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It's very interesting. I hope that the protagonist will take in the two female Saiyans Kyle and Kailifla from the sixth universe and become Super Four. I read a novel before. Not only did the Super Four remain unchanged, but the Saiyan's tail was cut off, which almost pissed me off. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

Very good, a rare Dragon Ball fanfic. Except for the beginning, I felt a little sad when I wrote about the whole people cultivating. But I persisted and the writing was okay. After thinking about it, the protagonist's personality is also good. You are the author in the middle who writes novels. You also have a child born to a male protagonist, and a boy. Yes, forget it, you might as well just write that the first five are girls. If you write like this, there is one more thing. Why? Because, the daughter is the father's cotton-padded jacket, which is easier to deal with. If it is a boy, I feel like watching Sun Wuhan and Trantus, and it will not appear in the follow-up, which is better.

Not bad, all five-star reviews. In the end, it's best to take the Kevlar and Kyle too.

It's okay, but the tone of speaking is too fragmented

The writing is very good, but if you update a book every four or five days, no matter how good the book is, readers will gradually lose it.

I feel like it's okay. It's good to write it in a plain and simple way. It doesn't have the impetuous feeling of ordinary cool writing.

This novel is very well written.

It looks very exciting, but could the author divide it into paragraphs? Each paragraph is too long.

I have a question, Xiao Wu should be about the same age as Sun Wukong, so how old will Xiao Wu be by the time of Trunks?

Come on, come on, come on💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

So far, the writing is okay. There is a little flaw, but it's not a big problem. I'll see how I write it in the future. I hope it gets better as I write it.

How many chapters will it take to finish?

Above average. I originally wanted to give it to Samsung

This thing is really good, five stars! Why is there no one with such a good book? Comment?

What does it mean to have many women without a master? Is it that the women are taken as star slaves ( )