Turn Off That Crappy Skill of Yours!!!

As a newly opened novel, shouldn't you update it diligently? The faster you write, the more people will read it. The more people will read it, the higher your income will be. You are really at a great age. Don't be afraid of hurting your body. Your current fatigue is just so that book friends can read better.

Let's talk about the shortcomings first. There are too few words, too few words, or too few words. The characters are not quite fleshed out yet. I blame it on the fact that the article has not been developed yet. I'll have to wait and see what the author will do next. Then, the foreshadowing is quite good. It's so deep that I can't tell it even if I read it continuously┐(─__─)┌, but the words are too few and I don't like it. What should I do, author? 눈_눈 Secondly, the writing seems to be pretty good, with no common sense errors and very few typos. Finally, the plot cannot be said to be unconventional, but it can also be said to be unconventional. It is inevitable to have a classic arena match, but the appearance of the ice dragon and the rescue of the Black Lotus are passable. Therefore, the final review is, gentlemen, newbies and new books, we will wait and see and act (●°u°●)" I believe the author is willing to follow our suggestions (seeing that he has time to comment on paragraphs but has no time to update)

I like the heroine written by the author. She is ruthless and doesn't talk much. So far, there is nothing poisonous about her [Chigua][Chigua]

It's okay, but it's too much to see your reply in every paragraph review. I might as well write two more chapters [Punch Out] if I have this time.

It looks good, except for a little bit less, but the look and feel are fine (◦˙▽˙◦)

The writing style is a bit immature, but fortunately there are no poisonous points. This is ahead of 80% of the books. Come on

It looks good, but it has some shortcomings. I don't know if the author can see it. That is, if you are like other people's novels, they add one chapter a day. Can it be stabilized at around 2,000 words? Sometimes I can read 1,000 to 1,400 words really quickly 🤦

Why I gave this novel five stars is because the author is so kind! [Learned][Learned]

Interesting, single female protagonist, cool!

The setting is very interesting, and the character design suits my XP quite well.