You Just Became a Creator, and You Built the Underworld, Shocking the World?

When I read that the author wrote about the protagonist creating the underworld, and saw "Underworld" written on a building, I instantly understood, okay, you can leave. If you read any more, you are asking for trouble and boredom.

How to put it this way, the first few dozen chapters were okay, but after the last 20 or 30 chapters, there was a feeling of going high and going low. Although the writing at the beginning was good, the writing at the end was like running water, and the quality gradually began to decline. Completely open high and go low. There are no typos, but it is a sure thing to go high and go low. And I still feel there's something wrong with the way the emotional scenes are written. And after reading more than 30 chapters, how do I feel about it? I feel like the author was a little stuck on some details. It always feels weird. Everything else is fine. It's just that there are still some places where IQ is lowered, but nothing else. Even if there are blockages, they are very small. Basically can be ignored. Nothing else

The protagonist is a savior type. He is very righteous and has a relatively grand world view. He does not pretend to be a pig to eat a tiger. He has obtained a special medal from the beginning. Once he is reborn, he should be reborn. The reborn one should be the female protagonist. At present, the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is not said to be very good. It is not toxic at the moment, but author, can't you wait a little longer? Don't give up first, write again, and it will come naturally to you.

For those protagonists who want to go back after traveling through time, I just want to say go back 996? Or delivering food? As an ordinary person? I hate this kind of protagonist the most.

In summary, it's okay. The author also listened to my suggestion and started Gaowu. [Shy] There are no poisonous points in the more than 30 chapters. The characters are not brainless. You can use your brain to read, but don't pay too much attention to the details.

Too many female characters

The subject matter is good, but Tomato has a common problem. When writing about modern capabilities, either the human race is as humble as a dog, waiting for the protagonist to save the world, or there is always a kind person who saves the protagonist, or the protagonist saves the kind person. Can you think about the problem, not to mention the reality of saving, and not to add insult to injury? Can you write it closer to reality?

It's so funny, I just said I wanted to keep it a secret, and then I just live-streamed the performance [vomit]

The author's writing highlights the protagonist so much that the world revolves around the protagonist. And it's always the supporting role that determines the protagonist's path The protagonist himself does not have the right to make his own decisions. It is a group of supporting characters who decide the protagonist. Without the protagonist, the world will definitely be destroyed.

There is a guarantee that you can get 1 life point/month, and there is no upper limit. The stronger the creature you kill, the more life points you will get. )] Then why not kill ants? Otherwise, the underworld and heaven would have appeared long ago, as well as the prehistoric world and hydrology.