Natural Disaster Apocalypse: You Disturbed the Witch

Overall, it's pretty good to watch, because there are many kinds of magic. However, I still hope that the heroine can be stronger and not so weak. I also hope that she can stop talking about her boyfriend and be beautiful alone.

After reading Chapter 29, there are some poisonous points. First of all, the heroine keeps stuttering when speaking. It is really uncomfortable to watch. Secondly, the protagonist has not used magic so far, and the author has not written about the progress. At most, when using it, he can talk about what he has seen before. It is recommended to write about the learning process of the protagonist (of course, only important magic). For example, when learning fire magic, the flames wrap around the protagonist's palm, like a beating elf. You should also try to use it in cultivating plants, alchemy, etc. If you can't say it, it will be the same as not saying it. Then the protagonist's fear of society is too much, and he has killed people. Isn't the fear of snakes a bit too much? I suggest that this kind of personality should be really changed. I watched it on a male channel, so from my perspective, this is really not suitable for the apocalyptic theme, and it is suitable for the beast world witch. Finally, the meaning of the supporting characters is unclear so far. The author can arrange other opportunities for them, and they do not necessarily have to be witches. Otherwise, the supporting characters can neither help the protagonist, set off the protagonist, nor promote the plot. This is not an everyday novel after all, and it really needs to be changed. At present, I am still looking forward to this book. It can be regarded as a potential stock. The author can read Western fantasy magic and doomsday novels in order to quickly accumulate experience. Come on [currently working on the manuscript] @ Salty Fish Turn over is what [currently on the manuscript] [currently on the manuscript]

How do you update the author who maliciously suppresses the score? If the author doesn't update, how can I see it? If I can't see it, I will draw circles and curse you.

It's so good. I haven't seen a novel like this for a long time [Love] [Love] [Love] I hope the author will update it soon [Love] [Love] [Love]

It looked a bit uncomfortable. She was confused as to what kind of magic the heroine knew. She was squirting bit by bit like squeezing toothpaste. I suggested that an introduction panel be made, such as what magic he knew, how far he was, how proficient he was, and what kind of magic he could learn further. Then the heroine said that she had learned a lot of offensive magic recently, such as fog and so on, but the current impression was that the attack power was only one thunder and lightning, and then that thunder punishment, which felt like one. Also, for example, how far is the heavy fog from the villa? How did he get there? Because this is the first time that the heroine leaves the villa, if the villa and the fog are both a safe zone, and the middle is a non-safe zone, skipping it all at once, and going directly to the fog, my imagination is a bit broken. But the subject matter is really great. Come on

I have read every chapter, and I really like the setting of this book [send my heart] [send my heart], but if the saint is really cleared up later, I will give the remaining star alone to review 🙂 🙂 The saint actually came clean🙄🙄

I've watched half of it, and it's pretty good. The main problem is the introduction. The main character is not completely social-phobic, but just a little timid. So the first impression of being a social-phobic person is easy to criticize. I later watched it as Azur Lane Cat Shark, (md exploded with you. Jpg) [smile], or Huo Huo, it's quite cute. This is also a cute point, so you don't need to change the character of the protagonist. You can change the profile label to a pine bream or something. Anyway, the character is quite similar. While trembling, he will protect everyone in front of him, while raising his pistol and shooting at you [sneaky laugh]

The heroine is a submissive and timid person, and she will be cruel to the person who offends her. It's so good-looking. Come on, author.

Very good-looking, with a real personality.

It looks great, keep it up! I just hope that the heroine can be more decisive in the future and tell her teammates about the matter quickly. I've been saying before that I want to tell my teammates about my abilities, right? But I feel uncomfortable because I haven't told them yet. I also hope that the saint can die soon. I always feel uncomfortable having a saint. I hope the heroine will stop stuttering all the time and become braver. Also, can you please stop using pistols all the time? There are obviously so many other firearms. Won't all the bad guys who come to the door be dead if you just shoot them with a submachine gun?