasy elements or only has fantasy elements in the later period.
It's well written, and the sense of first-person immersion is really strong. Although the writing style is a bit green, it's overall very good. You can tell it's written by a novice. As for the plot, it's already great for a novice (although there are probably templates, but it was really difficult for me to write novels when I had nothing to do [vomit]). I feel like this article The biggest poisonous point is almost the problem of combat power design. The protagonist has practiced for more than a billion years, but when he returns to reality, he is basically either tortured or exploded before he fights back (maybe it is written this way to not be regarded as a cool book). Apart from this point, this article is a very good new work [I understand]
But why are there so few people and most people who read it don't think highly of this book? [What]
Like writing a diary
Like a script, there are a lot of psychological settings, which makes it very uncomfortable to read. The background description is not so straightforward, and it has a bit of a fantasy feel.
Judging from the technique, it seems to be that of a newcomer. The writing style is very green. I want to describe the inner world of the protagonist, but the writing is a nagging and messy style of various gods. It is obviously the style of high school students, especially around 00, a lot of soapy Japanese comics. If it is around 80, the style will be very hardcore. Give 5 stars to newbies, try your best. Swordsmanship is more suitable for writing than hardcore writing. Your writing style is more suitable for writing weak harems. If you really want to write swordsmanship style, go and watch some classics in the 70-80 stage, which may improve your writing style.
What does this book say? In fact, it's okay, but the most abstract thing about him is that he doesn't have realm divisions. At first, I thought he was just a martial arts mortal with no special abilities. As a result, he gave me Horcruxes, especially the ice wolf Horcrux, which gave me the illusion that as long as the talent is good, there is no need to work hard on thousands of layers of ice walls. I said, it really makes me happy! And the most important thing is that I have already written so many chapters. It will be useless if you write another realm. You can't forcefully insert two chapters to write about realm in front. It can be said that this book cannot be saved even if it is scrapped. The author and world view have not been determined. A book either has no fantasy elements or only has fantasy elements in the later period.
It's well written, and the sense of first-person immersion is really strong. Although the writing style is a bit green, it's overall very good. You can tell it's written by a novice. As for the plot, it's already great for a novice (although there are probably templates, but it was really difficult for me to write novels when I had nothing to do [vomit]). I feel like this article The biggest poisonous point is almost the problem of combat power design. The protagonist has practiced for more than a billion years, but when he returns to reality, he is basically either tortured or exploded before he fights back (maybe it is written this way to not be regarded as a cool book). Apart from this point, this article is a very good new work [I understand] But why are there so few people and most people who read it don't think highly of this book? [What]
Like writing a diary
Like a script, there are a lot of psychological settings, which makes it very uncomfortable to read. The background description is not so straightforward, and it has a bit of a fantasy feel.
I really like it, keep it up