Star Dome Railway: Miss Black Tower, Please Marry Me

It is indeed rare to have a single heroine in The Dark Tower. I hope it can surpass Pumpkin God of War [laughter]

It smells so good, I love it! The Black Tower is a good civilization (๑•̀ㅂ•́)ﾉ➹♡

The world is a mess, but there is still a clean and bright moon waiting silently in your sky. It turns out that this is love!

(After watching it for half a month, I found that I haven't rated it yet, so I'm going to give it a review.) Let me talk about the conclusion first. The writing is very good, and the plot development is not too dull. The relationship development rhythm of Heita and Lu Yan is quite tight, which is very suitable for those who like to watch the emotional line as the main theme. (I think many people are looking for a similar book after reading Tomato's other completed Dark Tower masterpiece (at least I am). This book is also the most popular among the Dark Tower fans, but I don't think this book is very similar to that one. The little plot in the early stage will give people a sense of familiarity, or I am subjectively looking for similarities) In short, in terms of style, this book may not be that artistic, but it is still quite interesting. On the emotional line, the two can't figure it out, and they are confused about such an unexpected and destined encounter (but I believe the author will give it a good ending [I'm about to cry]) In terms of love, I would like to give you some suggestions [laughs]. It feels a bit too daily, and this is not the daily life of Heita and Lu Yan. It seems to be a daily life that is almost incompatible. I know that the author is stacking buffs for the setbacks that the protagonist will receive later, but the push is a bit slow and the end cannot be seen. I believe that such a smart author will definitely get up and get passionate later, and then contact Heita to promote feelings. Before that, either add a sense of crisis that will come at any time, or use more emotional lines between Heita and Lu Yan to color it (readers may also like to read it more? Anyway, I am) (It's over, I wrote so much to make up for the rating, annoying)

Come on, come on, this is Tomato's second solo release, Heitawen.

The structure is rigorous and the plot is logical. The author should be a qualified knifeman. If you like twists and turns, you can read it. The above are the advantages of this book. What follows are my subjective thoughts. Likewise, this book lacks interest. The author is good at writing with a story that first develops and then suppresses. Whenever the plot is about to reach an exciting point, the author will stop. It makes people frown while watching the plot behind it. This leads to a very poor overall impression, because I personally feel that a book can make you unhappy, but you cannot give hope first and then step on it, because it is no different from training a dog. Of course, this is a personal opinion, and everything is subject to your own perception. As for why I gave it a favorable review even though my personal impression of it was so bad, it's because crimes other than war are not a problem with the novel. Maybe it's because I don't like this genre. Because the quality of this book is not a big problem. At least in tomatoes.

So far, I like it very much, and the character design is not ruined [laughing] But, can you please don't kill me? Now I am scared, for fear that the knife buried between the lines before will suddenly attack me [crying] Also, come on, the author, I hope you can become the next Pumpkin God of War🥳🥳🥳, he wrote "Capture the Black Tower, or Be Captured by Her" I think it can be made a god. And the book you wrote, the author, is vaguely on par with him🥳 It can be said to be the two best books among the Dark Tower fanfics I have read [Like]

It's different from most other Beng Tie plots [Chigua] [Chigua]. It's not yet following the main plot. Ms. Black Tower is still so fascinating [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's very interesting, but it's too short. I want to keep it for a while, but I'm afraid I'll kill it by reading it! I can only read his two short chapters every day, wow wow wow, can the author add one more chapter? [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

Very nice teeth

The plot is quite immersive, a good Black Tower novel. I hope that the author will not forget his original intention, be firm in his own ideas, and insert some interesting side stories about the Black Tower and Lu Yan into the main plot. Finally, I hope that the author's writing ability will soar and write better novels. [Praise]

Nice! Be optimistic about the author

The author can start by saying that the initial encounter between you and the male protagonist was only for a short moment. The feeling of purple sea of ​​flowers and sea breeze is a bit different after you explain it clearly. Be clear. The encounter with the hero and the black tower, the first encounter

I thought about how to write about the sword. I could write that the protagonist died in battle and turned into the same stem orange flower as Heita said. I guess you, the author, have thought of it too.

They say that the Star Core Hunter is a poisonous spot. I didn't think about it for long. The author has his own ideas. He stopped updating for two months. The popularity is too low. Otherwise, there should be something up to 8.5. I support it.

It's really rare to find a story with a single heroine in The Dark Tower, I got it

Recently, people often chatter, making fun of the author, saying that for any classic novel, an author should be assigned to update every second. If he could not send out one-second updates, he would have to send out one-day updates. Finally, he sent one who updated every second. This is really a compliment to him. In ancient and modern writing, authors have repeatedly used delaying tactics successfully. When there is a need to push for an update, they will put difficulties in front of us so that you can't see them. Finally, there is nothing they can do about it. If the owner of the delaying update is not good enough, he will give you a bite and hide for ten and a half months.

I feel that the writing of "The Knife" is not that good, and there is not enough foreshadowing, but after all, it is one of the few black tower novels [face covering], overall it is okay, I must continue to do more.

Can the author do some cutting? It feels boring without a knife [thinking] I wrote a message and I will give you another five stars [laughing evilly]

Looking forward to surpassing Pumpkin God of War

Was the author inspired by the book "The Black Tower"? The plot has a little bit of that book.

Author, I hope you won't be so ignorant that you suddenly give me a knife or something.

It's super beautiful. 🥚It's the author. How did you fall asleep when it's so short? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! !

It's really good to read. There really aren't many people writing about The Dark Tower. This book is really good to read.

The right to rate is in my hands. Do you dare to give me a knife? Why does it get worse the further you go to the back...

They're beautiful and sweet. All the limited-five ice-type female characters in Star Iron are special to me.

I'll give you two stars.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The single heroine Heita Wen is beautiful! ! !

Five stars like other swords