Apocalypse: You Disturbed the Witch

Overall, it's pretty good to watch, because there are many kinds of magic. However, I still hope that the heroine can be stronger and not so weak. I also hope that she can stop talking about her boyfriend and be beautiful alone.

After reading Chapter 29, there are some poisonous points. First of all, the heroine keeps stuttering when speaking. It is really uncomfortable to watch. Secondly, the protagonist has not used magic so far, and the author has not written about the progress. At most, when using it, he can talk about what he has seen before. It is recommended to write about the learning process of the protagonist (of course, only important magic). For example, when learning fire magic, the flames wrap around the protagonist's palm, like a beating elf. You should also try to use it in cultivating plants, alchemy, etc. If you can't say it, it will be the same as not saying it. Then the protagonist's fear of society is too much, and he has killed people. Isn't the fear of snakes a bit too much? I suggest that this kind of personality should be really changed. I watched it on a male channel, so from my perspective, this is really not suitable for the apocalyptic theme, and it is suitable for the beast world witch. Finally, the meaning of the supporting characters is unclear so far. The author can arrange other opportunities for them, and they do not necessarily have to be witches. Otherwise, the supporting characters can neither help the protagonist, set off the protagonist, nor promote the plot. This is not an everyday novel after all, and it really needs to be changed. At present, I am still looking forward to this book. It can be regarded as a potential stock. The author can read Western fantasy magic and doomsday novels in order to quickly accumulate experience. Come on [currently working on the manuscript] @ Salty Fish Turn over is what [currently on the manuscript] [currently on the manuscript]

How do you update the author who maliciously suppresses the score? If the author doesn't update, how can I see it? If I can't see it, I will draw circles and curse you.

It's so good. I haven't seen a novel like this for a long time [Love] [Love] [Love] I hope the author will update it soon [Love] [Love] [Love]

It looked a bit uncomfortable. She was confused as to what kind of magic the heroine knew. She was squirting bit by bit like squeezing toothpaste. I suggested that an introduction panel be made, such as what magic he knew, how far he was, how proficient he was, and what kind of magic he could learn further. Then the heroine said that she had learned a lot of offensive magic recently, such as fog and so on, but the current impression was that the attack power was only one thunder and lightning, and then that thunder punishment, which felt like one. Also, for example, how far is the heavy fog from the villa? How did he get there? Because this is the first time that the heroine leaves the villa, if the villa and the fog are both a safe zone, and the middle is a non-safe zone, skipping it all at once, and going directly to the fog, my imagination is a bit broken. But the subject matter is really great. Come on

I have read every chapter, and I really like the setting of this book [send my heart] [send my heart], but if the saint is really cleared up later, I will give the remaining star alone to review [smile] [smile] The saint actually came clean🙄🙄

I've watched half of it, and it's pretty good. The main problem is the introduction. The main character is not completely social-phobic, but just a little timid. So the first impression of being a social-phobic person is easy to criticize. I later watched it as Azur Lane Cat Shark, (md exploded with you. Jpg) [smile], or Huo Huo, it's quite cute. This is also a cute point, so you don't need to change the character of the protagonist. You can change the profile label to a pine bream or something. Anyway, the character is quite similar. While trembling, he will protect everyone in front of him, while raising his pistol and shooting at you [sneaky laugh]

The heroine is a submissive and timid person, and she will be cruel to the person who offends her. It's so good-looking. Come on, author.

Very good-looking, with a real personality.

It looks great, keep it up! I just hope that the heroine can be more decisive in the future and tell her teammates about the matter quickly. I've been saying before that I want to tell my teammates about my abilities, right? But I feel uncomfortable because I haven't told them yet. I also hope that the saint can die soon. I always feel uncomfortable having a saint. I hope the heroine will stop stuttering all the time and become braver. Also, can you please stop using pistols all the time? There are obviously so many other firearms. Won't all the bad guys who come to the door be dead if you just shoot them with a submachine gun?

