Traveling Through Hogwarts, I Just Want to Fall in Love

But judging from the current situation, it is a good book. After all, there are very few books in which Astoria is a female protagonist, so my expectations for this book are quite high. I also hope that the ending of this book will be HE. I hope that the ending of this book will be safe and happy. Don't stop updating.

In terms of storytelling, this book is a masterpiece. There is no book in Tomato that describes daily HP in such detail. The writing is sophisticated and the heroine is very detailed, probably because the author had the original version to compare with. Originally, it should have been four stars in total, but I am not in the habit of giving four stars. I will only give five stars or one star, so the extra star is dedicated to the future of this book.

It's good to watch. There are really very few female protagonists in Astoria. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is so delicately portrayed that you can't help but raise the corners of your mouth. It's just that Hermione is so annoying.

In the early stage, the protagonist was well-behaved in front of outsiders and optimistic in front of his family. Later, the protagonist revealed in front of his lover that he was all pretending to let his brother get rid of the stubborn thoughts of adults and prevent him from following the old path of the elderly. It also feels great to try your best to prevent those things from hurting your loved ones! I just don't know if the protagonist will turn dark, but I hope the heroine is fine.

It's quite good. I would like to give some advice to the author, that is, the language should not be too blunt. What should be expressed, highlighted, revealed? Use less words like this, otherwise it will feel like answering a question. There can be more dialogue and less narration. Also, after a person finishes a sentence, it is best not to express how he or she is. We can change it to the first person to write it. For example, now it may be more like "Felix said:... This sentence undoubtedly shows his hope and expectation for the future. "Then we can change it to "Felix said: ... The eyes reveal endless hope and expectation for the future." That's about it. Anyway, the tone should not be so blunt, and try not to write it in the third person. And then this book is actually quite good-looking, and the system is not that outrageous. And the sweet parts are still sweet. I am just making suggestions. If you don't like my personal opinion, please don't criticize me. I give suggestions because I really like this book, so the author has to work hard [love] [love] [love]

It's not bad. I've seen very few fanfics with her as the heroine. The golden finger and the plot arrangement are reasonable. There are no surprises so far. I'll take a look.

Not bad. Although there are some minor flaws, they do not hide the good points. It is well written.

When I saw those Sharingan eyes, I was a little panicked, but don't use the knife.

Good. But I still hope Hermione can change her character so that she doesn't disturb the protagonist's love. It looks awkward.

Stop updating! ! ! , I hope it has been resurrected when I see the latest one Intermittent updates, a bit toxic, the love in the back is always about maintenance, cautious, I don't like to watch this, I like sweet and generous ones, it's not that the male protagonist always thinks about what to do if someone else takes him away, there is also female competition and so on, just so-so

Very good [shy] I have added another living book to my bookshelf

All right! Come on, author! ! ! ! ! !

Ah! ! ! ! ! ! The author will update soon, it's not enough to read😠😠😠

It's sweet, boringly sweet, the protagonist's ability is a bit abstract, the character performance is partly OOC, and some plot errors are quite interesting. The logic is relatively clear, but for the protagonists, the meeting and falling in love is a bit too fast, even abrupt. It's hard to comment. I originally planned to give it five stars against my conscience, because the emotional drama written by the author is too pure and noble. The true expression of the conflict between the impulse to act and one's own loving heart is too real.

It's so good-looking. I hope the author will write more and more words every day. Hermione is not necessary.

It's still too little now, it would be nice to update more [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Now it seems to be really good. Since the author wants a five-star review, just give it to me. But as for the fan base, I'd better wait until the author reaches 1,000 fans to build it on Tomato.

In general, I personally feel that there are still a few strange points. The first is the Five Auspicious Beasts. If I remember correctly, the Animagus seems to need to have a full understanding of that object, so it is indeed a bit strange for you to come directly to Shirasawa. And why does the Sharingan belong to Obito? [Laughs] Overall, it's pretty good-looking, and there are some things that aren't particularly shocking. Big cheers for the author The author will update soon!

One of the more satisfactory Harry Potter fan novels at the moment

Looks good, the heroine is great

Very good book, I like it very much

The author is pretty good, keep up the good work

Isn't Astoria Draco's official match?

It's so short... It only takes a few chapters to get to the other chapter. Not enough at all

It looks good, very good, but the update is too slow. It should update 10,000 chapters a minute.

The single heroine shows that you are dedicated enough. I hope the author can find the half of your life as soon as possible [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

I am a loser and I love watching [adoration][adoration][adoration]

I hope you won't kill me Come on, the emotional scenes in this book are well written.

It's pretty good. I wish I could use a lighter knife.

Beautiful and a million times sweeter

Big cheers for the author!