Naruto: Forged into a God, Given the Sword White Fang at the Beginning

What do you think if the reward is less than the effort?

The pace seems pretty good so far. There seems to be a lot more to write about in the world with powerful weapons and materials.

The pinnacle of Naruto fan fiction The characters are vividly drawn The plot design comes to life on paper [You taste it carefully][Smile evilly][Learned]

As far as Naruto fanfics are concerned, the writing is quite good, and I am not too satisfied with the girls (Tsunade, Uzumaki Kushina and Mikoto). I think these three are the ones with the best looks in Naruto. The Teigu elements currently integrated into it are also quite good. I am now I want to know what you want to integrate after the system is upgraded later, whether it is the Zanpakutō or something else. I can only think of the Zanpakutō being suitable (although the combat power is quite impressive), but it is about the same against Otsutsuki. I think it can crush the Naruto worldview (personal opinion)

Will you accept Uchiha Light in the future? The group with the strongest eye skills and eight thousand spears.

Work hard, work hard, work hard, work hard

There are some minor problems in the front, but there are no big problems in the back so far.

The writing is very emotional, with a smooth plot and rich imagination. The setting of the protagonist is very flexible, and there is no rigidity in it.

It's okay, I just want to ask when will we leave the village?

Not bad, keep up the good work

Come on, come on, come on

Come on, author, it's very beautiful.

There are very few types of forging systems, and I like Zhanchi very much, but it's not appropriate for the protagonist to be so flamboyant when he has nothing to save his life. Naruto is not a place where everyone is friendly. People don't want to control you and just kill you. The protagonist has nothing to do.

It's okay, but it's not so good because I like to make the protagonist feel weak...

Come on author, look forward to the follow-up plot [Like][Like][Like]

Come on, the author is looking forward to it

Writing style needs improvement

There's nothing fun to say, I can only go for it.

Although it is very poisonous, I am used to giving it five stars. [Laughing evilly] I won't tell anyone who is so poisonous

Why did you train the psychic beasts like Toad? Forged into a weapon, didn't that toad give him a frog croak? Directly trained into a sonic weapon

The content is very good and the author is very "serious"

I can only say that it's okay, the ideas are okay, but the writing style and storytelling are average. Summary: It's watchable, but not that amazing [eating melon]

It still feels very good [like]

Get some knight's belt

It's okay to watch without thinking.

Why not with a picture of the knife?

How do you say this, this, and this are okay?

Please have more books like this, similar to giving others abilities or weapons in anime.

There are some poisonous points at the front, but overall it's good, and it feels better than that one which was also forged.

It's okay, one of the more creative ones I've seen.