Dragon Gate Killer Agent Diary

The objective evaluation is that the narrative is fragmented, which makes people confused at first (and still is), which leads to a small audience here in Tomato. But its description is still very good. I don't understand the protagonist's setting and past, so I lose some sense of immersion, and many of the psychological descriptions are unclear for a while (but it is undeniable that they are very good in terms of "feeling") The final question is, will this narrative style continue after the Dragon Gate Incident? If this is the case, it will test the author's writing skills and outline. Overall, this is a very special book on Tomato, but it is very good. Everyone should base their own preferences on it (there is no need to make any radical remarks) Finally, support the author

It reminds me of the original intention of reading the online article, this feeling of indifference, this kind of faint sadness, just like the dragon family, a bad person who doesn't care about the world has the most threatening power to everyone. I like this feeling of indifference, it is not a deliberate gag, it seems ordinary It is an ordinary memoir, but there are so many unforgettable memories, giving people a sense of immersion, a kind of memory of a person who has experienced everything. It seems that he has been burdened with a lot but is still doing nothing. It is cool, very sad, and also very happy. There is an inexplicable feeling of emptiness when reading the protagonist's story. I don't know why, I don't know why.

Indifferent texture like a black and white movie Like the tragic and heroic poetry section Using narrative techniques to clearly separate the main line from the past The mysterious charm of the protagonist makes people unable to stop and imagine.

It's a good book. If you like to read exciting articles, you can go here. Moreover, this book has a certain reading difficulty, such as game proper nouns, and the protagonist often inserts memories. If you don't read carefully enough, you will feel uncomfortable and the article will feel inconsistent. A rare first-person style. The protagonist is very vividly described, and the original characters are not OOC. It is a highly recommended novel. Compared with Gou Bai and Origin Stone Worm, this style has more flavor.

In what state of mind did you write the introduction and tags? The writing is awesome, no need to say more about how great it is, just leave it alone. The only problem The writing is so little that I can understand it. You can't run away halfway ()

I feel like the author is good at portraying characters. When I played Porridge, I was the Great Khan, and the plot was basically skipped. I only knew that one of Bozhuska's sons died. It can be said that the image of Geer in this book completes the weak impression in my mind. Come on, author, more updates ()

At first I refused when I saw the label on the cover, but with Longmen in the name, I looked at it with a trying attitude, and then I realized that it turned out to be a wonderful Ark fanfic. It is recommended to change the cover to one related to Ark, so that people can tell that it is an Ark fanfic as soon as they come in.

The writing is good, but as I get older, most of Tomato's works have become disdainful. This novel is a stream of consciousness. The description angle is erratic and arbitrary. It shows the inner heart from the interaction between a person next to "me" and "me". This book surprised me the first time I read a novel in a long time [face covering], and the last one was "The Dust of History". I also hope that the author's writing will get better and better [Like][Like][Like]

After more than a year, I finally finished this book. I have read this book twice. The first time I was afraid that the progress I was about to catch up would make my days feel like years, so I saved it until I finished reading it today. It has been a long time, and I have almost forgotten a lot of the content of this book, but the touching feeling at that time still remains in my heart. In my mind, I wrote a book review and wrote many, many words to record my feelings and shock at that time. Unfortunately, I couldn't find it. Maybe it was just a dream. But I was still very moved after reading it again. Maybe one day, when I have completely forgotten him, I will read it again and see the story of Aning.

Everything is good, but the introduction tag of the god of war's son-in-law is embarrassing [face covering]

I was a little confused when I first read it, but when the story unfolded, the various plots were very exciting, and the author's writing style did not show that he was a newcomer at all. It is recommended that those who are just starting to read the book first read the first volume (a total of 25 chapters) before deciding whether to continue reading.

Gua! Can this book destroy most of the books in the book? Absolutely, easily! Because the author of this book is just like that, a powerful character, Aning God of War, we love you so much!

I have read 50 chapters so far. It's okay, it's a new book after all, so give it five stars for encouragement. Some advice for new book lovers: You need to have a certain understanding of the plot of Porridge (for example, you have read the plot or read the fan fiction). The pace of the plot is relatively fast, and many interludes and flashbacks are used in the middle, which will make the plot jump to a certain extent. It is recommended to take a long time to read it. The first-person perspective is rare and cannot be read from an omniscient perspective, which makes it more difficult to read and, well, to write. If the writing fails later, I will revise the comment again.

The portrayal of the characters is really meticulous. The emotions of the characters are expressed to the extreme with their inner thoughts, and the words they blurt out directly touch the soul. Everyone has desires or obsessions deep in their hearts. Each character changes under the unchangeable fact. The plot is slowly revealed to us like fragments, but they are interlocking. The plot design is very good, and the writing style is beyond praise. It is far ahead. The author is really willing to spend his time polishing a good piece of jade for everyone to appreciate. Finally, I wish this book will get better and better, and I hope more people can read it.

It's very interesting, and the first-person writing is very attractive.

Just like the one above, I was a bit confused when I read it, but the rest is very exciting and interesting. It's different from other fanfics I've seen before. I give it a five-star rating.

Overall rating S! You are just around the corner to become a ring master!

Generally speaking, whether a book is good or not depends on the quality of the work itself, but whether this book is good or not depends on the quality of its readers [face covering] [OK] I finished the fourth volume in school and then read the whole book again. I admit that this is the best Arknights fanfic I have seen so far. The kids are really good looking

You know, if Xiaobai reads too much, reading this kind of Riddler might be a kind of neutralization (

Yes, it would be nice if the book cover had a brighter and more beautiful one. It would be better to change the font of the book title to a larger and more obvious font. I also hope that the author can interact more with readers and increase its popularity and activity, so that if it is good now, it might be interesting in the future.

Look, it's obviously an Ark fanfic, but who are you as the author in God of War's Son-in-law [face covering] [OK]

First person, Riddler, Knife, support!

Before school started, I read another article about porridge, which was quite good.

It's rare to see a book with a first-person perspective and a good plot, so keep up the good work! [Cool][OK][laughing evilly]

A novel perspective, excellent writing, and an interesting plot. Apart from being a bit foggy at first, the rest of it is very interesting. There's nothing good to say, it just looks good, but it's a pity that the traffic is relatively low, otherwise it would definitely be a big hit.

Okay, good, okay.

The author has said that his purpose in writing this book is to let real people die in the book, so I have concerns about what I wrote earlier and it is more reserved. But I like real things, so I don't care how it is written, and it is good. As for the following story, well, these people and things are fictitious, so they are very straightforward. Feel free to express your feelings and write down your own opinions. Since it's not for profit, I'm happy to support it.

Has a Riddler charm

Very good, really, very touching

So depressing, but beautiful