This novel seems okay so far. The protagonist is a witch. Although she is very timid, stutters, and is autistic, she will still look frightened and fearful and kill her enemies mercilessly. The protagonist is not a single person, and will accept some people, but not just anyone can come. There are no unscrupulous women or vases at present, and I hope there will be no more in the future. Moreover, the protagonist has a contract, so there should be no poisonous points of betrayal. The main feeling is that it is an invincible novel. The evaluation is not bad for the time being (the weather aspect is somewhat illogical, such as where does so much rain come from, but you don't need to worry about this in the novel). The character of the protagonist may not be acceptable to some people, but it is okay for me, because if it is not the Virgin, it will not show mercy to the enemy. (It is really not easy to find a novel that is not poisonous and suitable for your appetite among the many new Tomato books)

It's really hard not to love it! Good looking! It's so fun to watch from beginning to end! [Adoration] As a social terror, the heroine adheres to the principle that I will not offend others unless they offend me, and I will offend others if they offend me! It has a moral bottom line but is not a virgin. I like the characters of the supporting characters. It is really good-looking. I highly recommend it! [Like][Like] With tears in my eyes, I beg the author to update it soon [crying] [crying] Big cheers for the author＾0＾~

I have read a lot of witch themes, but there are really very few about witches in the apocalypse. It is very tempting to open it and read the latest chapter directly from the beginning. It is very interesting and I like it very much. I hope the author will write more 🥺👉🏻❤️

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It's okay. The protagonist's strength is unclear, and the witchcraft system is unclear. The protagonist's personality is sociophobic, but the stuttering looks very uncomfortable. Overall, I can only say that it's okay.

It looks good. I thought the heroine was really a cowardly character, but later I found out that she is just a very normal woman in the apocalypse. She has her own principles and is very decisive when in danger. The character is very comfortable and full, unlike the heroines in Tomatoes who are decisive and decisive in killing in the apocalypse. There are many points to complain about, but the plot of this novel really has no points to complain about at all, and it goes well. I am so happy to read it. Big boost to the author.

The heroine is a witch, so I think the subject matter is quite unique. I like all the chapters updated so far.

It looks great. I particularly like this type. The heroine is a witch who can do witchcraft, draw formations, and use the moves of the necromancer. She can summon the souls of dead creatures to move corpses and kill those with evil intentions. Although the heroine has autism, she is decisive in killing. She is not a virgin, but she repays her kindness. The high-latitude high-tech left by the prophet witch is really useful. It can be converted into various forms, such as pistols, and can also be split into multiple weapons.

If you read this book for the first time, it is quite good. It will not be bad if you read it. I usually give five stars, but you really can't give it this. The traces of imitation are too heavy, it is basically a reskinned novel, and there is a serious lack of innovation. If I hadn't read that book, I would probably rate it higher.

The writing style and content are both good. Now that there is a complete collection of magic, it can be used in daily life. It is only used for attack and defense. Moreover, the forward moves I have seen so far are very long. They should be low-level instant casts in the later stage, or similar to branding, but overall it is quite good-looking.

The weak but powerful protagonist is inexplicably cute, and the contrast brought by his ruthless style is also great. The daily atmosphere of the whole book feels very good, but the apocalyptic atmosphere feels a bit worse. And witches/witches and so on are the best. This book is great. Finally, the author will update it soon. Please click Awa for more.

It's very beautiful, and the heroine is a very scary but powerful witch. Not up for grabs but great.

Not bad. You can read on. But why is it not updated?

It looks good. The heroine is not a virgin, not strong. In the early stage, she only attacked people with malicious intentions who entered her territory. I hope it will be faster.

It looks good, I follow it every day, but I just can't get enough of it. I don't know if there is a male protagonist, he hasn't appeared yet, but it's actually pretty good if there isn't one. I quite like Qiu Yu's mission. She is a bit timid and shy, but she doesn't shy away from being cowardly when encountering problems. Her abilities are also gradually increasing. She is not a simple virgin, but she will do her best to help good people. [Like][Like]

Update quickly. There are not many books that I can keep up with. If I really want to switch to other books, it will be thrown into the book group and eat dust. When I think about it one day, I am afraid that this book will not be updated. I may leave it for a few days or a month.

Witch? I think it can bring some elements of noita.

I hope the author can make it clearer that the main character is not too socially anxious. It will be a bit uncomfortable to listen to the book. Of course, the author's writing is still very good. It would be better if the main character is not too soft.

It looks good, I hope the author can update it quickly, like 10 chapters a day🎁🥳🥳

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