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It looks good, and the setting is pretty good, but the author may be in a hurry to buy the cup. The combat power span is a bit large. I feel that it can be completed in 200 chapters. Hook is obviously a gift of experience. In addition, the author has a complex composition, including dark souls, old rings, and dragons. The characteristics of the characterization are very distinct. I hope that the author who enters the sage mode after having the cup will write like a god and not be stuck at all [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

It's okay (these four stars are for He Wanggui). The character description of He Wanggui is good, but the shortcoming is that the writing is too good... I can't accept the feeling of betraying a girl who has eyes for you (if nothing happens, start a harem)...

I just read the first few chapters and wanted to give up. I don't want to read your opinion. It's just my personal opinion. It's that their technology is too advanced. There's nothing wrong with being a little advanced, but they are too advanced. Damn, they are so advanced. You can say that the human technology in this book is advanced and has paved the way for them. However, Furui's technology is too advanced. In reality, it would be great if real-life technology could be used to write in this book. I think it would be very good. And humans, anyway, they don't exist to boast of being so amazing. The second one still has He Wang returned to the hospital because of over-developed technology. Isn't that what you uploaded and recorded? I am really interested in memory uploading. I really have no benefit to him at all. This kind of memory uploading, this method of using technology and the thing that makes the body look like new. To him, I am very disgusted with this setting, just like the bullet is like a parasite. That, well, I personally don't like it very much. I just saw a comment, and I think what she said is quite right. He said that the world view is quite broad, but the writing is a bit narrow. I think there is nothing wrong with this sentence, but what is the reason why I gave it five stars and what makes me keep reading? The answer is, crane and hope return. Damn it, I saw the current chapter, because like most of them, anyway, for me, an otaku who is ugly and has no money, what I want to be satisfied more than sex is actually love. Because of the above reasons and so on, I am not very good in society, so reading novels and watching anime are my only beautiful fantasies. Damn it, I also want to have Zhe Wanggui, but I am very rational. The protagonist looks great. He's very handsome and has spiritual power. Haha, that's it. The first time I cried when I saw the current chapter was because He Wanggui really touched my xp, including the descriptions of him in the book. The second time I cried was ugh, which is my deep personal inferiority complex. In terms of reality, I believe that no girl will fall in love unconditionally with an ugly boy who is poor and short in talent. This is a fact. Using sweet words and deception will only affect the other half's feelings. Oh, I still prefer this. I don't even bother to use these. Alas, it can only be said that the author He Wanggui really won my favor with this character. So much so that when I was about to give up halfway through the movie, his description of him suddenly made me determined to watch. Going on, I don't know how to choose between a single heroine and a harem, haha, I still chose this, but if I speak personally, multiple heroines are actually okay, and it is more interesting. After all, people like me, people like me, have more fantasies, but this is just for me personally.

From my personal point of view, the composition of this book is a bit complicated (it has something to do with the author's personal habits), but I have to say that the characters in this book are portrayed with a certain depth (I just made it up without thinking about what to say), and the plot is generally logical and normal (no... What a poisonous point), occasionally there are some small details that are not well described (still need to work hard), the author has laid a lot of foreshadowing (digging holes randomly), the overall style is soft science fiction (the author introduced some settings but did not use them in depth) The writing is a bit green, and some plots in the work are more It's relatively novel (for example, when Fang Qiu confesses, I don't know whether the author deliberately broke the rules or whether the inspiration was an emergency turn). Generally speaking, I give five stars because the core of this work is very ah ah ah ah (the above are all words I made up). In short It's okay to read it in your spare time, the core of the logic is fair, the protagonist's views are correct (personal subjective opinion), the plot is reasonable (some small details are not handled properly), the book is more entertaining than didactic (whoever reads this to learn), there are a lot of jokes in the book, which is quite interesting. Finally, I wish this book will get better and better results, so as to help the author buy the second generation of the Loincloth Elf that he has been longing for as soon as possible (the 7-speed juicing process will not dry your kidneys) Many people in the comment area said that they became addicted after Chapter 19 because of an inexplicable appearance of a brother (imitating Lu Mingze, but now the author made a sharp turn). In fact, the problem is that the author wants to write his own whimsical ideas on the one hand, and on the other hand he wants to maintain popularity (who I also don't want my hard work to be aborted, not to mention that the author wants to buy the second generation of Loincloth Elf), so I hesitate because I don't know whether to have a single female protagonist or a harem. Now based on my personal judgment, the author wants to have a single female protagonist. New authors + new books should be a little considerate and don't give/less negative reviews. Firstly, there are many people like me who are looking for books that fit their own views. Secondly, it is not easy for the author (after all, the second generation of The Loincloth Elf costs one thousand seventeen).

It's a very good book. The protagonist's outlook is correct. Each character also has his or her own characteristics. Each character is like a microcosm of a different race and faction. It's very real and engaging. It's rare to see such a good book. It can be seen that I originally wanted to write about Sese's daily life, but I was targeted by a certain god who cannot be named directly, and I was forced to change the combat text.

The subject matter is novel, that is, when can you practice psychic abilities with pig's feet? Don't just think about it before you are completely stable.

When I saw the fox trying to kill the protagonist, I was thinking about one thing. They said that "following the path of mankind can reach the level of being side by side with human civilization." The fox wants to make its country independent and not be attached to the concept and path of humans. Does it mean that following the path of humanity will lead to the same ending? That's why the fox wants to kill the protagonist and let the country become independent? [Smile]

Where did this shit come from? Is this still the earth?

I heard that this book was revised once, and I really want to see the previous version. Why is this book rated so low [Learned]

Regardless of the author's attitude towards this book or the plot of the novel, for the author's spirit of "never forget your original intention and keep your mission in mind", I must give full marks💯💯💯💯

I just said a few words "Grand escape to the sunshine" It's so similar to the beginning [face covering] Hey, I didn't see the rest of it, because there wasn't anything that attracted my interest in the beginning. I gave it five stars because I personally think it's pretty good.

Although some aspects are a bit conflicting for us, for new players, this value is quite normal. There are three levels of players in the stars. The first level is racial mysophobia, the second level is the integration of all races, and the third level is the coexistence of all races.

Excellent writing style and a pretty good story. As far as novels are concerned, Tomato 🍅 limits your play. It's fun, it's so fun. It's a pity that the subject matter is destined to have a small audience and requires readers to have some relevant knowledge. The world view and seemingly unclear plot twists will turn off many readers (especially the title of the book, which is so confusing that you can't miss it).

The number one general under Slaanesh

Sexy? I don't know, I only know that the flowers are in full bloom. If I don't appreciate them, it would seem that I don't understand the style.

Did the author rewrite some of the previous content? It seems ok now, but can you remind me when I change it next time [please update]

Stars players said, great People with normal views can leave [laughing evilly]

It's good to read. I'd love to read more. Great author, you are so short! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It feels like the more I watch it, the more I look like the Valkyrie at the End

I am silver, and I think the author is fine.

I have always had an idea similar to this book, but not only do I have no writing skills, but I am also lazy, so that world view only exists in my mind. Now that the author has created it, it is really great!

It's very tastefully written. With light language, just the right psychology, and reasonable but not excessive cheating, it feels like a very relaxing yet challenging, tense yet sweet short story. Suitable for quiet and slow reading.

Very good work, it made me spin the Burning Sky Divine Weapon and Neutron Killer

It looks great, I hope the protagonist becomes invincible again

It can be seen that the author's reading and extensive knowledge, stream of consciousness writing style, and humorous writing style are worth reading.

Let's not talk about the writing. The author is really funny. This article found a small number of stories among a lot of memes. I couldn't stop laughing.

It seems okay so far

Very good, no need for low score protection, right?

Do you still remember that in the first few chapters, the protagonist said that he hated those screenwriters who cut out the cool things when the Dragon King counterattacked [smile]

People who play Qunxing will probably like this book, but those with a strong sense of morality are not recommended to read it.